New Asya SS:Crossing time, chap 14 (LAST); 08-11-15 - Page 37

Very intriguing and gripping part..

Amazing
Such a emotional chapter
Loved it
Update soon

Hi Rada

Originally posted by: jas91

Hi Rada

itna emotional part main toh senti ho gayi

U r amazing but senti part ko jitna short kar sako kar diya karo cuz I feel sad otherwise😒

Updt was Brillint as usual👏👏

they were out on street from party

Zoya wants him & knew she will forgive & accept him in d end but was not ready 2 give in so soon. In their argument she said she want time but Asad didn't wanted 2 wait & his reason was justified👍🏼

some drunken men came & teased her which awoke d angry lion in Asad😡

d past scene was smoothly merged in present👏

Akram & his frnds were pathetic filthy Rascals🤬🤬 (now I m shocked that after this horrible incident Asad trusted Akram over Zoya. 😲Now I feel ashamed on Asad Zoya is right not forgiving him😡)

btw I realised this was 2nd time she was going 2 get raped (feel horrible 4 poor soul😭)

Rada I m confused I m not able 2 decide whom I pity or feel horrible 4 btw Asya😕😕

Leo succeeded in saving Zed I assume😕 by diverting Akram's focus on himself

In d present also he saved her but he is still trapped in d past that incident left a huge mark on his mind & soul he is angry on himself 4 not being strong in d past, seeing him Zoya felt guilty 4 not fighting 4 them in d past & decided 2 stay away till he find his way back home after making peace wid his past.

I agree wid Zoya Asad is sad part of Leo 4 he feels he was not strong enough 2 protect her & he hate that part cuz he blames Leo 2 hurt Zed making her leave his life 4 yrs.😔

& Asad fell in d end in both present & past & Zoya was alone just like she was yrs ago

so Asad will b back in her hospital as her patient good😃😆

btw I didn't get Zoya's logic what's d need 2 push him away she can show him d right path & heal their wounds from past by staying close.😕😕 Can u explain it mayb I didn't get d point or if it will b cleared in nxt part than its ok.

PS- I think Akram left Zed also after beating Asad 2 death but seeing their strong frndship he must have wanted 2 break that that's why he created that MU btw them which broke them & their frndship😡

Wooowww...it was sooo damn awesome rada!!...

What a brilliant flow of emotions and the way you pictured it with the past n present.. Woow...
COMMEDABLE!!

What a brilliant peace of writing!!...

heart wrenching chapter
i can't bear anymore pain ...really want asya to traverse this tough phase together!
continue soon

nice update !!! violence is justified and asad is a bit scary ... mmm I wanna to ask one thing is Zoe raped by akram dat time ??? in front of asad dat'svy asad bcum like dis ????
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Originally posted by: EMOksgian

nice update !!! violence is justified and asad is a bit scary ... mmm I wanna to ask one thing is Zoe raped by akram dat time ??? in front of asad dat'svy asad bcum like dis ????
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Thank you so much 😃 and I know Asad is suffering from rejecting of his past thinking that Leo screw up the only thing that was important. 😕
Not at all, she was not and I will never write or suggest or even think about. Rape is disgusting thing and for me it's a crime, so I will not let my heroine (even as a fiction) going throught.

Originally posted by: MayurChan

A very Interesting.., Conflicting...and Emotionally filled part..and yes a little bit of violence also.
So This is also one of the reasons..for what must have made Akram to trap Leo in his trap and blame all this on Zed..and seperate them.
But here again...whatever happened..and we can say Leo was manipulated..but once you left him...scared why again...?
Isn't it that we should learn from our mistake and rectify them by not repeating them again.
But Zoya is a matured individual...i guess she knows whatever she is doing..you must have decided something fo her i guess.
So is Asad again going to be in a dangerous medical situation..?
Intriguing part..
Continue soonish..

I know it's a bit violent even if I don't like it, but this part it's important for the rest of the story and as jas smartly mention, it will be the reason why Akram will destroy their strong friendship and of course manipulated Leo.
For your question, why is he scared again, the Leo in him was his natural personality and stronger than Asad, no matter what we can say. However, Leo lost Zed in the past because of Akram and because he didn't trust her enough. So it can create kind of rejection. You will see also a confrontation between Leo and Akram and at this moment, Leo will decide to change totally. He will realize that human are not good and you have to be strong (in some way ) to face them and not kind. Classical situation in life
For zoya, you will know why she pushed him in the next update, she will confess to him but he will be asleep (😆 sadistic I know).
No Asad will not be in bad situation, he is my hero, I can't have story without hero 😃

Originally posted by: ikhlass

Oh la la Rada je ne vais pas te dire que j'ai adore, tu le sais deja 😉 tout plein de drame comme j'aime ! Hmm quoi te dire ? Asad semble un peu, que dis-je, beaucoup fou ma foi, il semble souffrir d'un dedoublement de la personnalite , leo semble encore vivre en lui, il a envie de s'exprimer, mais Asad le maintien prisonnier pensant c'est le faible entre eux-deux... Zoya avait raison de lui rappeler que Leo n'avait ni le physique ni le comportement d'un super hero mais sa force de caractere c'etait justement ce qui faisait de lui LE SUPER HERO, a choisir entre un corstaud sans cervelle genre Akram, et un chetif plein d'esprit genre Leo le choix est vite fait... Mais je sais que Asad maintenant il a les deux en lui le corp et l'esprit, il faut juste qu'il reussisse a se reconcilier avec lui-meme, et Zoya a raison de le laisser se retrouver tout seul. J'ai l'impression qu'il voit en elle une chimere, la clef de sa guerison et en cela Zoya a raison d'avoir peur de lui, on ne doit jamais voir en une personne la solution a nos problemes, les problemes nous devons savoir les resoudre nos-meme... Mon Dieu on dirais que je donne un cours de psychologie🤢 😆... Et maintenant que l'on sait comment Leo a mis en danger sa vie pour proteger Z, on se dit qu'effectivement elle aurait du lui laisser une chance avant de partir, parce que pour faire ce qu'il a fait, il fallait qu'il l'aime enormement.
Enfin pour terminer, c'est quoi ce truc que Akram a trouve sur le sol ? je suis sur que c'est ce qui'il l'a mene chez Leo...

Bravo encore une fois pour ce superbe chapitre 👏et ne tarde pas trop a nous mettre la suite... Ceci dit j'espere que le jeune se passe bien pour toi.

Coucou

Je savais que tu allais adorer toi au moins 😃, bon je sais je suis peut etre aller un peu loin mais bon ce chapitre est important pour de futur confession de l'un et de l'autre 😉.
Sache qu'en tout cas ton cours de psycho m'a servie. Moi, j'avais ecrit qu'elle le repousse parce que sinon l'histoire serait deja fini 😆 et parce qu'il le faut vu son etat mais ce que tu as dit m'a aid pour trouver mes mots pour mon prochain chapitre 👏 bravo tu peux faire psy. Je suis d'accord avec toi, notre salut ne reside pas dans l'autre mais en nous, et zoya a compris qu'elle devait le pousser se retrouver avant de venir a elle. Et c'est ce qu'on appelle l'amour , c'est de penser au bonheur de l'autre avant le sien. C'est beau ce que je dis 😆 (tellement bateau oui)
les deux ne sont pas en tort a dire vrai et tu sauras aussi pourquoi elle ne s'est pas battu pour lui (il y a une raison valable).
Le truc que Akram a trouve et un pendentif de son bracelet qui est tombe, donc je te laisse imaginer ce qu'il va faire avec 😉.

Le jeune se passe bien, je vis seul et heureusement, que le soleil se couche tard, ca me laisse le temps de prparer a manger 😃. Ce weekend j'ai une tres bonne copine qui se marie donc pas de update avant la semaine prochaine, desolee.
PS: ne fait pas comme Asad ne me harcele pas 😆