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Posted: 9 years ago
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see what I dug out !
This kainat observing 1st blossoms of AZMA romance reminded me of something I wrote long back.
A parud scene from 3rd person's perspective !!
U were not on the forum then, so probably didnt read !
Try it. Itz not as good as urs, ofcourse but not very bad either, I mean if u excuse my bad paragraphing and wrong font selection 😃
What these old eyes saw
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks for writing a great os it's totally worth reading again please write more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bookaholic1988

thanks for writing a great os it's totally worth reading again please write more



Thank you so much for reading! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: PurpleCrayon


Ok so I listened to the song while I read it too. The part where Azaad looses track of what Mahira was saying coincided perfectly with the lines "Jadoo kar raha hai asar, chupke chupke"😆

Yesss...😃That is a beautiful song..Still hasn't lost its charm even after so many years!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: _AmyChoco_


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Yesss...😃That is a beautiful song..Still hasn't lost its charm even after so many years!!




It was nice reading the fic with the song in the back ground. No matter what pace you read it at, lyrics seem to line up with the scenes 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh my this is such a beautiful piece of writing!
I could imagine it all. Azaad's expressions, Mahira's cuteness, the two being in each other's company while Kainat observed them stealthily. The way Azaad would listen to Mahira blabbering while he's actually lost in her instead of listening to what she was saying. So Azaad and Mahira like 😆
You are a great writer! The way you described the scene,the atmosphere and the character's expressions/actions is brilliant!
I really enjoyed reading this and I would love to see a scene like this in the show.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ishq-Dua

I really enjoyed reading this and I would love to see a scene like this in the show.



ab yeh wish toh poora hone sey rahe😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: _AmyChoco_

Yesss...😃That is a beautiful song..Still hasn't lost its charm even after so many years!!


oh yeh ! 90s and early years of 2K were glorious days of hindi movie and album songs ! now toh all drowned with yo yo mania and the hub dub his kith and kins produce...arijit started well but now same type of song lyrics, melody and way of presentation has made me wary of him !
haye kahan kho gaye kumar saanu, udit narayan, sonu nigam, kk , shaan ...
glorious days are over guys !😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: milinda.shreyz

Yesss...😃That is a beautiful song..Still hasn't lost its charm even after so many years!!


oh yeh ! 90s and early years of 2K were glorious days of hindi movie and album songs ! now toh all drowned with yo yo mania and the hub dub his kith and kins produce...arijit started well but now same type of song lyrics, melody and way of presentation has made me wary of him !
haye kahan kho gaye kumar saanu, udit narayan, sonu nigam, kk , shaan ...
glorious days are over guys !😭
I soo agree!! My favs are the one u mentioned. I like Abhijeet too. Arijit is getting quite monotonous.The last song of his I really loved and still play many times is Khamoshiyaan. Hearing Kumar Sanu in DLKH was so soothing. In fact, I can listen to his voice in "Prem's theme song"which has no lyrics all day long. Hub goes mad when I play that!!😆😆 Sonu was MIA..but he came back with Sapna Jahaan ⭐️ Now most of the singers are just few songs wonders. A blink and u miss. Sometimes , I cant even differentiate the singers cuz all sound the same!! Speaking of yo yo, did u listen to the "Dheere dheere" version? #HEADDESK
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OMmmggg I loooveeed it!
I was in awe reading it... So I read it again and then again and again! This was just brilliant! Wish they had something like this on the show! Loll


Keep writing dear! You're awesome!

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