ok ! 1st one was all dreamy gushing after 1st reading ! haha, that felt really good u know...which a goofy grin and fuzzy warm jolly good feeling 😆 it feels great(and young) to behave silly, u know !
Time for actual review now !
many a good tale has been better told from third person's perspective.ask your friends, they will provide more colorful descriptions of all ur (mis)adventures with tiny details u never even noticed 😆. now, u proved that once more, in style !!
and wat a excuse u invented ! fixing the car !! lolz with Mahira volunteering to fix Azad's car ?? under Mr. Independant's ministration...poor guy cant even fix his own problems, gadi kya khak fix karega !! and they have come so close...so comfortable with each other's intimate presence even without realizing. Aah thatz the beauty of fresh love ! Sigh !! Those were days !☺️
I love the ambiance of your story...so calm bright and all characters so agreeable ( even that drat Amad)...And Kainat, the essential cute well-wisher younger sister, friendly and mischievous ! I got transported to that garden,felt like sitting beside her and giggling.ur descriptions were so alive,and I could see the whole scene acting in my head...Kainat pretending to read while all the while having grt fun at expense of his serious older bro and those two blissfully unaware of the world.
Lovely is an understatement and Magical not really touches the bar ! let me say u hav a spread of Robert Brownian optimism through out the os...It has delighted the eternal hopeful in me !
once tasted your cookies , we r now greedy for more !
Naagin 7
Anupamaa
