ASYA FF: Prem Kahani Hai Mushkil (Updated Ch. 130 Page 90 Oct. 11)

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Chahat Doshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#161

I loved the story progression and every detail in the chapters

To get a better feel of the updates I tune into the songs you have mentioned along with the chapters

I have heard so many songs which I had not heard of

Done till chapter 5

Please update the index on the first page and also if there is more to the story

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Klondy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: Chahanya
I loved the story progression and every detail in the chapters
To get a better feel of the updates I tune into the songs you have mentioned along with the chapters

I have heard so many songs which I had not heard of

Done till chapter 5

Please update the index on the first page and also if there is more to the story

Yes, I need to update the index and will do that soon. But the story is here all the way up to chapter 113. I will soon add chapters 114 and 115.

I'm glad you're enjoying the songs too. I really love them too.

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Asif

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Posted: 10 years ago

#163

Chap 3
Ayaan saw Zoya crying in mazaar. He asked her but she said that she is missing her dead father. Asad cursed himself after getting know abt Zoya. Liked the way she handled everything.

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Asif

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Posted: 10 years ago

#164

Chap 4
They started their journey & she was quite. During antakshiri, she participated very less. Asad wanted to hold her but can't do that as he was emotionally challenged

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Asif

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Posted: 10 years ago

#165

Chap 5
Tanveer brought Zoya running away from her marriage which made asad angry. She thanked him which made him more guilty. Ayaan told him what he agreed for & asad apologised.

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Asif

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Posted: 10 years ago

#166

Chap 6
Asad felt Zoya changed behaviour & he knew that she was doing be she didn't want to ruin everyone's mood. Dilshad told Zoya to sit with asad. The way she told DCH story was nice. Asad listened. He remembered what he told him every time because of his judgmental attitude & felt more guilty.

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Klondy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh
Chap 6
Asad felt Zoya changed behaviour & he knew that she was doing be she didn't want to ruin everyone's mood. Dilshad told Zoya to sit with asad. The way she told DCH story was nice. Asad listened. He remembered what he told him every time because of his judgmental attitude & felt more guilty.

So happy to read your responses to the initial chapters. Makes me want to go and re-read them and make corrections if I find typos!

I haven't been able to update the index but all the chapters till 113 are already loaded here. Enjoy reading and do keep posting your comments!

It's particularly fun to read these comments because now that I'm writing chapter 116 it reminds me how far along the story has come - and specially how far along Asad and Zoya have come! I'm writing another car scene between Asya and boy have things changed now 😉

Edited by Klondy - 10 years ago

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Nitya Suresh

@TheAutumnFizz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#168

Thank you so much for the PMs.. Loved the last two chapters.. Specially 115.. OMG.. Asad is so stupid sometimes.. Lost the chance and had to manaofy Zoya.. Super cute!!!! And I am already in love with Zain!

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Asif

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Posted: 10 years ago

#169

Chap 7
Dilshad noticed changed in asad & Zoya attitude as well so she decided to not purchasing engagement ring. Zoya enjoyed her time with Ayaan & najma. Asad was happy to see Zoya laughing.

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Asif

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Posted: 10 years ago

#170

Chap 8
Dilshad & asad convo was nice. He told her what he did but she refused to believe. She wanted to sort out that issue soon. Ayaan & najma wanted to see taj & asad agreed bc of Zoya. So that decided he will leave & driver will join them for remaining journey.