AsYa FF ~The Worst Kind of Betrayal ~ Ch 18(Last) Updated on Pg 75

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Sanjhari

@Sanjhari

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#351

Originally posted by: anopama

I know it is torturing
i asked for early update
as I couldnt wait 12 hrs
now I will have to wait longer for the other
or who knows pia might just surprise us
as she said she has alot of stories in mind
but dont know which to choose
so she might finish this to move on to another exciting one😊😉

right now I m at work

Reach home @3 n then doze off...

So I have to wait for update for 2-3 hours

But tm I have off...so whole day I will keep on waiting...:-(

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#352

R🤗

Unres

Pia the amount of hugs I have given u I think I have crushed u

Love it it was a very beautiful update

Zoya I love you ...I want to belong to you in every way

And he was not willing to take her to bed even when she was ready

Have not seen such a pure simple beautiful confession

The old cynic wants to be improved by her

The humour between them is so cute

So loves cave Asad Amhed Khan he leaves an all important meeting in

Malaysia just so to go stop his love

Love Samar wants to just give him a bear hug for playing Cupid

Glad Zoya came clean with him and told him everything

Love tht he didn't blame her and he was not taking her resignation

Loved how he throw in Zoya resign into convo with Asad

He wasn't even supposed to interrupt Asad but he did

After all it was a life or death situation 😉labour relations

Omg Asad thought she might be pregnant but it was confirmed she is not

So a party tonight where he will show her off to the world

And then a night of now sleep a lot of making up to do after all Asad will be finally coming out of celebacy

But I have a feeling this party might ruin it even before it starts

Keeping my fingers cross

Hopeful

Waiting for more

Lots of love for making romance come alive

Edited by anopama - 10 years ago

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Pia23

@Pia23

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#353

Originally posted by: SanKsgian
Don't know what is wrong with the like button
But I absolutely love how this story is turning
Asad is furious n this shows his love
But why is zoya leaving

Thank you for reading and commenting 😊
Glad u liked this update.
Zoya is leaving because she doesn't want to face Asad.
When she found out Dilshad is his mom, she is worried that once Asad finds out the truth of her being a spy sent by Siddiqui's, he'll hate her. She wants to leave everything behind even Asad whom she has began to love so much 😭

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Joavssk9

@Joavssk9

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#354

gGosh ur surprise update. just read now. the best part confession. muuuah loved it. Samar he is a gem of a person. loving it. awaiting secret to come out. how would be asads reaction now that Samar knew will he tell asad n come in aid for Zoya. curious as hell now. :). keep writing

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fatima30

@fatima30

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#355

Awww Asad confessed!
But Zoya did not tell him about the Siddiquis
That's going to break them up for sure..,,

But his confession was so honest and real...
Waiting for Zoya to say it back now

Thank you for this bonus update xxx

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-ovi-

@-ovi-

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#356

wow beautiful update finally asad and zoya are together I am so happy. asad confession was so beautiful and honest I loved it hope everything goes smoothly but I'm worried about zoya when the truth comes out what will be asad reaction

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#357

Pia

I'm surprised...

I'm so happy...

Thanks for the bonus chapter..

It was a superb part...

Asad I'm falling in love with him...

He was so cute..

N just a simple I love you was so good...

I liked that entire scene at her place...

Let's see what happens at the party..

Maybe Siddiquis will also be present..

Zoya should have told him everything today itself...

Now I don't want Asad to be hurt again..

Again full points to Samar here..

N maybe he will help in making Asad believe Zoya..

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#358

Yay!finaly asad confessd.love it.zoya's reactn was wonderful.
Samar is a true person.
title of the stry hinting tht asad will misundrstnd zoya,bt i wnt zoya herslf tell evrythng 2 asad b4 he get 2 knw 4m outside.
Lets c hw tht siddiqui's spy & thr truth effect asya.
Total in lv with ths stry.full of love & emotion.
Cnt soon.

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Annie

@_Annie_

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#359

OMG...Pia. This part, it so reminds me of Nick and Lauren and honestly you're doing an Ah-maazingg job at portraying AsYa in this.

Hats Off Girl <3

When I had read this earlier in the book, I had literally screamed in joy with happy tears in my eyes. I was so happy and touched at his simple confession. :))

I am eagerly waiting for the scene when he finds out that he had always been the man she's been with and he'll be so overwhelmed that he'll say he wants four daughters with wobbly blue eyes

Girl, you need to update soon. I may have to read the book till then 😉

Take care <3