ASAD AND ZOYA STORY: A THOUSAND YEARS PART 4 ON PAGE 38 - Page 6

Nicely done

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

<font color="#000033" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Beautiful chapter and put smile on my face. Your first paragraph make me think a lot and give me some hope for the future.</font>

<font color="#000033" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">The chapter was really well written and well execute, you should continue this story, it had a lot of potential and just give time to readers, the story need to be unfold and for the upcoming chapter, the view and comment will increase for sure. And plus, if this story it's close to your heart, you should continue and gave justice to your inspiration.</font>

<font color="#000033" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">I really love this story already and will wait to see how they will recognize each other, even if sometimes we can cross our soulmate path without recognize it or ignoring the signal.</font>

<font color="#000033" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Hope to read soon</font>

hey rada
I am a huge fan of your story the crossing times and this comment coming from you means a lot to me. I cant say how happy i am after having you as my reader. Thank you very much for accepting my request and for this lovely comment. I will surely try keep my confidence and do justice to the story and hope to make you fall in love with story more and more in future. Sorry for late reply. Actually i wanted to give a good reply without any hurry and just got the right time 😃

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

hey titir 😃
glad to meet u
whr r u frm and wat do u do? Have u wrote somethng else? Wud like to read

glad to meet you too surbhi 😃
I am from west bengal and i am studying in eleventh class.
I am writing another story right now on asya named when only love remains. Have a look if you are interested. Hope you will like it.
Where are you from and what do you do? 😊

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

well yes now that u told me
i listened to that song and m falling for that song
and while it was playing i read it again
tremendous efforts done
i can't help adoring the way u write 😆

thanks 😆
I am glad you found it worth admiring 😊

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed

Absolutely beautiful, I loved the poems

Really good start to a really good concept

Look forward to reading this

hey saima di. I hope i can call you that? 😊
I have read all your stories you have written till now and you are one of my most favourite writers . I love all your stories. I have never commented but have loved and hit the like button for each and every chapter of your stories without a
miss. So this comment of yours means a lot. I am far more than glad to have you here. Thanks for liking and commenting. Hope you will like it in future also 😃

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

The flow the chapter brought was obviously frm the lines of the title u added between the cropped instances.i must say great sense of editting. Its gonna be intense and deep love i guess.the wow thing i found was the bonding between their souls.zoya sitting in florence thinking the maple leaf was god's sign and asad sitting in australia remembering her pained eyes gets a maple leaf and he took it with him.i always love these kinds of bonds and i seriously adore how u wrote it

actually the flow was decided from before and the song fitted it perfectly. So I just merged it in between according the situation. I am glad that you liked the editing. Yes this is going to be deep and intense love and the story is also going to be intense and mysterious. I also love this kind of bondings and I am more than happy to know that you found It worth adoring😃

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

Asya have a past i guess whr asad must hv confessed and i am really curious to know what is zoya's pain.i loved it when she was also scared gazing in those eyes and ur skills made the magic happen in althruout the chapter

thank you very much surbhi. I am more than happy to know that you are curious about this story. All your questions will be answered as the story progress. Stay tuned 😉

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

Asad has dadi and zoya? Is she alone?
so fate is gonna give them second chance?
Arshi ki shaadi me asya wud meet and m excited fr ths stry to unfold.
Pls continue asap.i have exams bt i wud be giving anythng to read ths one if u update ths month
coz m like u...exam mujhe reading and writing ke affliction se dur ni rakh sakti 😆
HAve sent u buddy request
pls pm me when u update

I am really overwhelmed with your response. And I also would be giving anything to update soon if I have readers like you 😆 😉

The update is coming this week. Hope some of your answers you will get and will also like it. Thanks a lot for the buddy request🤗

Originally posted by: katkaif55

Awesomely written

thank you 😃

Originally posted by: anopama

Very nice

It will be an interesting read

I have came across the poem

But not the story

So we know asya r seeing each other eyes the pain the hurt

So what were they reincarnated or memory loss what

So they will come face to face at their BFF wedding

Let's see what happens

Continue thanks for pm

But u have quiet a few story to update and a few u started but never continued

thanks a lot for this lovely comment. I have updated my other story too. Please check. And i am definately going to continue this one 😃