New Asya FF....Mere Humnawah Part *1-5* link to nxt thread given - Page 9

Originally posted by: ashiii333

res

unres

sab se pehly to party tym 🥳

meri bestie writer ban gayi

ab bata u nervous kyun thi????

IF ke sab writers ko deeply study karti hai

rzlt to acha aana hi tha na 😳

abhi update tym haan

I loved it

kya intro diya

chaa gayi 🤗

my fav part is u AAK ko kya describe kiya M.A 😳

sooo Zoe filmstar n AAK kya hai 😉

hope nxt tym Asa bhi Zoe ko dekhy

yeh song kounsy zamaney ka mai nahi suna 😆

abhi na apni skills pe bharosa rakh n mast si updates dy

chal me bhaaging haan

love u too ❤️

hug apni tyt vali 🤗

ahaa u loved my writing style love u

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover

Res

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

ye mera resh
ahm my first unres after months...
did i tell u b4 that i m so happy vd u becoming a writer ...
luv u my puttar...
u hv beautifully written it...
mumma is so proud of u ...
zoya is an actress n totally lattoo on the handsome stranger wo b pehli mulaqat mai hi...
ab ye handsome stranger zoya ko kb dekhega...
next update soon ok...
luv u n miss u too
obbah

Mumma I love u so much ❤️❤️

updt coming in a while I hope u like that too😳😳

Originally posted by: Persiko

Mumma superb start...

I loved it...


Zoya is so hard working and kind...

Continue soon

Originally posted by: BelleAme

Mera bhi res

unres kab karna hai tharki papa😲

Originally posted by: Infatuation.

Res!


OMG Its such a pleasant moment to see you as a writer Di!



I always secretly wished to read a piece of work from you! Glad you joined the board of writing.



Hope we receive regular updates..


All the Best!


Unres!


That's Wow, Wow Wow!!!


I completely love this... Beautifully penned and emotions well mentioned.


The pretty actress falling for a Handsome stranger.. Swooned by his handsomeness and now in his dreamland!


Interesting!


After all the stranger is AAK so everyone would do fall on knees.


I wanna know if Asad noticed Zoys still or not!


Continue soon di, Completely hooked.


Now I need you to update the next part soon.


Thanks for pm.

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

res 😃
Unres
When I saw your post, I rubbed my eyes many times to be sure that I wasn't dreaming. I am so proud of you that you decided to write. you have all my blessing sweetheart, this is your Guruji who is talking to you 😆. And again thank you so much for your comment about me, it touched me deep inside , really and I mean it. even if I know you will say : don't say thank you again. 😃 But what to do, it's just my way to tell you what my heart felt when you mention me. First, the way you write your comments and the way you describe other stories, show that you are a talented person.

awe I m so happy Rada ur comnt is so sweet & filled wid love🤗 & I let u decide yeh dream pleasant tha ya nightmare😆😆 shukriya guruji 4 ur blessings😃 & about d dedication I always decided that if I will ever write any story it will b dedicated 2 all those wonderful writers I have loved in d forum.😃

So coming to your first chapter:

When I read this chapter, I had a beautiful feeling, like I was in a dream. This chapter was really poetic and when I closed my eyes, i can see him as a slow motion (I don't know why 😃).

hehe sachi that was d most cute review I got but nobody mention d sweet pup pouts 😒

Everything was really perfect and well described. I love that you write first in Zoya's pov, it show how complex her life and personallity will be. I am really curious to know how you are going to introduce him in her life : as a new producer, new actor, or business man etc...

u'll know in nxt part I hope I don't disappoint u😆

Both of the character seemed to be a beautiful person in heart, even for the moment, we don't know who is this handsome stranger 😉. I don't know why but I feel their first encoutner will not be that smooth between them? Our Asya don't know how to talk to each other without yelling. I don't know how you decide to write your story, but you have many options and this story will give the opportunity to try different road.

well d first meeting has to wait 4 now but I will try my best 2 mke it worth d read😃

Jas really you should have wrote earlier because you have something for sure but everything came at the right time. I am sure that this story will be a really good one.
Keep going girl 👏

Originally posted by: ashiii333

Allah... koi meko pinch kro Jas h wrote this???? OMG kya likha hai bestie love u sooo much vl unres raat ko ;)

Originally posted by: Kabhibloom

Awwweee...
Amazing. Awesome.
Just loved it.
You r really a good writer.
So, zoya is an actress.
I think that handsome stranger was asad only.
Make asya meet soon.
Continue soon.

Thanx for the wonderful review dear😃