New Asya FF....Mere Humnawah Part *1-5* link to nxt thread given - Page 10

Originally posted by: azsumay

Hey amazing update

Your writer list is too long

You write saima di is amazing writer

She is also my inspiration

Rada is very good writer specially all emotions

Ab update

It's seems like interesting

Zoya is actress

What about asad

It's first unofficial meeting is good

Thank god they both safe

It's all over very nice

Can you pm me this story

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Awesome Concept Dear👏😊

I did not knew u r also a writer😃

Zoya is an actress but she spends time wid orphanage people in her free time. Dats very nice of her😊. I think she herself lived there as a kid.

I think dat guy is Asad wid d way u described him😊. He is so nice n caring while playing wid kids n saving a puppy. Zoya is drawn 2wards him😉.

I don't think dat anyone has ever written a story like dis where a heroine of d story who is successful is drawn 2wards a random person. Normally, most of d stories wud have d hero as as a superstar who is drawn 2wards some acts of a random girl.

I googled d meaning of Humnawah as I did not knew wat it means which says dat it means of people of ek samaan soch. So, ur story shows d Humnawah of Zoya n dat very handsome stranger where they r very sweet n caring n also loves kids😃.

So, dis will be only 10 or less parts as dis is a SS. Try to make it a FF😛.

Update soon n PM me😃

Originally posted by: ajanshul

It's awesssooomme

Originally posted by: jas91

Hi Sum

yeah d list is long & I always decided that my 1st work will b dedicated 2 my fvrt writers😛

Thanx 4 d review 😃

I m glad u lked it

keep reading

updt coming soon

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Jas*...😃
What A Pleasant suprise this is...Well I am very Happy...ki the person of whose views and comments i always follow and check without fail on other stories..is writing a story herself...👏
I want to say THANK YOU😳...for Writing a Story..and CONGRATULATIONS👏 on becoming a WRITER⭐️...I wish You all the Good things..because BEST to aap hoo hee...we will see in Writing..but I really Admire how you explain and grasp the others stories...waise hee I expect to find that in your writing...I am excited...😃
And What a Aadarsh way to start with all the dedications...great..
Coming to the part...👏
Well So Zoya is a Superstar Actress...and Zeenath is her Asst.
Who is the Stranger...well guess karne ki zaroorat toh nahi..koi aur bhi hota toh U wouldn't have described his Characterisitics..like the way you did here..😉😆.but will wait and see in the next part..
Song select samajh nai aaya..kaunsa tha...? Excited for the next part already..😕

I guess now you are in the Writer's shoes...it is all together a diff feeling...,maybe...now we will bug you for updates and all.😛.
Continue soonish.😃

.PM me also...will Buddy the PM ID also. 😳

Originally posted by: --Aishwarya--

Res!!!

Unres...

Hey jas darling!!! 😃

Congrats on becoming a writer and welcome to the writers club!! 🤗

Coming to the story, its lovely and I just loved it!!! 👏

Very well written and a beautiful start!! 👍🏼

Thank you so much for the pm and do update soon and pm me without fail!! 😊

Originally posted by: aYASHIKA

Hi jas 😊

Congratulations. ...u turned writer now...😃

Soo happy for u...😳

Coming to story...

Awesome start...loved it...👏

Loving this story...

Do pm me 😊

Update soon...

Originally posted by: binuuu

nice start..
zoya as an actress..
love at first sight..
interesting..
looking forward..
continue soon...

Originally posted by: ashiii333

sabse phly I read..
uska kyaa haan :(

u r my bestie I loved ur review 2 pagli😆

Originally posted by: ssrdj

Jas hope you are doing good..

Congrats for your new story.And never ever doubt your skills.

The update has been incredibly beautiful...Too good.

Waiting for next update eagerly..

Looking forward for Asya moments