AsYa FF ~The Worst Kind of Betrayal ~ Ch 18(Last) Updated on Pg 75

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Sanjhari

@Sanjhari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#371

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So they are finally in the party

and as I said there will be lot of media covering the party

samar is really very cute I love the way he was teasing asad regarding a kiss and two dozen flowers😆

Everything was going very fine but finally abbas made entry

and he went to see them with his wife

that must be so painful fir asad that he introduce them as mister and Mrs abbas

but not as his mother

Sorry I was so cute when she told him that she knows that the dilshad is his mother

They were getting too much romantically involved and suddenly asad decided to stop because back in his mind he was thinking about her lovers

She was finding him cute and decided to tease him with his own dialogues 😆

awww poor boy I feel for him😆

But when he realized that he is the only man in her life he felt so touch and his love and respect for her increase a thousand times and at that moment he decided to marry her because something less than that would be an insult for her and I love him for his thought and fell in love with again

Again the lovemaking was very nice to describe and there was nothing vulgar about it

I love the update

But after such a happy and nice update I am NOT ready for the upcoming problems in the life

Please do me a favor and tell me how long they going to be separated and how long they going to suffer

I know samar will be the angel who will United again and I want him to pay his real this time also very nicely and quick

Please update soon already waiting for 9:30 😊

By the way 55 more comments and 3 days then you will be a senior member and then we don't have to worry about max number the post 😊

I hope you have already decided which one you're coming up next

Edited by Sanjhari - 9 years ago

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Arpita_Mirage

@Arpita_Mirage

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Posted: 9 years ago

#372

Awesone update..

Asya-Abbas-Dilshad facetoface ..

Loved the update ..

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Avie

@Avie

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#373

That was a beautifl update Pia..

Both of them are really happy being with each other..

Jealous Asad was really cute.. He was so possessive of her..

But there still looms a fear.. How will Asad react when he comes to know about Zoya and her relation with Abbas... I hope Zoya tells him soon enough and he doesn't get to know from anyone else..

Loving the story.. Do write soon and thanks for the PM..

PS:I am from India

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sanarujub

@SanKsgian

Inactive

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Posted: 9 years ago

#374

Omg you are updating so quick
N I love all your updates
Confession and love making was definitely emotional and romantic
Hope everything goes smoothly now

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-ovi-

@-ovi-

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#375

lovely update thanks for the pm

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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#376

That was so intense..two lovers getting together after so long..!
I wonder what will zoya do about siddique's..
Awesome update. .:)
I'm loving it soo much..:)

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

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Posted: 9 years ago

#377

So beautifuly written.
Asya in the party so awsm.
Bt bt bt abbas-dilshad were thr.
Aww!asad was jealous.i love it whn he said he want 4 girls.zoya's expresn was priceless.
In alibaug tht was jst physical relatn of lust bt here ths was asya's lv mking.
Bt in all ths zoya cudnt tell anythng.nw asad watching her as a wife nd zoya again blv him...only u knw hw asad will reactd?hp 4 best.
Cnt soon.

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#378

Hey Pia..
Well I am still studying and preparing myself for a professional course...in accountancy.
Well Read both the chapts...Wonderfully written and very good parts.
Well AsYa* in the calm before the storm are enjoying their time of love and togetherness..
Well you really wrote that whole meeting sequence well...i mean how the counterparts discuss and and also how they secretive they can be.
Coming to Zoya & Samar's part , i guess if Samar have kept her motive hidden from Asad then he really want good for Asad and after conforming that Zoya is not after anything wrong...he kept quiet...and in a way when the truth will be out..he will be the first one to make Asad realise her worth...and motive.
I can soo imagine Asad snapping at Samar and how pissed off he must be during that convo in the conference meet.
Rest AsYa* moments were good..
Dilshad's and Asad face off was also very good.
I think after this Dubai trip of Asad's we may have the revelations coming his way suprising him...
Continue soon..

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#379

Pia

Awesome chapter...

Once again I'm really impressed..

What Samar did fro Asya was really too good..

N the two dozen roses..lol Samar took revenge...

The time they spent with each other was good...and again the jealous Asad was back..

It was too good.

Now he sees her as his wife...

But Zoya still not able to tell him anything n he is off to Dubai...

No problem when he comes here I will tell him😉

Lovely part... Will be waiting till tomorrow morning ..

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fatima30

@fatima30

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#380

Wonderful update
They are so in love it's so sweet
But Zoya didnt tell him about the Siddiquis
That's going to backfire
He's going to be super angry...

Thank you for the PM