Requested ASYA (KaBhi) OS: Feeling Slightly Greenish - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
Awesome blossom love it to the bit fantastic os
And that girl helena lol 😆 asad's confession in classroom oh my i so loved it 😳
Beautifully written 😃
And the ending was superb!!
It was just perfect!! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
It was beautiful, cute,sweet,romantic with even jealousy party in it.Ahhh!I loved that.In short a perfect package.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
finally un resd my comments 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
That was another beautiful OS.. ❤️

You really should write more.. 😃

Thanks for the pm.. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: MrMrsAsyaKhan


HEY THERE BEAUTIFUL GIRL! Jas right? Sorry I dont know your name. Firstly, are you serious? I havent PM'd you anything? You have been supporting all of my writing since forever.

Thank you so much for that wonderful comment, I'm sat at my lunch break at work with the biggest smile on my face ever! I love how you go through the story bit by bit. Thank you for all your kind words, I really really appreciate it. Itt has honestly just made my day.

And I know, my FF's are depressing as heck. Loool! I'm glad you enjoy them, I will try and write more as soon as I can get some time to breathe.

Fari and her emotional blackmail. Looll. Aha, she has given me a list and you'll have more coming. I honestly love you for this comment. Thank you for taking the time to read and leave some feedback. Very much appreciated. I'm short for words right now but honestly. Thank you for your contstant support.

May God bless you always. I'll forever remember your kind words and smile. Honestly will motivate me to write. Stay smiling always love.

Much love

(P.S. I got your buddy request, wont miss PMing you)

XOXOXOXOX

Sorry 4 replying late dear was not getting enough time 2 sit back & frame a proper responseEmbarrassed
Yeah JAs that's right. Since my memory is very poor, I guess u did Pmd me few times & yes I m regularly following ur work & M a fan of ur skill since than. As Fari said many times u jugde urself too harshly assuming ur not a good writer I can bring all my frnds here 2 prove u wrong & I will do just that nxt time u see me😆
Btw should I call u Mojo or u can share ur name if u r not uncomfortable wid it😊
& When I saw ur reply d other day it my day I was so happy 2 get a chance 2 have a reply from u & no need 2 thank me at all. I believe talent speaks 4 itself & here u r tremendously talented there is no doubt in it & U just need 2 have faith in urself stay confident & keep doing ur excellent work Every1 who has eye 4 great work will come ur way just like me & Fari did.😉
No ways, yes at times I do feel that d senti portion is too much but when I see it overall I m never disappointed & a story always have both happy & sad phases every story can't b like Rajshri movies btw there also dark clouds of problems come 4 sometime.😆
& I love Fari 4 this She's a sweetheart cuz of her we r getting Excellent work regularly but u don't need 2 stress yes we do wish 2 read ur excellence but u need 2 take it easy so take ur time sweets till than we'll keep re-reading these 2 OS's...can't tell u have already read it so many times...I love u girl U r just Superbly talented never doubt urself We love ur work.
Come on yaar u don't need 2 thank me U earned it wid ur God gifted talent. And more than that I loved 2 get ur feedback will look forward 2 interacting wid u more.😊
Btw have u planed any day in a week or 2 weeks when u will b giving us OS I will keep tab of that dayEmbarrassed😆
Once again Lots of Love 2 u yaara🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: princess101

finally un resd my comments 😃

Tests ho gaye Fari😃
How's u?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: jas91

Tests ho gaye Fari😃
How's u?

Yesss finally thank God now on break for a couple of days at least 😃
I am good been relaxing after exams are over LOL 😆 u????
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
Uff.. This has to be one of my favorite genre!
The teen romance along with a jealous Asad just can't go wrong.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: Avie

That was another beautiful OS.. ❤️


You really should write more.. 😃

Thanks for the pm.. 😊


Thank loves. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Currently no time to write OS's. But I will do soonish again!

Much love <3
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: jas91

Sorry 4 replying late dear was not getting enough time 2 sit back & frame a proper response😳
Yeah JAs that's right. Since my memory is very poor, I guess u did Pmd me few times & yes I m regularly following ur work & M a fan of ur skill since than. As Fari said many times u jugde urself too harshly assuming ur not a good writer I can bring all my frnds here 2 prove u wrong & I will do just that nxt time u see me😆
Btw should I call u Mojo or u can share ur name if u r not uncomfortable wid it😊
& When I saw ur reply d other day it my day I was so happy 2 get a chance 2 have a reply from u & no need 2 thank me at all. I believe talent speaks 4 itself & here u r tremendously talented there is no doubt in it & U just need 2 have faith in urself stay confident & keep doing ur excellent work Every1 who has eye 4 great work will come ur way just like me & Fari did.😉
No ways, yes at times I do feel that d senti portion is too much but when I see it overall I m never disappointed & a story always have both happy & sad phases every story can't b like Rajshri movies btw there also dark clouds of problems come 4 sometime.😆
& I love Fari 4 this She's a sweetheart cuz of her we r getting Excellent work regularly but u don't need 2 stress yes we do wish 2 read ur excellence but u need 2 take it easy so take ur time sweets till than we'll keep re-reading these 2 OS's...can't tell u have already read it so many times...I love u girl U r just Superbly talented never doubt urself We love ur work.
Come on yaar u don't need 2 thank me U earned it wid ur God gifted talent. And more than that I loved 2 get ur feedback will look forward 2 interacting wid u more.😊
Btw have u planed any day in a week or 2 weeks when u will b giving us OS I will keep tab of that day😳😆
Once again Lots of Love 2 u yaara🤗


Actually I am sorry for the late reply. I have read this comment quite a few times, but found it hard to sit down and write a response. You can call me Mojo, my name is Marjana but I do not use it on here.

I write sentimental stuff, maybe I am overly emotional just a depressed person in general LOL Rashri comment made me laugh. True stuff girl! I am glad you see my point here. Idk, I feel like I connect with the much deeper, emotional stuff. But I will be writing some a bit more different soonish, but I cannot guarantee sentimental stuff wont be in there.

Thank you for your kind words always! They make me smile so much. I never reply, not because I am stush, I just do not have time to come on here after work. I am always truly exhausted, I always opt for sleep. But I do read them and cherish them always!

Sorry for not writing any more OS's. Atm, in a writing spree to get all the FF/SS's finished so that I can start my new stories that have been on hold for soo soo long. But will write something soonish. But whatever is posted, will always be a weekend!

Much love XOXOXO

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