ASAD AND ZOYA STORY: A THOUSAND YEARS PART 4 ON PAGE 38 - Page 5

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

I think before reading the chappy even
i had this gut feeling that ths stry is worth reading.the title attracted me and i was finding tym and a secluded place to go ahead with ths. And m happy and glad that i decided to read ths.
The title!Is ths a song? Or a poem?

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

The opening lines were catchy enough to connect me! And after that came an exceptional piece of writing! That para was mirroring my exact thoughts! It was like i wrote it myself! So much brilliant and honest 👏
And that para did create an excellent image of you
and i was so sure thereafter that ths girl has an awesome writing potential

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

The connect was strong when u described the park scene and i myself am fond of maple trees so it was like a treat to read ;) and for a nature lover like me to read the scenic image of florence and even sydney u've drawn...is like a relaxation period.sachi maza agaya 8-)

the lines zoya read was wonderful and those eyes and she walking and picking the leaf was fairly imaginable
the best thing was ur deep and pure descriptions abt her emotions and feelings and even his thoughts were beautifully penned 👏
GOOD JOB!

Originally posted by: asya7

he he😆

Don't worry. Take your time. By the way my name is titir😃

Originally posted by: asya7

Thanks for making so much efforts to read this😃 I am also very glad that you decided to give this story a chance.

I am very happy to know that you liked the title. It is a song which is taken from the movie twilight. I recently heard this song and instantly fell in love with this song and felt like this was just telling the story of my story. So decided to use it😃

Originally posted by: asya7

Thanks a lot. I really can't say how overwhelmed I am feeling right now after reading this. This is a huge complement for someone like me who has just started writing. It really means a lot😃

Originally posted by: asya7

I always feel that a story can be called good when it can make you see the scenes playing in front of your eyes and I am more than happy to know that I have at least made an effort to do this.

I wanted the reader's to feel the nature and their feelings , and so this words coming from you means a lot😃