SANITY - An OS series (Readers' request accepted) OS#10 PG100 6/12

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#81

Wow this was sad and heartbreaking

Child labour a serious problem

Thank god Zoya got asad help

This was his past

Aww he used to admire her

Nice ending

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Sanjhari

@Sanjhari

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#82

This is really very nice

You have beautifully written on this serious subject

For the first time I have read asya story in army atmosphere

Please continue soon

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#83

I hate u for not pming me Doc. Don't talk to me.

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#84

Shrasti absolutely amazing work..

The idea too was awesome..

It was very well written..

Something new that I read..

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Kripa2015

@Kripa2015

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#85

awesome os
very well written
pls pm me next time

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fatima30

@fatima30

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#86

This was really well written
And I loved it!

Thank you

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

@swapno

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#87

Srashti 🤗

Great decision...!

I love the name Sanity!!

You took a big step in order to bring the problem of the society in the lime light through AsYa...

I really appreciate it and Aseela di indeed did a great job by asking it.

And you do the total justice of it.

I just loved it...!

Continue soon with new surprises!

Thank you so much😊

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Ankita

@AisiDeewangi

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#88

awesome os i like it very much nice concept thanks for pm dear paru di ur banner is beautiful gud job

Edited by NaughtyRiya - 10 years ago

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ChipChipiBhaalu

@OriginalJuhi_04

Trailblazer

+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#89

Awesome OS Srash

Awesome Concept Aslesha

Loved d banner

Loved d story which showed d evils of child labour

I did not got one thing. For wat Zoya did not back up 4m d goons for which they kidnapped Humeira? Was it for some tax or hafta?
4m which serial u showed d kids in ur banner?

Loved how Asad consoled n comforted Zoya n promising her dat he will find Humeira soon

Asad is an army man n Zoya a teacher who also teaches his niece Nahid in her school n Asad seemed to have crush on her 4m earlier

ZoHu r orphans

Asad's past was terrible. Those people who tortured him n other kids deserve severe punishments

Loved how Asad rescued d kids

Luks like Asad is very strong as he was more than enough for 4 men

Love how ZoHu reunited

Loved d last scene of ZoHu n AsYa holding hands(which indicated d start of their love story)

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: Shubh007
Awesome & Interesting OS...👏

Just Love It...😊

Every Scene Was Mind- Blowing...👍🏼

Every Scene Was Portrait Beautifully...⭐️

Update Next OS Soon...😃

Thanks shubh😃

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