Requested ASYA (KaBhi) OS: Feeling Slightly Greenish

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: KeyaHira2
I loved this OS
I was singing Hamari Aduri Kahani in my head when AsYa were in the car
Dude the feels
OMG
I was so beautiful
😭🤗😛
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HEY GIRL HEY!!

I actually missed your comments and your use of "awesomeness".

Even at one point, I was thinking RAHHH with depressing music in the background. I honestly do not know how it got to that. I write too many emotional stuff.

Thank you for your kinds words.

Much love to ya girl! <3

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Azraa01
Really long. But exceptionally brilliant. It was an amazing os

It was too long wasn't it? Aha, thank you for your kind words and thank you for reading. Much love! <3

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: radadolcevida
Another one from you and this is one is beautifull too.
Everything was so perfect and well penned. Her friendship turned to love, it can be classical story but the way you write is indeed great to read and put smile on my face.
especially the last part, when she helped him to say those magical words, emotionally challenged Asad Ahmed Khan and he will always remain 😃
Thank you so much for this beautiful piece and so well written.

Hey there lovely!

Thank you for reading and leaving such kind words. I am glad you enjoyed it. Classical story, I think I am banned from starting any other short stories because I have so many to finish so I kinda put it into this story. Asad Ahmed Khan will forever remain emotionally challenged but every bit charming. I love him too much to put into words.

Thank you again, I really appreciate it.

Much love to you

XOXO

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: -ABI-

LOVE THE GIF. PUT A SMILE ON MY FACE HAHAHA THANK YOU!

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: milinda.shreyz
gawd ! this felf never ending...in a good way...like nice morning dreams he wish not to wake up from !
good work !

It was too long wasn't it? Hahahahaha. Aww thank you for your kind words.

Much love <3

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Missvishtoofani
Wow u write soo wel dear

Thank you lovely! Much love <3

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty
After a long time I read a MOVIE
Adding this to the MOST FAVORITE STORIES list of mine.

HEYHEYYY BEAUTIFUL!!

OMG, that is a huge compliment and too coming from you! Honestly, I really appreciate it. HAWW?! Favourite list? HOW?! Are you sure?!

Thanks girl, you made my day.

Much love

XOXO

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: MayurChan
Awesome Stuff.

Thanks love <3

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: anopama
This is absolutely beautiful
I don't know how u said it was bad
It was brilliant
The wait they realizes their feelings
The way he told her he loves her and she didn't even realizes
And the the end was too funny
Qubool hai through Bluetooth
Love it

Thank you very much for your comment my lovely. You have always supported and read all my horrible stories. Really appreciate it.

I am glad you enjoyed it.

Yeah through Bluetooth because he is emotionally challenged!

Much love <3

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh
Awesome OS
Loved it
Jealousy, a big factor in any love story & same here as well in Asya case. They were best friends & shared everything but didn't realise their love until Karim entered.
What a confession, dictate by zoya as she know that he need it & they sealed the deal.
Thanks for pm

Thank you for your wonderful comment. Aha, Faria requested a jealous Asad and this is all I could think of. Yes, I agree jealousy is a major factor in every love story.

Thanks again, I really appreciate your comment!

Much love.