|Asya| |Kabhi| SS :'.For All Eternity.'|Epilogue- 26 Apr'17| - Page 72

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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
So nikaah finished
Najma teased by nikhat
Zoya is feeling down all r friends have partners only her alone
Her mother wants her to come home and marry
But how can she when she still loves him
Love her and niks convo
So reception he can't stop looking at her
He just wants to go confess hat he feels there and now
He drank himself to a stupor
Omg someone in Zoya room hoping it is not Asad hoping he is not confessing his undying love like tht
She slapped the person
She got flashes of all the past the hurt the pain it all
So it had t be Asad
Continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update

Pls update soon

I can't wait to read more
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update
At last someone made a move
Even if he got slapped
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
:Chapter - 20:




I know they say that first love is the sweetest, but that first cut is the deepest too. There are times in life when everything seems so somber. The pain that someone experiences after reaching at a certain zenith of happiness. Maybe for some regret is all that they get , for some pain and finally only just some get their true love.


He saw Zoya running out of the room and stood there with his hand on his cheek where the woman he loved had slapped him and really hard. Was this the end of his story was there no chance of him getting the woman he loved? .



Zoya was in a state of shock and by the time she reached the living area she was already stumbling not that she was drunk but the earlier events made her dizzy. She reached the table walking unsteady and before she knew a showpiece was down on the ground.



''Zoya !!??...what the.'' Ayaan, humaira, Imraan and Nikhar were nearby somewhere. And it didn't take them any longer to reach there and see Zoya in a disheveled state.



''Zoya !!...are you...okay? ..is there something wrong? '' Humaira asked in hesitation sensing something unusual.


Zoya didn't speak anything and just kept on crying bitterly. Ayaan saying bye to his last ounce of coolness held Zoya's shoulders tight and shook her while asking her the matter. Everyone was now present there. Zoya after sometime looked at the direction of her room and it was all Ayaan needed to understand what the hell this all was.




He ran inside Zoya's room and others followed him leaving zoya behind in their curiosity. As the entered the room they saw Asad collapsed on the floor looking even more miserable.



''WHAT THE HELL DID YOU DO TO HER?!!''... Ayaan asked while picking him up by his collar.



''A...Ayaan. .relax !...we can figure everything out please just relax. .'' Najma tried to calm him.



''WE'LL FIGURE WHAT! !...GOD DAMN IT!''.Ayaan was literally furious.


''Ayaan please leave him...'' humaira pleaded. ''No not before he tells me what did he do to Zoya. ..Speak up! !'' Ayaan shouted.


''Asad what happened here ?'' Nikhat asked after a long silence.


He looked her in the eye and she knew he did something that re opened all the wounds of past in Zoya's mind. After a minute he reveiled everything and Ayaan being furious punched him so hard he might also have given Asad a black eye. Before he could hit him further Imraan Najma and Humaira stopped him.



''Ayaan leave him! !...we need to pull Zoya together please. ..'' Said humaira glaring at Asad while he had his head held low.


Eveyone except Imraan and Najmaleft the room hastily only to find Zoya gone . And suddenly humaira's eyes went white in horror seeing the floor.

''What is it humaira? '' Asked Nikhat while everyone looked in her direction of attention.


''She is back from where she started. ..I can feel her pain...''
Said Humaira seeing the blood on the floor that surely was from Zoya's feet.




''He has done it again. I knew it wasn't a good idea to invite him. ..'' said Nikhat.


Meanwhile in Zoya's room Asad was again on the ground crying bitterly. Najma stood there watching him with unshed tears along with Imraan.


''Why Asad why did you do this? ...do you freaking have any idea what you've done to Zoya. She loves you and always have and you, your behavior it just isn't acceptable. If you really love her why did you leave then? !'' Shouted Imraan.


''Imraan. ..he loves Zoya I know he has confessed on the wrong time with a wrong method but he loves her. Isn't it what we all wanted from the beginning for Zoya? '' Najma argued.


''I know I even wanted Asad to realize how much she loved him but not like this. ...'' He spoke referring to Asad.



''Hmmm...Imraan we need to go look for Zoya she can do anything when she's upset. And we all know in how many ways she'd tried to die in the past !'' Nikhat said eyeing Asad who was staring at her shocked.



They came out to see the horrible scene in front of them that pained everyone. The blood on the floor was long ago dried up. It had been an hour and everyone was too preoccupied to think what to do next. Saving everyone the debate Imraan-Najma and Farhan went to search Zoya.





While somewhere Zoya was walking like a live corpse. The past flashing before he eyes like a movie and giving her a reason to be unhappy again after so many years. Zoya's thoughts were racing like a tornado .



''Which book are you reading ?'' (Asad)


''LFA ...go find humaira and talk to her.'' (Zoya)


''Tumhe dekh k dil mein kuch kuch hota hai. . Tum nhi samjhogi.'' (Asad)



''Shut up stupid !'' (Zoya)


''Show me the slam book...a date near a lake ahaan...'' (Asad)

''Give it back !'' (Zoya)


''You're my very good friend and I can't loose you !...'' (Asad)

''Please concentrate on your studies Zoya exams are near and you'll always be my friend. ..'' (Asad)


''These things matter but I want someone with an amazing character'' (Asad)


''Okay I like someone else ...TB ...Tanveer Baig''. (Asad)

''AAAHHH !!!...STOP! ..STOP! !...PLEASE STOP...AAAHAAN HAAN !''




Zoya yelled through her lungs and stood there in the middle of the road crying uncontrollably. The horrible past was crashing her heart. The new memories acting like salt on her wounds. The way he rejected her, the way he caused her so much pain for just a day of liking or not even that. Before she knew she was hearing a car coming towards her . She was too tired of her life to walk and be on the other side.



'Swoosh !' the sound came and the car was disbalanced but it somehow gathered the balance back and stopped at a distance from Zoya who refused to look anything else apart from her partially blood covered feet.


The people from the car came out immediately and a manly hand grasped her shoulders and turned her on the other side.



''Are you out of your freaking mind Zoya?...'' shouted Imraan.


Caring for the sake of him Zoya looked into his eyes and immediately lost all the control. It wasn't an exaggeration as someone else would have done it was a cry of sheer sorrow.



''Why Imraan? WHY!?...why me always. . .'' She cried and dropped her head on his shoulders while Najma kept rubbing her back.


''Zoya why did you leave? ...'' Najma asked after a lot of silence.


''Shhh !...don't ask any question let her get herself together. '' Farhaan tried to console Najma.


Was the pain ever going to end or both the lovers will separate.
Edited by ASYA4eveAAA - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hola ppl hope not forgotten me ?

i m here with an update short but yes an update.

and i really am enjoying writing this.

thanks for the support.

hey i need a help too.

i started watching ZING TV's show pyaar tune kya kiya and i cant find season 5 episodes on youtube any idea where can i find some ?

thanks in advance.

do comment and like sorry for late update. :)
Edited by ASYA4eveAAA - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

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WHAT THE ...? It was the most unexpected twist ever in this story, I fell litterally from my chair. I became blank for few seconds and read it again.
It went really well, everything was enjoying the party, everyone was happy but Asad seems to be tortured with his feelings, seeing her. I mean get a grip man, go and confess at least, you will know what she was feeling for you *facepalmed*.

For a change, I don'tknow what to say about, that twist just turn me upside down that I didn't expect or I should have think about it?Seeing Asad's desperate state.

One of your readers mentioned that it could be Ayaan, it can be but it seems really in love with Humeira so I don't expect from him to do this, or maybe you hide it really well 😉

Before this chapter, I was accepting Asad but if he really did this, he just screw up everything for a moment of weakness, and in this state, I will for sure accept their seperation. She was ready to move on, but this event came, maybe to help her to move on. The person that you love the most broke your heart not once but twice and forced you, for sure it will be shock for her, and she will be another Zoya, not anymore Zoe stuck in her old feeling for Asad. I guess it's for the best for BOTH of them.

Indeed unexpected twist but I can see a huge potentiel for both of them, Asad will for sure feel guilty to be rejected and for seeing disgust in her eyes and Zoya, finally will be able to move on from this past, that she was caring like a burden. And knowing Zoya, she will not say anything to her friend about it, she will again protect him. Not because she was in love but because she had a golden heart.

It was just a prediction unless, you prepared Something else for us , if it's Asad or someone else, it will really interesting to know why?

Good and intriguing chapter and I can't wait to see what will happen next . I am so excited and if it's Asad, 🤢

Take care sweetheart


It is Asad darling ! 😉
and i feel such attachment with you guys .
this story is just the best i m writing .
my first mature work which got popular.

lets see what is coming up.
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Posted: 9 years ago
A beautiful update...
...😭
Zoya is really broken...
Well written...
Loved it very much...
Heart touching one.
Keep up the good work
Edited by --Arpita-- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
I read it all in one go
And trust me it was beautiful
A roller-coaster of emotions and please give it a good ending
As for pyar tune kya kiya try searching tune.pk
Am not sure though
Continue soon and do pm me please
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Posted: 9 years ago
This is so so sad yaar
Make it a happy scene now

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