ASAD AND ZOYA STORY: A THOUSAND YEARS PART 4 ON PAGE 38 - Page 4

I think before reading the chappy even
i had this gut feeling that ths stry is worth reading.the title attracted me and i was finding tym and a secluded place to go ahead with ths. And m happy and glad that i decided to read ths.
The title!Is ths a song? Or a poem?

The opening lines were catchy enough to connect me! And after that came an exceptional piece of writing! That para was mirroring my exact thoughts! It was like i wrote it myself! So much brilliant and honest 👏
And that para did create an excellent image of you
and i was so sure thereafter that ths girl has an awesome writing potential

The connect was strong when u described the park scene and i myself am fond of maple trees so it was like a treat to read ;) and for a nature lover like me to read the scenic image of florence and even sydney u've drawn...is like a relaxation period.sachi maza agaya 8-)

the lines zoya read was wonderful and those eyes and she walking and picking the leaf was fairly imaginable
the best thing was ur deep and pure descriptions abt her emotions and feelings and even his thoughts were beautifully penned 👏
GOOD JOB!

The flow the chapter brought was obviously frm the lines of the title u added between the cropped instances.i must say great sense of editting. Its gonna be intense and deep love i guess.the wow thing i found was the bonding between their souls.zoya sitting in florence thinking the maple leaf was god's sign and asad sitting in australia remembering her pained eyes gets a maple leaf and he took it with him.i always love these kinds of bonds and i seriously adore how u wrote it

Asya have a past i guess whr asad must hv confessed and i am really curious to know what is zoya's pain.i loved it when she was also scared gazing in those eyes and ur skills made the magic happen in althruout the chapter

Asad has dadi and zoya? Is she alone?
so fate is gonna give them second chance?
Arshi ki shaadi me asya wud meet and m excited fr ths stry to unfold.
Pls continue asap.i have exams bt i wud be giving anythng to read ths one if u update ths month
coz m like u...exam mujhe reading and writing ke affliction se dur ni rakh sakti 😆
HAve sent u buddy request
pls pm me when u update

Originally posted by: jas91

Yippee that's such a great news😛

just 4 days away we r gonna celebrate 4 sure

& don't know how many times I reminded u not 2 thank me but u don't listen 2 me main naraaz ho jaungi sachi

& never underestimate urself u have great talent & future & r a very nice human being as well😊

he he😆

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover

wow such an awesome start... this is really an amazing concept... i m all in to read more soonish...

p.s huggie apple for suggesting this story🤗

Thanks a lot. I am really glad to know that you liked it 😃

Originally posted by: riddhi1206

Amazing start

Awesome

The way u give some introduction abt the story without even starting the story really amazes me

N the environment is excellently penned

Amazing

Awesome start

ArShi too...

I m.really here after long...I rarely read or comment...I did n I m glad...

Anyways this was excellent

Though I m getting intuitions abt the plot...

Something like reborn thing I guess...not sure...like something related to the previous life...

Anyways excited for it

Lovely

Superb

Beautiful

Lovely

P.s Ashi!!! Congo sweety!! Chal ab party bhi Dede !! Kaha hai tu re?

Di thanks for using the banner in the story...it really felt shooo goood

ridding 🤗

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

Okay m unressing here!
M having a lot of thngs running in my mind right now
have to tell u so much and idk frm whr shud i start
let me knw ur name first 😆

he he😆