Requested ASYA (KaBhi) OS: Feeling Slightly Greenish - Page 5

Originally posted by: Amina...

Wow ... Beautiful OS
So sweet ant cute ...
Loved it ...

Originally posted by: kritz4ever

That's awesome

Originally posted by: -shimmer-

i felt like iam watching movie 😉

Originally posted by: jas91

Hi Mojo what an awesome blossom treat u r giving us these days😃

I love u & FAri 4 rqsting u to write such awesome stuff😛

Btw Fari once mentioned u feel ur writing is not good is that true

Cuz if u think that than u shouldn't u r forbidden 2 think it cuz u r absolutely outstanding writer👏👏👏

Some of d very finest writers I have read on this forum

So plz never think that or doubt ur talent

Now 4 OS what 2 say u r toh like anything u'll touch will turn gold😉

All through d OS till d end I felt like I was watching a Hollywood movie

I felt its like some Modern day saga wid too best frnds...1 girl who's fierce bold little tom boyish but super smart & intelligent who adores her BF too much...& 1 boy who's hot as fire super dashing cool dude of college but little shy around girls lol that was unbelievably hilarious🤣

Starting 4 1st scene I was completely into it sold out❤️

Zoe trying 2 set him up even when she doesn't like that girl still just 4 her BF she did😊

& Asad even when he was wid her he was missing Zoe in d hall & comparing if it would b Zoe nxt 2 her she would b eating chocolate awe...I felt if they care so much than why not realise that its them😵

Khair loved how Asad avoided d bimbo as soon as his gang & Zoe entered d hall he has eyes only 4 her actually go out of his seat 2 bring her refreshments😳

& Loved it when Zoe insulted d bimbo saying date is over breakup b4 hookup that's my chita👏

Did I tell I loved their nicknames & d story connected behind it & how they became frnds😊

than came another chocolate boy Kabir who mesmerised Zoe & I was like Zoe that's not d man girl😡😆

but She was goner & has 2 act stupidly can't blame her😆😆

Asad on d other hand knowing about KAbir realised this pain he's feeling is jealousy as he loves her not gastric 🤣

They started getting little hints which lead them 2 discover their feelings😳😉

Loved d dress selection & d last part of car ride & while in d end Zoe realised it & ran back into his arms❤️🤗

I felt like softly hitting back of her head saying see told ya😆

I can't get enough of ur work mojo but I have 2 tell u as much as I like ur FF's I feel these OS's r more fun & entertaining 2 read😛 plz keep writing them & entertaining us...Love u girl...God bless u & ur talent😃 & Fari who keep pestering u 2 write stuff😆...Love u too Fari🤗

PS- want 2 ask do u do PMs if yes than plz send me I m budding u😳

Originally posted by: MrMrsAsyaKhan

OHHH yeah! I remember. But I remembered the gastric thing from Khushi in IPKKND, have you seen that? I didnt know how else to describe his feelings LOOOL

Originally posted by: MrMrsAsyaKhan

This is an OS. But will PM if I write anything else if you want.

And yes I am. You just reminded me how long overdue that update is for Ek Nikaah.