|Asya| |Kabhi| SS :'.For All Eternity.'|Epilogue- 26 Apr'17|

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Linsie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#701

Originally posted by: radadolcevida
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So sorry for the late comment, crazy weeks and crazy life. But here I am now

So first, before reading this 2 chapters, I had already an idea in my mind about the end and I discuss this with you in the previous chapter but, you just put one scene that make me change my mind about Asad and his behavior.

''Why'd you do that?...'' She asked when Zoya went away.
''She wouldn't have taken it ...'' He sighed and Najma smiled at him.

He was truly in love, at this moment, he did something so selfless that it touched my heart. He understood her feelings at this point and he accepted for a change to stay hidden, in her shadow to let her glowing with her natural beauty. I must confess it was a small scene but really strong about his feeling for her.

But let start by the beginning, you showed us a glimpse of his past and his brother. Both seems to be opposite, Asad was serious and good at school while Asrar was cheerful and selfish, I can say. And it was really interesting to see how Asad became what he was now.
You put few of Asya in this chapter, it was most about Asad, but we can appreciate how everyone took a step toward him, accepting him and trying to move on with the past. It means that Asad change and he proove it to them.
I must confess Asad grew up in my heart and I can understand why he behave like that. I don't excuse his act but I can understand and he deserved maybe another chance. I told you my heart melt for him 😳.

Two sentences caught me in your chapter, the beginning of each chapter, giving us the tempo of each chapter you wrote :
Forget about me, erase me, dont even think back. Because one day when you let your mind slip, you'll remember me and realize that you should have held on.
This sentence means a lot specially when you are not in peace with your past, and we can see that Asad was still hurt and he maybe has some questions that he can't have answer. He was the favorite one and I can understand the weight on his shoulders, but I guess you will unfold this soon, about them.
The second one :
The best love is the one that makes you a better person without changing you into someone other than yourself.
I love this one, really, I mean this sentence should be known by everyone who started any relationship. If you are not you in the relation or if you are sad, then quit and find someone else. Love that make you feel low, it's not the real love. You can give hundred of chance but at the end, you will lose yourself and became someone with scars. I know better, I lived this kind of love who left me in piece, that I spent years to collect. Love is beautiful but dealing with the other is the hard part, it ask you a lot.
And I guess this is what Asad was doing, looking up and staring at the girl, who stood by his side, while he was engrossed in his loneliness. Take the one who will take care of you, and who better that Zoya.
I love how you make Asad growing in this chapter, once he spoke about his pain, I felt him lighter.
I wish to see in the next chapter more interaction between them and to let her see this new Asad.
Beautiful chapter and full with hidden message, showing how love can heal and melt human.

PS : thank you so much for the dedication 😳, take care of you

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏❤️

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Linsie

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Posted: 9 years ago

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EuphoricDamsel

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Posted: 9 years ago

#703

Chapter : 19

Pure love is a willingness to give without a thought of receiving anything in return. A new day a new beginning for all. It was the next day after the nikaah and Miss Zoya faarooqui was sitting in her room alone updating her blog writing about Imraan and Najma's wedding.

'And with this I saw the most awfully amazing couple seal their love life with a Qubool Hai. ' She finished and sighed. It was one of those days again when she was having a depressed feeling a kind of anxious pain that spread over her heart. Her mother had just called today half an hour before asking her to come back home and marry. She really can't go home how is she going to tell her parents that she can never love anyone else?.

Its not like Zoya didn't want to move on but she wasn't ready to give any other man a place in her life yet.

Its hard to forget to deal with an oblivion that's almost impossible. She's trying and maybe just maybe she'll get over there someday and she hopes it to be soon. ''Now is miss writer writing something ?'' She looked up to find Nikhat. ''Shut up! ...you're up early today? ...'' Zoya asked. ''Ummm...basically not for me I am so so so excited because today I am gonna take ReVENGe from Najma for all the teasing she's done to me.'' She declared. ''Hahaha! ...some devil you are...'' Zoya spoke while laughing. ''Life has been such a roller coaster ride for us hasn't it Zoya?..'' Nikhat asked looking to the scenery. ''Hmmmph ! I guess its all in our destiny its all that Allah has decided for us. And it even depends on our choices what we do or say or ever feel for someone.'' She said . ''You know Zoya I've made some wrong choices all my life...I neglected Farhaan too much its now that I understand his love for me...'' She smiled. ''You're very lucky to have him with you. In fact all of you are Najma to have Imraan Humaira to have Ayaan'' X Zoya smiled. ''And you? ...'' Nikhat asked. ''I? ...Huh !...well I'm lucky to have you all with me .'' She said avoiding Nikhat. ''Don't lie to me you know I can read you. You still love him don't you?'' She asked. ''You know me , you know him is there a solution for this? No right so just let it be .'' She declared and got up.

The night fell over quickly in all the teasing everyone had to do or rather only Nikhat had to do. They were so very happy everything seemed so eternally blissful. ''Humaira take over from here I'm going to get ready !'' Zoya said while pinning up Najma's hair. ''Okay bro! ...and Nikhat had said to keep a parcel in your room have a look. ..'' said humaira winking. Zoya smiled at humaira and Najma and left the room to get ready . There was only an hour left and she had to get her hair done by Nikhat. Nikhat is really good at creating some excellent braids. She got inside her room and found a golden box on her bed. ''To the most sexy friend...- Nikhat'' She smiled at her childish behavior. Not being able to resist any longer she plunged on the box only to find a beautiful baby pink and beige lehenga with golden works on the border. Amazed by the outfit she quickly wore it keeping the duppatta on one side of her shoulder. She now rushed outside to Nikhat's room to get her hair done only to find Farhan and her in an about to kiss position. ''Guys stop it !...I didn't see anything but please atleast try locking the door. '' Farhan rushed out blushing while both the girls stood there laughing heartily.

In less than twenty Nikhat did Zoya's hair and this time not in a braid. ''Nikhat what is this? ...I wanted a braid. '' Said Zoya pouting. ''Shush !!...this look suits you better ..'' Nikhat said smiling. And Zoya after much banter admired her hair so very much. It was in loose curls from the front from back it was straight and just above the end of her strands there were again those curls . Nikhat had also braided a small portion of her hair and pinned it up with a glittering sequence clip. Zoya looked the most beautiful of all. Everyone left for the venue shortly after an hour. Zoya, Nikhat, Najma and Imraan in one car while Asad, Ayaan, Humaira and Farhan in other. They reached the set rather quickly and started to chill out immediately . Najma and Imraan were seated together on a platform smiling at eachother lovingly. Ayaan and Humaira had found eachother a quite corner and were having a nice time. Nikhat and Zoya sat on the stage beside Najma and Imraan while Asad and Farhan were having a drink together. ''You really love her don't you ?'' Said Asad. ''Yes very much..she's one of her kind you know its totally different with her everything is just so special. I feel everything is complete with her...'' Said Farhan dreamingly eyeing Nikhat. Asad here was completely in awe today with Zoya. She looked so beautiful that he had to fight the urge to confess to her then and there.

The night was falling fast and the clock's ticking seemed unusually fast today to Asad. He was sitting there alone watching his friends cuddling into eachother looking so much in love. He craved that feeling that tendency of taking care of the other person before thinking of yourself.

The pain that he felt today inside him had begun to make it difficult for him to breath. He ordered for a drink and then another the drinks didn't take full control of his mind but it was awfully successful in making him a bit dizzy. By the time he detached himself from the bar everything seemed to be finished and after sometime Farhan and Nikhat took him with themselves. They were in the hotel within an hour and everybody felt so good being inside their rooms. Najma and Zoya hugged eachother and Zoya parted ways with a goodnight kiss. She reached her room and was taking her earrings off when suddenly the lights went out . She wasn't afraid of the dark but today there was something else bothering her which was unknown. ''Who's there ?...haah!'' She gasped as she felt someone behind her. He was so quick that she barely registered what he was upto. The man held her tight clutching her stomach towards him. The scream were threatening to get out but nothing came. His motion slid the dupatta on her shoulder which landed on the floor with a soft thud. With his other free hand he motioned her hair on one side reveiling the milkskin of her back . He kissed her just above the start of her shoulder on her neck and at that moment Zoya turned into a puddle of mess. The man turned her around and looked at her in awe her eyes closed so tight agitation written all over her brows. ''I Love You Zoe...'' Finally at the Voice Zoya opened her eyes shocked to see the face in front of her. It was very traumatic for Zoya every memory every pain that she suffered surfaced in front of her eyes . She raised her hand in his direction and "THWACK " . The slap landed straight on his handsome face giving a cut on his perfectly cut jaw. ''STAY AWAY ...'' She said in a dangerous voice and picking up her dupatta ran away from there leaving the person broken and distraught.

Edited by ASYA4eveAAA - 9 years ago

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EuphoricDamsel

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Posted: 9 years ago

#704

Hey pretty people.

thanks for giving your views on the update.

this update is dedicated to Sanjhari and Radadolcevida.

two ppl i love very much...

keep commenting guys thanks for making me reach a century again after such a long long time.

ZOYA"S OUTFIT . :)

Edited by ASYA4eveAAA - 9 years ago

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Sanjhari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#705

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That was a nice n cute update.

After marriage it's time did reception. ...

Everyone is having fun..

Love nikhat zoya n Farhan asad convo.

Poor fellow madly in love n all ready to confess...

But I doubt the one who confessed was asad. As Ayan calls her zoe...

Or during school time asad used to call her zoe..

But now I want next update asap.

Can't wait

Pls continue soon

Edited by Sanjhari - 9 years ago

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 9 years ago

#706

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WHAT THE ...? It was the most unexpected twist ever in this story, I fell litterally from my chair. I became blank for few seconds and read it again.

It went really well, everything was enjoying the party, everyone was happy but Asad seems to be tortured with his feelings, seeing her. I mean get a grip man, go and confess at least, you will know what she was feeling for you *facepalmed*.

For a change, I don'tknow what to say about, that twist just turn me upside down that I didn't expect or I should have think about it?Seeing Asad's desperate state.

One of your readers mentioned that it could be Ayaan, it can be but it seems really in love with Humeira so I don't expect from him to do this, or maybe you hide it really well 😉

Before this chapter, I was accepting Asad but if he really did this, he just screw up everything for a moment of weakness, and in this state, I will for sure accept their seperation. She was ready to move on, but this event came, maybe to help her to move on. The person that you love the most broke your heart not once but twice and forced you, for sure it will be shock for her, and she will be another Zoya, not anymore Zoe stuck in her old feeling for Asad. I guess it's for the best for BOTH of them.

Indeed unexpected twist but I can see a huge potentiel for both of them, Asad will for sure feel guilty to be rejected and for seeing disgust in her eyes and Zoya, finally will be able to move on from this past, that she was caring like a burden. And knowing Zoya, she will not say anything to her friend about it, she will again protect him. Not because she was in love but because she had a golden heart.

It was just a prediction unless, you prepared Something else for us , if it's Asad or someone else, it will really interesting to know why?

Good and intriguing chapter and I can't wait to see what will happen next . I am so excited and if it's Asad, 🤢

Take care sweetheart

Edited by radadolcevida - 9 years ago

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Arpita_Mirage

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Posted: 9 years ago

#707

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Awesome update..

Loved it very much..

Its time for some drama..😉

Zoya wanted to move on but she cant..

Looking forward to read more..

Continue soon..

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Asif

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Posted: 9 years ago

#708

Nice update dear
Asad saw Zoya & lost in her beauty. He wanted to confess her but didn't. Finally he confessed in night & got a slap from Zoya. He knew now what that feeling is when other person broke ur heart. Waiting for next update soon to see how he mend her heart. Thanks for pm