New Asya SS:Crossing time, chap 14 (LAST); 08-11-15 - Page 38

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

heart wrenching chapter
i can't bear anymore pain ...really want asya to traverse this tough phase together!
continue soon

I know they suffered a lot and I can understand, . this chapter was hard for me to write but it was needed for the upcoming revelation.
but this relation will continue until the end and I realized that this story is bit dark, but with always a good ending.😃

Originally posted by: PrettYSmile

Wooowww...it was sooo damn awesome rada!!...

What a brilliant flow of emotions and the way you pictured it with the past n present.. Woow...
COMMEDABLE!!

What a brilliant peace of writing!!...

thank you so much 🤗
I thought that everyone will hate me for this rude chapter but no, all my readers surprised me and make me happy 😳
Love you 😃

Originally posted by: cutie15

Omg..that was absolute brilliance. .:)
Awesome update rada ..
loved it.. it was beautifully written
it was so intense..
I cant really express what I felt reading it..
You are really gifted as a writer..
looking forward to the next update..
hope zoya can forgive asad/leo..
update soon..:)

thank you 😃
I know it was intense, dark and painfull in some part, but it was needed for the upcoming confession.
@bold: this is the best compliment for any writer and I am happy that you like and feel my words, it means a lot to me.
Zoya will be in total contradiction but it will be this game of "I push you but i want you too" 😆

Originally posted by: kobeb

Perfect update well written girll!! Keep it up :)

thanks buddy 🤗

Originally posted by: anopama

Wow that was a tough one

Quiet a tearjerker

So asad pleads with Zoya

She asked for time which he don't have to give

He extends his hands and she is ready to reach out

But now she is knock over and then teased by drunks

Omg the lion is out and Zoya is trying to calm him

U know I never think I said this but the way u move from present to past

And the way the times coincide it is amazing

So asad could have fight for Zoya and Leo got beaten to unconiousness trying to save zed

Well zed rpresnt Leo first but then they were ambushed

So now Zoya wants to walk away as she thinks Leo is lost an left this angry fighting machine called asad

But walking away will no help he will live again as he did the last 13 yrs

She has to be with him she have to bring back the all happy emotional strong Leo and let him merge with the physically strong asad

Omg he collapsed both in past and present well we knew he survived past as he is in present now

But hope this collapse don't cause major harm to him

But let it help so Zoya can't distance herself from him

Continue soon

I know this chapter sounds horrible and paifull for Leo/Zed, but it just reveal to Zoya who is Asad and his deep pain.
@bold : thank you so much for this , I though that it will be confusing story but at the end, everyone appreciate the mix of past en futur.
in the coming chpater, you will know why she was pushing him far from her and I hope it will sound logic.
don't worry, I can't write a story without hero, so nothing will be bad for him 😉

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Very intriguing and gripping part..

Hope Zoya knows what she is doing...

I hope Asad is not in danger now..

Thanks for the pm.

thank you so much
yes, she knows and the next chapter you will know why she was doing this
not at all , he is not in danger

So emotional update

Originally posted by: khushbloom

Amazing
Such a emotional chapter
Loved it
Update soon

thank you so much dear 😃

Originally posted by: ikhlass

Ah oui j'ai oublie un point negatif, il repart a l'hopital 🤢 rien d'y penser je suffoque 😆

j'ai pens toi et oui encore a l'hopital, j'aurais du appeler ca : l'amour a l'hopital 😆

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Amazing chapter

very emotional yet so beautiful

loved it

please continue soon

will be waiting impatiently 😊

thank you 😃
I know it was tough chapter 😕 but happy that you like it
i will try to update soon