New Asya SS:Crossing time, chap 14 (LAST); 08-11-15

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muskaan17rocks

@muskaan17rocks

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#351

Amazing chapter

very emotional yet so beautiful

loved it

please continue soon

will be waiting impatiently 😊

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Binzzz

@Binzzz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#352

nice part...
very emotional scenes...
hope everything will be fine soon...
hope nothing bad happened to asad/leo...
continue soon..

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

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Posted: 10 years ago

#353

its very emotional updt...i love it..

how cn u write so well...well written rada,

i loved specially the last portion whr leo/asad & zed/zoya r standing in the same path whr thy were in past..

thnks 4 pm,continue soon

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KeyaHira2

@KeyaHira2

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#354

This chapter

Oh My God

I'm a feminist first of all.

So yeah

This chapter was hard for me

It brought memories

I need to calm down.

I loved this chapter tho

As I was reading this chapter I couldn't breathe

The lump in my throat

This chapter touched me

Like real deep

You're such a great writer

OMG

Phenomenal

Deadass tho

Wait

Is Asad dead?

😕

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sasir

@sasir

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#355

I am Sry
I just read ur note n got scared ...so didn't read it...
But read some comments ...
I think something happened to asad...
Can u brief the update...
I am extremely sorry if I disturbed u...
Can u plzzz

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radadolcevida

@radadolcevida

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#356

Originally posted by: sasir
I am Sry
I just read ur note n got scared ...so didn't read it...
But read some comments ...
I think something happened to asad...
Can u brief the update...
I am extremely sorry if I disturbed u...
Can u plzzz

no problem, I can understand

Well Asad tried to talk to Zoya but she asked him to leave her alone, because she was confused. He didn't accept her request and convinced her at the end that she needed him and loved him as much as he loved her. She was about to accept when some guys pushed her by mistake. Asad became angry but Zoya tried to stop him (because of his surgery).

In the past, the same thing happen, when Akram insulted Leo and Zed went to fight with him. But this fight finished by Zed being hurt by Akram. Leo came in between and faced all Akram's anger. He left Leo laying on the floor. Akram wanted to hurt more Zed but Leo stood up and faced Akram for the first time. Leo told him that until he was on his feet he won't let him hurting her. Akram was angry and left them behind.

In the present, Asad was still disturbed by what happened to him years back that he asked those men to hit him. And like Akram, they were confused by his strength. Asad kept beating those men thinking that he was punching Akram.

Zoya realized that Asad was still disturbed and was the sad part of Leo, she felt responsible for making him so sad and so bitter. She realized that she was supposed to stand despite his hurtfull words like he stood for her against Akram. She realized that he needed to find himself before coming to her. She then pushed him away, but he collapsed like Leo in the past. And both were bleeding profusely.

And it stopped when Zed/Zoya called for help.

Edited by radadolcevida - 10 years ago

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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#357

Omg..that was absolute brilliance. .:)
Awesome update rada ..
loved it.. it was beautifully written
it was so intense..
I cant really express what I felt reading it..
You are really gifted as a writer..
looking forward to the next update..
hope zoya can forgive asad/leo..
update soon..:)

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sasir

@sasir

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#358

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

no problem, I can understand
Well Asad tried to talk to Zoya but she asked him to leave her alone, because she was confused. He didn't accept her request and convinced her at the end that she needed him and loved him as much as he loved her. She was about to accept when some guys pushed her by mistake. Asad became angry but Zoya tried to stop him (because of his surgery).
In the past, the same thing happen, when Akram insulted Leo and Zed went to fight with him. But this fight finished by Zed being hurt by Akram. Leo came in between and faced all Akram's anger. He left Leo laying on the floor. Akram wanted to hurt more Zed but Leo stood up and faced Akram for the first time. Leo told him that until he was on his feet he won't let him hurting her. Akram was angry and left them behind.
In the present, Asad was still disturbed by what happened to him years back that he asked those men to hit him. And like Akram, they were confused by his strength. Asad kept beating those men thinking that he was punching Akram.
Zoya realized that Asad was still disturbed and was the sad part of Leo, she felt responsible for making him so sad and so bitter. She realized that she was supposed to stand despite his hurtfull words like he stood for her against Akram. She realized that he needed to find himself before coming to her. She then pushed him away, but he collapsed like Leo in the past. And both were bleeding profusely.
And it stopped when Zed/Zoya called for help.

Really felt bad for asya...
So emotional..
Hope nothing happens to asad...
N hope as zoya decided she would stand by him this time..not like earlier..
He really needs her..
She can change him by being his side but not by pushing him
Hope she will understand it soon..
Thanx alott

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kobeb

@kobeb

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#359

Perfect update well written girll!! Keep it up :)

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#360

Wow that was a tough one

Quiet a tearjerker

So asad pleads with Zoya

She asked for time which he don't have to give

He extends his hands and she is ready to reach out

But now she is knock over and then teased by drunks

Omg the lion is out and Zoya is trying to calm him

U know I never think I said this but the way u move from present to past

And the way the times coincide it is amazing

So asad could have fight for Zoya and Leo got beaten to unconiousness trying to save zed

Well zed rpresnt Leo first but then they were ambushed

So now Zoya wants to walk away as she thinks Leo is lost an left this angry fighting machine called asad

But walking away will no help he will live again as he did the last 13 yrs

She has to be with him she have to bring back the all happy emotional strong Leo and let him merge with the physically strong asad

Omg he collapsed both in past and present well we knew he survived past as he is in present now

But hope this collapse don't cause major harm to him

But let it help so Zoya can't distance herself from him

Continue soon

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