ASYA SS||The tale of Dominance and submission' (Chap5:Pg23)18/4/1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: SanKsgian
You so added a mitwa moment.
I like every inch of it... .
Do write more

Glad that u liked it😊

Thank u for the comment⭐️

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: SanKsgian
50 shades if grey is a passionate love story...And asya's chemistry match it perfectly

Yup that's the point...We may read lots of novels but not all suits a couple well...But in this Novel the characterization suits Asya really well😊 that is what I felt!...

@Bold I second this

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: -silentbang-
Nice update...
They are attracted to each other but he doesn't think that he is suitable for her...

Thank u Anjana😳..I hope I took ur name correctly!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: -ABI-

Thank u for this lovely Comment😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: shailu123
Just read this its awesome poor zoya she is so hurt n what asad past interesting continue soon 😊

Thank u dear😊

Will continue it soon!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: jaanu013
Nice update. mitwa moment..felt nostalgic..asya convo was cute,but sudden change in asad ..it's expected zoya feelings she was not suitable for asad and got hurt..she took it other way.. beautifully written..continue soon

Thank u for this lovely Comment😊

Yup Poor girl is hurt

Will continue it soon!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh
Nice update
Zoya thanked him for photo shoot. He asked her to join coffee & she agreed. Their talk abt BF & GF was nice. Asad told Zoya that he was not a right person for her. She felt rejected. He saved her from bike. Waiting for story to unfold. Thanks for pm

Thank u for this lovely comment😊

@Bold It will soon!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: --Arpita--
Loved it❤️
Hmm...Photoshoot scene was awesome
Love Humi ..so bossy and caring friend
Asad asking abot Zoya's BF😳 and she questioning him...
Poor Zoya felt dejected😭
So actually who is the right person for Zoya??😕
(kidding)😉
Mitwa moment 😊
Continue soon...
Soon...
Love you Hurya...

Thank u dearie for this sweet comment...Haha who u think that will be😉...

I miss Mitwa BG

will try to update soon!

Lots of Love to u too❤️

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Posted: 10 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: -Hurya-
Thank u for this lovely Comment😊

you mean photo-sparm?
well you are wellcome then...,

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Posted: 10 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: PrettYSmile
M loving it...

Beautiful...

Great going...

But what happened to asad suddenly??...

Can't wait.. Plllzzz update sooner na...plz

I m glad u r liking it😊

I will try to update soon😊...Since I m a reader myself and hate waiting😆..So won't make u wait for long😊