SANITY - An OS series (Readers' request accepted) OS#10 PG100 6/12 - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: jas91

Apni huggie bestie🤗
Srah fantastic concept & execution👏
Asad himself gone though same situation in childhood
but due 2 Dillu he got a better life fulfilling his dream 2 join army
Very well written awesome👏

🤗
Thank u so much jas
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: ChocoBerry

Lovely OS Srashti. Loved it. Want more such OS 's from you. You are a very good writer dear 👏


Originally posted by: cutie15

1st os.. loved it..:)
Cant wait to read more.. I'm so excited about this..
amazing oses from an amazing writer.. :)



Originally posted by: gowtu

Lvly os... I hv never read anything lk dis...
Wonderful shot..
Love it...


Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

It was wonderful OS
Asad rescued the children's from goons. Like the humeira & zoya scene at end
Left in together, hand in hand as they are meant to be.
Thanks for pm


Originally posted by: shailu123

Wow awesome OS u did very well👏


Originally posted by: aseelashah

its a wonderful OS with a wonderful banner

Srash baby its brilliantly written update

I loved every part of it

thank u so much for ur pm

Now I am lack with ideas

When I will be ready I will surely send u pm

Paru darling u done a wonderful job in the banner

Loved it so much


Originally posted by: anopama

Wow this was sad and heartbreaking

Child labour a serious problem
Thank god Zoya got asad help
This was his past
Aww he used to admire her
Nice ending


Thank u lovely readers...my work is done if u all liked it
Choco cutie and aseela di...muaah!!😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

I hate u for not pming me Doc. Don't talk to me.


Sowiie...won't repeat it again😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: nilusoni

very nice

thanx for pm


Originally posted by: Sanjhari

This is really very nice

You have beautifully written on this serious subject
For the first time I have read asya story in army atmosphere
Please continue soon



Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Shrasti absolutely amazing work..

The idea too was awesome..

It was very well written..

Something new that I read..


Originally posted by: Kripa2015

awesome os
very well written
pls pm me next time


Originally posted by: fatima30

This was really well written
And I loved it!

Thank you


Originally posted by: suganti

interesting os.

love it.


Thanks to all my readers
Glad u all liked it
It was new for me too but u guys are awesome... Always praising my petty work
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: NaughtyRiya

awesome os i like it very much nice concept thanks for pm dear paru di ur banner is beautiful gud job


Thank u guys
Hope u will read the further updates too
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: swapno

Srashti 🤗

Great decision...!
I love the name Sanity!!
You took a big step in order to bring the problem of the society in the lime light through AsYa...
I really appreciate it and Aseela di indeed did a great job by asking it.
And you do the total justice of it.
I just loved it...!
Continue soon with new surprises!
Thank you so much😊


🤗
Lub u sadia
I am glad that u liked it
Ashlesha asked for it😉
Will write soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Awesome OS Srash

Awesome Concept Aslesha
Loved d banner
Loved d story which showed d evils of child labour

THANKS DEAR

I did not got one thing. For wat Zoya did not back up 4m d goons for which they kidnapped Humeira? Was it for some tax or hafta?

NO ASSUME IT AS SHE WAS THREATENING THEM TO REVEAL THEIR BAD DEEDS

4m which serial u showed d kids in ur banner?

NO IDEA...PARU DID IT😆

Loved how Asad consoled n comforted Zoya n promising her dat he will find Humeira soon
Asad is an army man n Zoya a teacher who also teaches his niece Nahid in her school n Asad seemed to have crush on her 4m earlier
ZoHu r orphans
Asad's past was terrible. Those people who tortured him n other kids deserve severe punishments

YA RIGHT😡

Loved how Asad rescued d kids
Luks like Asad is very strong as he was more than enough for 4 men

THODA FILMY THA I KNOW 🤣

Love how ZoHu reunited
Loved d last scene of ZoHu n AsYa holding hands(which indicated d start of their love story)

YA YOU GOT IT RIGHT😊

Thanks for appreciation juhi
Replies for u in bold😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98
Plz see my 2 PMs on ur other username. I gave my ideas for OS😊.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#99
Anything about asya i would read...

maybe the funny ones..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Plz see my 2 PMs on ur other username. I gave my ideas for OS😊.


Ya I saw...I liked them
Will work on them soon

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