SANITY - An OS series (Readers' request accepted) OS#10 PG100 6/12

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Gulaabo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
well written...

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Gulaabo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: MayurChan
Very GooD O.S Srash...
I have never read anything on a Army-AsYa story..., maybe a Sad O.S...but yes...this is Unique and Different.
Wish to read more.

Thanks mayur

I haven't wrote something like this before

Glad u liked this

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Gourav

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Awesome & Interesting OS...👏

Just Love It...😊

Every Scene Was Mind- Blowing...👍🏼

Every Scene Was Portrait Beautifully...⭐️

Update Next OS Soon...😃

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jas91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: ashiii333
Res for our world famous gang

Affu Aarzo Jas Aroo Yumi h.e.n.a Adi

Apni huggie bestie🤗

Srah fantastic concept & execution👏

Asad himself gone though same situation in childhood

but due 2 Dillu he got a better life fulfilling his dream 2 join army

Very well written awesome👏

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Lovely OS Srashti. Loved it. Want more such OS 's from you. You are a very good writer dear 👏

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sj_qh_kabhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#76

1st os.. loved it..:)
Cant wait to read more.. I'm so excited about this..
amazing oses from an amazing writer.. :)

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Alone111

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Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Lvly os... I hv never read anything lk dis...
Wonderful shot..
Love it...

Edited by gowtu - 10 years ago

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Asif

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Posted: 10 years ago

#78

It was wonderful OS
Asad rescued the children's from goons. Like the humeira & zoya scene at end
Left in together, hand in hand as they are meant to be.
Thanks for pm

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Shaila Banu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#79

Wow awesome OS u did very well👏

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aseela sha

@aseelashah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#80

its a wonderful OS with a wonderful banner

Srash baby its brilliantly written update

I loved every part of it

thank u so much for ur pm

Now I am lack with ideas

When I will be ready I will surely send u pm

Paru darling u done a wonderful job in the banner

Loved it so much

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