OS: Kainath observes an oblivious Mahira and Azaad. - Page 4

Originally posted by: _AmyChoco_

Ahaaan..*listens to Do dil mil rahe hain* Wouldn't that song be so apt here??? So are you another Kainat in the making? I mean...I am the chutter putter types..but u have a keen observation & great sense of humor too.😆😆

@Bold: Why thank you Amy!😳

And I went and listened to the song as I re-read the fic. You were right. It fits perfectly😃

I loved this OS for 2 reasons...firstly, the whole scenario was uber cute and hilarious at the same time. Jeez, if this happens, I am gonna deplete my data at one go 😆😆 The parts I liked the best were the way he covered the engine from any possible mishaps...and of course the tucking in if the side mirror😆😆 Now, that was a super thought!!!

Yay! You picked up on the subtle humor and it makes me so very happy! *Hugs*😃

Secondly, you have involved Kainat in the whole thing.. These shows fail miserably in one aspect- kehne ke liye they have a bunch of characters, but the relationships per se are not shown in depth. Most shows some glycerine or funny moments initially and then the characters are just dummies.

I've always thought that good secondary characters make the story all the more interesting. Kainath seemed like a very good candidate for the job of an observer. Nothing would make her happier than seeing her brother happy. Plus she's the baby sister and when baby sisters know their big brothers have a soft corner for someone. Unki khair nahi. Merciless teasing. I had that picture in mind while i wrote this.😆

A very good job indeed!!😃

P.S : U sure u got only one funny bone ...and the rest 205 are normal???😆😆

I try😛

Wait wait...eeks...how did I miss it?

The best moment for me was Mahira turning Azaad's chin to her😆

Mission accomplished! I was hoping that scene wouldn't be too cliche. So so happy you liked it

I hope you're feeling better. Thank you so much for such a detailed reply.!

Crap ! I cant find your new os link ! post it here !! now !!!!!

Originally posted by: milinda.shreyz

Crap ! I cant find your new os link ! post it here !! now !!!!!

Originally posted by: PurpleCrayon

I was referring to this one in gitas post 😆 She hasn't read it yet. I am very touched by your enthusiasm though😃

lah ! u mentioned writing something new...of saying thank u and all ! i thought u already penned that down 😆so all this rushing and gushing !!😆

Originally posted by: milinda.shreyz

lah ! u mentioned writing something new...of saying thank u and all ! i thought u already penned that down 😆so all this rushing and gushing !!😆

Amy !
u have written such a lovely review !! and yes I agree do dil mil rahe haii magar chupke chupke is the appropriate bg score of this os !
oh here comes the idea ! l shall read it once more with the song playing in my headphone !
brilliant !!

Originally posted by: PurpleCrayon

I've thought it up. Haven't put it down on paper yet😳

humn ! thatz coz u r studying ( apparently😉)

Originally posted by: milinda.shreyz

Amy !
u have written such a lovely review !! and yes I agree do dil mil rahe haii magar chupke chupke is the appropriate bg score of this os !
oh here comes the idea ! l shall read it once more with the song playing in my headphone !
brilliant !!

Originally posted by: PurpleCrayon

Ok so I listened to the song while I read it too. The part where Azaad looses track of what Mahira was saying coincided perfectly with the lines "Jadoo kar raha hai asar, chupke chupke"😆

U took Amy's idea or thought about it while writing ?

@ blue : oh yeh ! thatz your namuna of studing 😆
but i understand...whenever I see hubby deep into those terribly depressing looking book, I shudder and thank Bhagwanji I didnot pass Medical entrance ( parents forced me to sit for it...I personally had not an iota of motivation, hell ! blood and smells of dettol, phenyl make me dizzy😆)

Originally posted by: milinda.shreyz

U took Amy's idea or thought about it while writing ?

@ blue : oh yeh ! thatz your namuna of studing 😆
but i understand...whenever I see hubby deep into those terribly depressing looking book, I shudder and thank Bhagwanji I didnot pass Medical entrance ( parents forced me to sit for it...I personally had not an iota of motivation, hell ! blood and smells of dettol, phenyl make me dizzy😆)