AsYa FF : Hopeless end (completed) -Chapter 17 - last part on page 111 - Page 72

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

Habs 🤗
YE BILkul b boring nahi tha
it was written well
and asya part was superb re
enjoyed reading ❤️
intresting precp
jaldi kardena update


hey sue am glad you find it not boring 😉
mai r jldii not possible girl
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

haww! Esa karegi mere sath ? *pout*



nhy re pr pehle mjhe time to mile
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kabhi_asya

<font color="#0000ff">Nice story..</font>

<font color="#0000ff">Beautiful update...</font>
<font color="#0000ff">Najma being trapped...and worried asya..</font>
<font color="#0000ff">update soon..</font>


thanks dear
glad you liked it
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Posted: 9 years ago

yup girl 😃
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Chapter 16 - Reflection

Tanveer looked at her reflection in mirror. She smiled gleefully. Her dream to marry Asad is going to come true.

" just few more minutes and then all the happiness of Zoya will be written in my fate her love, her Asad and her happiness, all will be mine" Tanveer gloat on her fate

" what's your in it? All you will get will be of Zoya! What is your's in it? Zoya has won even after losing" Tanveer turned abruptly and looked around to see who is talking

She saw her reflection in mirror looking at her sadly. She looked at it confusedly.

"don't look at me like that am you! Your heart that you killed yourself like you try to kill humans" her face filled with sorrow

"when you know I have killed you then what is your shadow doing here? Get lost from here and let me live in peace" Tanveer fumed and turned to go

"how can you live in peace when your peace is in me and you are telling me to get lost" Tanveer stopped, turned and looked at her

" Peace in you? Look at yourself you are fill with pain and look at me am all happy there is no peace in you but am in peace"Tanveer mocked

" you cannot be in peace by snatching someone's happiness"her shadow smile before fading

" I don't care for anyone I don't! " Tanveer shout as her shadow faded away with small smile

Tanveer hold her head that was bursting due to her inner voices shouting at her again and again to wake her up from her deep sleep of ignorance and arrogance but she is drowned so deep in her own pit that it is difficult for her to find her way out.

"Tanveer"Dilshad looked at her confused

Tanveer frozed. She turned and looked at Dilshad.

Dilshad came forward and asked her about her condition. Tanveer sighed in relief and make up the story.

" I am scared khala even after Zoya departure Asad remain in her thoughts. He doesn't even seem to be happy about all this marriage. I am scared to have same fate as Zoya. I am scared what if Asad reject me too on this day" Tanveer looked down acting to be sad

Dilshad looked at her shocked but thoughtfully.

Tanveer was actually somewhere scared that maybe Asad deny so she put the same thought in Dilshad to make her do everything so the marriage happen.

" don't worry Tanveer, nothing like last time will happen neither Zoya is here nor she would have done something like that if she was here about Asad I know he will do this marriage"Dilshad was determined

Tanveer smirked though she knew Dilshad somewhere pointed at her in her words but she didn't care because she got the assurance of her victory too.

" love has no power Zoya how much you tell about the greatness of love and believe they doesn't exist" Tanveer thoughts make her thought something about love and believe but she brushed it with an angry smile




" Ami thora dance? Najma said to Dilshad as they stood talking, ready for Nikah ceremony

" Nikah k din? Dilshad was unsure

" Nikah se pehle ami. We have to do it" Dilshad was unsure but agreed thinking after some time

The Dance started with it's own unique style while Tanveer looked on confusely. Dilshad came and bring her on stage and asked her to dance till the ceremony start though Tanveer felt it weird but gloating on her fate she enjoyed. Tanveer was trying sone steps when someone gave her a push, she turned to see who it was but was confused to see everyone busy in dancing. She got many pushes time to time without finding who did it so she thought it to be someone dancing who accidentally pushed her.

Najma looked at Tanveer, hiding behind a pillar.

" this is for all you did to us and all that yesterday..." Najma smiled mixed with anger, sadness and little happiness

Dilshad looked at Tanveer who was smiling lightly doing some dance steps.

"I know it is weird but it was needed because don't know where Asad is and I can't worry Tanveer and let everyone think that same like last time is going to happen" Dilshad chain of thoughts were disturbed by some guests

The blast was on it's way in her own victory Tanveer forgot the saying 'don't underestimate your enemy' and let them work against her collecting the proofs

Precap : "Jammy what is all this" said shocked Tanveer
Asad looked sideways with smirk

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I know am breaking my own promises of short quick updates and honestly speaking I don't have any excuse this time. The truth is am losing my interest in writing and due to that every ideas I had. I know even this update was absurd but instead of keeping you guys hanging I wanted to assure that this story will be completed anyhow.
I need some motivation guys so please...

Bye!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update dear
Tanveer played her cards of fear in front of dilshad. She assured her that nothing happens this time. Liked najma acts. Precap feels like blastic.
Update soon plz
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
So finally tanveer is going to be exposed?
Good update...


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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey..
The update was really nice..
Short but good..
Keep up your good work...
Loved the update very much.
Excited to know what will happen next..
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Posted: 9 years ago
It was a nice update though I agree it was short..
It was all about Tanveer...
No Asya
Liked Najma here...
N waiting for the precap to come now.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Short update!
Bt thumbs up on writing part!
Nazma was potrayd well
give it a happy ending smhw yar
and then jb tym ho start a sequel

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