AsYa FF ~The Worst Kind of Betrayal ~ Ch 18(Last) Updated on Pg 75 - Page 34

Originally posted by: Splash-ASYA

woah.

dilshad is such a stupid person.

left her son just for money.

such a dreadful past he has.

i am soo excited now.

what will zoya do now.

she loves him and wouldnt want anyone to harm asadd.

hope whatever she does is for the betterment of him

and i hope asad doesnt come to know about zoya soo sooon.

and continue ASAP. that will be tomorrow morning i guess lol.

its been now my habbit to open IF daily in the morning as soon as i wake up and read ur update haha..

the update was amazing..

thank u for the pm!

Thanks for this lovely comment
She left him for money and status. Stupid woman 😡
Her cold behavior turned Asad into what he is today 😭
It's good Zoya found out everything
Next chapter is one of the best one's 😛
It's nice to know that you look forward to my updates:)
Will update soon.

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Wonderfully written and a Very Gripping part Dear..( May I know Your Name..if you don't mind me telling. )
Well Asad was Jealous of Samar...I think Samar is playing the Devil here...to actually knock some sense into his Friend...but that was so soo cruel on Asad yaar..
Especially after reading his past part and especially that gift part and how Dilshaad treated it...I really really feel bad for Asad and cannot calculate his pain how he must have felt that after so many years he presented someone again...and that day also it was rejected by Zoya...if this is the treatment everytime...then a Man is Bound to become EMOTIONLESS , ARROGANT & COLD...i know it is hell wrong..but i don't blame him.
That past part was really painful...well written part..and also credit goes to the writer of the BOOK on which this story is based..
I think the MISUNDERSTANDING part is nearing...when Asad will come to know about Zoya and her motive here to work...that will be even more full of drama and emotions..
Can't wait now to read...
Continue soon.

Thanks for this lovely feedback.
I agree with you on everything. Even though Jealots Asad is a treat, I feel really bad for him.
He's going through inner turmoil. He does't know what to do hence taking out his frustration on everyone. Good thing, at least Zoya found out the truth.
His past story was very touching. How can any mother treat her kid like this 😭
Dilshad is solely responsible for the person Asad has become 😡

And yes the entire credit for this beautiful story goes to Judith McNaught 👏
She is one of my favorite Author.

My name is Pia and I live in Los Angeles.
Where are you from? And What is your name?

Originally posted by: kobeb

Omg I'm too excited for next part!! Awesome update continue soon pls :)

Thanks 😊
Glad u liked it.
Will update soon

Originally posted by: iluvasya

Thanks for this lovely feedback.
I agree with you on everything. Even though Jealots Asad is a treat, I feel really bad for him.
He's going through inner turmoil. He does't know what to do hence taking out his frustration on everyone. Good thing, at least Zoya found out the truth.
His past story was very touching. How can any mother treat her kid like this 😭
Dilshad is solely responsible for the person Asad has become 😡

And yes the entire credit for this beautiful story goes to Judith McNaught 👏
She is one of my favorite Author.

My name is Pia and I live in Los Angeles.
Where are you from? And What is your name?

Hey Pia..nice short and sweet name bytheway..
Well My name is Mayur..
I am from India...from the city of Nawabs- Hyderabad.
Coming to your reply...i think in a way directly or indirectly...a woman always have a huge impact and role in moduling a Man...see here in a way i feel the Dilshaad was the reason why Asad is like this emotionless , aloof of any relation and also arrogant...and i guess and hope Zoya will be that woman who will amend him...like i am not getting the word...but in a way heal him...get him on the right path..so that he actually makes himself free from all the cluctches of past and scars of his childhood.

I doesn't mean A Man is dependent on Woman...but the impact is what i am talking about...
Whoaa...i said many things i guess...
Spare me for my blabbering.

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Originally posted by: anopama

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Y don't u surprise us today Pia with and early update

So u r in LA nice and r u in school or work

So have u found ur next novel to write on our beloved Asya

Hope u have

Okay I will give a surprise :)
Give me an hour...I'll update the next chapter
I am a junior in college
I have many stories in mind, so I am debating...it should be really good one 😃
Love u for loving this story so much

Don't know what is wrong with the like button
But I absolutely love how this story is turning
Asad is furious n this shows his love
But why is zoya leaving

Originally posted by: iluvasya

Okay I will give a surprise :)
Give me an hour...I'll update the next chapter
I am a junior in college
I have many stories in mind, so I am debating...it should be really good one 😃
Love u for loving this story so much

sorry for late reply. busy with month end work.. too buzy n no time to even eat.

Zoya going :( n dilshad arrrgggh. that women no heart at all. asad so innocent child and soul .

awaiting for next update

Originally posted by: anopama

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Pia I just want to give u a big🤗

U made me🤣and u made me😭

Omg Samar is just too much he definitely knows hoe to rub salt in the wound

Or as he said scratch a match under Asad ass

Omg poor Asad Marat and Samar just plotting against him

Haha Mary fled thought leaving instructions wher the extingisher is

Omg Samar played well and I applaud👏him

Asad was fuming U give him my sweater and what more

How many lovers do u have with the initial S

Omg Asad jealousy outshines Zoya

He is all over the place seething with rage and contempt

Omg Zoya always lashes back hard

Bedroom Olympic #1 contender

Omg the ice cold behaviour and biting everyone head off

Poor Sanjeev and Mary she is just having fun Watching Asad ready to combust

So the lunch and Zoya learning his past and his torment and the reason he is how he is

Omg her shocked on hearing his mother name

I was surprised when she missed the mention of siddiqui mansion

Poor Asad heart was broken to see his gift given to a maid he worked at 6 yrs old to buy he heartless mother a gift and she give it away

U also planned on redeeming Asad in my eye seeing I hate where he had slept with Zoya

Is tht ur touch or is it in the book😊

So he never ever give a gift to a woman again until Zoya ( well except for Mary and his grandma)

So had to be touched and she did think maybe he did love her

Mary was right he can't stand Zoya right now but he can't seem to keep her out of his eyesight

So glad Zoya had cut her ties with Abbas and now she planned to fully

But the. She is being investigated at work and when they find her truth

And Asad learns it god help her

But it seems she is not sticking around to learn how he will fell after learning she is related to siddiqui

Waiting for approximately another 12 hrs or so

Ps plz don't discuss abt written in the skies (paradise ) as I am still waiting patiently to read the reminder of it in our beloved Asya version

So plz plz don't ruin my suspense and anticipation

I am waiting for it to continue the writer hasn't left she is just taking her sweet time we r at a very critical part of tht story

I am so glad you liked this chapter.
It was funny and emotional one.
You'll love the next chapter
Will be updating real soon. Oh, the part with Ananya where Zoya realises he didn't take her to his girlfriend's house is actually in the book. I didn't add that :)BR]
Sorry Anopama...I didn't realize you were reading Paradise I mean "Written In the skies"
Is that story still continuing 😕
The last time I checked it hasn't been updated for so long.:(