OS: Kainath observes an oblivious Mahira and Azaad. - Page 3

Originally posted by: Ethereal.Surbhi

amazing OS
well done
pls write more
thnx

Originally posted by: sageflower7

Loved it ! Love your writing style.

Great stuff !

* sorry for short reply: super busy*

Originally posted by: reenah

You have a great flair for writing.
Love the OS

superb os

I love the perspective. Brilliant point of view.

Keep writing please

Oh thatz Robert browning darling. Never mind !

Originally posted by: milinda.shreyz

Oh thatz Robert browning darling. Never mind !

U know, I agree with FArz. Ur writings are really multiple reading stuffs

Originally posted by: PurpleCrayon

I already googled Robert Browning and learnt he wrote a novel length poem. 12 books it seems.😲

Thank you so much shreya! Ek aur idea abhi abhi 😃

yaa he wrote many other stuffs along with that famous'' ring and the book'' thingy 😆 But I was talking about Pippa Passes. your kainat has Pippa's sunshine spirit and unwavering faith upon her loved ones.

Originally posted by: Aahana.

superb os

you are an awesome writer

mahi fixing azzu's car

both comfortable with each others closeness

aur kainath watching this from far

watching her brother's each and every move

it seemed lik I was in kainath's place watching these 2

lovers who are simply lost in each other

Ahaaan..*listens to Do dil mil rahe hain* Wouldn't that song be so apt here??? So are you another Kainat in the making? I mean...I am the chutter putter types..but u have a keen observation & great sense of humor too.😆😆 I loved this OS for 2 reasons...firstly, the whole scenario was uber cute and hilarious at the same time. Jeez, if this happens, I am gonna deplete my data at one go 😆😆 The parts I liked the best were the way he covered the engine from any possible mishaps...and of course the tucking in if the side mirror😆😆 Now, that was a super thought!!!