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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: PrettYSmile

Awesome update dear...

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Asad should be adament to get his love...n tell zoya how much he loves him.

Nice update 😊


thanks sweety😛
no problem even mine is not working
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not sure😕
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Originally posted by: Asshi...


hey jas🤗
am all fit and fine😃
there pain and everything is connected about Asad accepting to marry Tanveer is whole different here and yes Zoya really maturely accept Asad desicion in show and it was nice to watch!
Haha write am the writer but truly I will not mind hearing all of your suggestions and accepting them too😉 because a writer is nothing without readers

I understand your point and leaving mind am glad that you thought to tell me👍🏼 don't worry I will not rush with romantic scenes but the fact is when AsYa are together then dose of romance came itself also bed scene was aded so that Zoya and Asad forgot little bit of that day and instead remember this😉 Billi is not so much cuning she left many clues but the fact is our heroes never look at it so now when AsYa is on mission she will be exposed easily also you forgot our sweet Tamatar behaviour she has reason too... Overall I will say that AsYa has just one hour together in factory they were alone and things were scattered so falling was easy but the next updates will not hold much romance

Thanks again for your precious and honest coment need it most🤗


Hi Ashi
its been long🤗
& i m replying even much late😳
hope u have r fine dear
well i m glad u didn't mind my POV u r some of really nice writers here & i like it😉

See that's what i mean when u write we sometimes not get writers POV so in comnts like such we get 2 know d difference btw our & writers POV. like here i was thinking 2 romantic scenes were added which were little early thinking seriousness of situation & time period but ur answer that it was 2 tone down d previous memory of ASya on d same place seems appropriate now

Yes billi left many clues & our Mr & Mrs bond will unmask her soon. 😃

Will wait 4 d nxt updt continue soonish & don't thank me didn't i warned u😡😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91



Hi Ashi
its been long🤗
& i m replying even much late😳
hope u have r fine dear
well i m glad u didn't mind my POV u r some of really nice writers here & i like it😉

See that's what i mean when u write we sometimes not get writers POV so in comnts like such we get 2 know d difference btw our & writers POV. like here i was thinking 2 romantic scenes were added which were little early thinking seriousness of situation & time period but ur answer that it was 2 tone down d previous memory of ASya on d same place seems appropriate now

Yes billi left many clues & our Mr & Mrs bond will unmask her soon. 😃

Will wait 4 d nxt updt continue soonish & don't thank me didn't i warned u😡😆



hi jas😃
yeah i know it's late but was caught with internet
hehe no prob afterall real life needs us very much and is much complex
am fine and hope you are too

aww no problem sweeto you can tell me anything and i will not mind instead will feel happy that you are honest also it's my greed too na?😃 I will beytter my writings😃

yup you are right sometimes we think opposite of writer thoughts and theese coments really helps alot. Right that falling one was to remove bad memory with good one.

Yes they will😃

am working on next update only😛 okay baba no thanks but that was to a reader not to friend my cutie pie😉
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Originally posted by: Asshi...



hi jas😃
yeah i know it's late but was caught with internet
hehe no prob afterall real life needs us very much and is much complex
am fine and hope you are too

aww no problem sweeto you can tell me anything and i will not mind instead will feel happy that you are honest also it's my greed too na?😃 I will beytter my writings😃

yup you are right sometimes we think opposite of writer thoughts and theese coments really helps alot. Right that falling one was to remove bad memory with good one.

Yes they will😃

am working on next update only😛 okay baba no thanks but that was to a reader not to friend my cutie pie😉


yeah life keeps u busy sometimes. I m fine 2

U know that's why i like u, u r always kind & sweet which i really like in u. Gives readers chance 2 talk freely wid u widout fearing ur reactions.

yeah will wait 4 nxt part.😛 & still no thankus plz😆. See ya take care🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Salam all!
Am sorry for late update! I know it has been more than month since I updated but am sorry I was stuck in personal problems and couldn't concentrate on stories. But now I managed this update, I hope you guys will like it!


Banner credit to Sameera_12

Chapter 12 - Messed up situations
This chapter is dedicated to MysticRiver and asifiqbalsh🤗

Zoya lay on the bed awake. Everything that hapened in morning keep on floating in her mind. Their close proximity, his intense gaze, her lack of conscious, his touch, their fall, then his confession of marrying Tanveer, her reaction on matter and his consolence just played like movie infront of her. She still felt that hollow and pain in her heart even after knowing that he agree for buying some time maybe, maybe because he is not her anymore maybe because she is away from him yeah he promised to make everything fine but can he fulfil it? Will she be able to trust him like she used to? Will she be able to love him in the same way just like before? Will she be able to see the dreams like before? Will she?

Zoya closed her eyes trying to get rid of all the thoughts but couldn't. She sit on the bed straight, took a deep breath and lay again.

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Asad was eating dinner with Dilshad, Nazma and Tanveer.

Nazma was ignoring everyone's gaze if any fall on her and was eating easily and showing that she is enjoying it while their was storm brewing in her mind and heart, storm of sadness and many other feelings and thoughts. She gave a quick glance to Asad, apologised in heart and looked away before anyone notice.

Tanveer was eating happily in her own lala land. She had saw Asad agreeing to marry her in morning as she was eavesdropping and now she was dreaming to be the bride of Asad Ahmad Khan, to be the rich and then show Razia her place. She proudly sit and eat without caring the Asad's sharp gaze on her.

Asad looked at Nazma and smiled satisfiedly to see her enjoying the dinner but then something enveloped his heart as if telling this is not real Nazma and there is surely something in her heart that is hurting her. Asad's eyes then traveled to Tanveer who was sitting beside him enjoying her food with relish with a smile on her face, he felt disgusted as he saw her actions and smile, her torture on Zoya made him angry but he controlled himself and then a smirk replaced his all feelings as he felt content that she is happy on her marriage with him that will never hapened and she will be behind bars before all this, yes he know that she know about his consent on marriage as he saw her leaving when he say yes to his Ami. He felt disgusted that once he thought her to be his bestest childhood friend and belive her more than his lady love and hurt her to make this disgusting lady happy. He looked away disgustely when his eyes fall on Dilshad and at that time he knew that she is trying to break the news of marriage. He closed his eyes frustrately and wait for his mother to inform about the marriage that will never hapened.

"uhm uhm"Dilshad fake coughed to get everyone's attention

Asad become uneasy while Tanveer was excited to hear the most awaited good news for her. Nazma was confused and afraid too as she knew somewhere that what her mother is going to say.

"I have decided that Asad and Tanveer are going to get married next week. Asad has agreed and Tanveer(turning to her) I hope you will have no problem after what you both did"Dilshad said sternly

If Tanveer had any shame that she must have been dying with shame but alas she don't have any so she just faked it looking down.

Nazma went numb hearing her mother. She looked at Asad and saw him looking down. Her heart sank, she stood up looked at Tanveer harshly and walked away.

"Nazma! Nazma!!"Dilshad called her but she didn't stopped

"what has hapened to her? Why is she behaving so odd?"Dilshad whispered confusely and worriedly

Tanveer stood up and said - "Khala ap fikar mat karain mai dekhty hun"

Dilshad forced a smile and was going to say no but Tanveer walked away without waiting for her reply. Dilshad felt angry but stopped herself.

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Humaira came at dining table and looked at everyone sitting there. She get the faint flashbacks of sitting there with all of them. In a daze she walked near the empty chair where she used to sit and the place still reserved for her. She sit on it. Everyone keep on looking at her and smiled lightly as they feel that their Humaira is coming back slowly.

Humaira looked at every dish present at table. She took a sweet dish and making faces take a spoon. Razia and Ayaan noticed her dismay on sweet dish but were confused.

"Humaira beta why are you eating sweet dish when you don't want to? Try something else"Razia said ever so sweetly

"par ami mai to spicy dishes nhy kha skty na"Humaira replied back

"kyun"Ayaan asked confused

"mujhe nhy pata par itna pata h k mujhe bhut zyada spicy dishes khana mana h"Humaira said

Razia smiled contently and so does everyone as they realized that Humaira is remembering her past slowly.

"ye zyada spicy nhy hain. Tum inhe kha skty ho"Razia told

Humaira noded and started to eat

"I hope k tumhe sab kuch bhut jaldy yad ajaye. Phir tum jo saza dogy wo mujhe manzoor hogy"Ayaan thought looking at Humaira

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The fire was moving like a sea storm, enveloping the whole building. Every part of the place was blazing scaring her. She shouted for help but no one came. She shouts for her mother but got no reponse.

The fire become crazy and rushed towards her, she tried to dodge the attack but got hurt instead. The burn pained her deeply and she screamed in pain but still no one heared her shouts and screams or maybe the one who heared remained deaf ears. Standing between the disaster, she cried heartily calling her mother like a new born kid. A ray of hope brew in her heart as soon she saw her mother, she rushed towards her mother and try to wake her up but she remained silent, sleeping peacefully. Her vision blured as cough increases due to the smoke of flame that was killing oxygen. Involuntarily, she walked backwards, coughing continuously when a blast threw her far away hurting her head badly. Her eyes closes due to some force and the darkness surround her as she fall down somewhere.

Silence! A peaceful silence remained behind when,

"Zoya!"She heared ever so gentle voice that held concern of world.

She fluttered her eyelashes opened trying to see the person's face and only could see a blur face of cute boy with concern filled eyes. She moved her eyeballs to see her mother but saw a man too far from them standing beside her mother, a woman also came near him, she could see her smiling happily while the man standing with a guilt. She tried to see their face but her vision was turning blured and blured and finally complete blackness.


Zoya woke up with jerk, shivering and sweating, shaken to core. She hold her forehead while her breathes uneven. She closed her eyes, calm her nerves and then looked around to found herself in the four walls of hotel.

"it was a dream just a Dream!"Zoya told herself but somewhere she knew neither her heart nor her brain is accepting these words because it felt so real like a part of her life

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Nazma paced in her room. Dilshad's words were ringing in her ears again again. She sit on the bed with frustration when suddenly she saw Tanveer standing

"mai andar a skty hun right?"Tanveer said with wicked smile

Nazma rolled her eyes in irritation and replied back - "you are already inside"

"ohh I know that but the thing is... Am going to be your bhabi so I thought I can come without knocking!"Tanveer said enjoying her position

"yeah right as if I will consider you one?"Nazma replied with mocking smile

Tanveer furrowed her brow

"when I don't consider Mr Asad Ahmad Khan my brother anymore then how can I give you the position of my Bhabi?"Nazma said with a smirk

"Look Nazma I know you love your brother very much and are just angry with him..."Tanveer's calm voice coated with worry was cut off by Nazma

"ohh pleaseee stop using your tricks on me! Yeah tricks! That you used on my so called bhai after which he become fully your's. But, sadly I don't care for him or you so just get out of my room"By now Nazma was seething in anger, the ever so loving Tamatar of her bhaijaan who never got angry was now boiling in anger shocking Tanveer to core

Tanveer gulped as she found herself confuse and soon walked out of her room.

Nazma closed the door of her room and leaned on it, she sat down. Tears make there way from her eyes and the hurt, guilt and pain returned.

She cried her heart out as she remembered the reason behind her this behaviour

Flashback

Nazma was pained on her friend departure and her bhaijaan downfall and pain. She could see her brother paining every moment but she couldn't find the reason of his betrayal. Every time she will sneak in his room only to find him crying or looking at Zoya picture, seeing her brother breaking down every minute pained her and she too cries looking at him. The night before her outburst on Asad, she was walking towards her bhaijaan room when she crossed Tanveer's, she heared some voices so she decided to eavesdrop because she knew that Tanveer is the reason behind all this disaster.

"maine kaha na mai tumhe paise wapis de dungy to matlab de dungy na!"Tanveer said to someone frustrately on phone

Nazma was confused of which money she is talking about

"look I know that you helped me a lot in bringing Asad to that factory and faking all that. I know you need your money for the work but listen let me first marry Asad so I could put my hands on his money"Tanveer said

Nazma eyes popped out in shocked and she stood there to listen more

"shut up okay? He will be mine! And I know how? His sister will do my work. She loves her brother very much and if she will be threatened on his name then she will surely pressured him to marry me!"Tanveer told evilly

Nazma closed her mouth with her palm and stood rooted. She knew that Tanveer is not right person after what Zoya alleged her but she never knew that she is soo much evill. She promised herself to not let her love for her brother destroyed his life.

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After that night, Nazma changed herself infront of everyone especially Tanveer but what confuses her was Tanveer never came to her with threat and today somewhere she got the answer maybe she(Tanveer) listened her Ami desicion of marrying her(Tanveer) with her Bhaijan.

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So how was it guys? So did you guys liked Tamatar part? I wrote it to put light on bro-sis bond which was missing very much in show. Hope you guys enjoyed it!

Next part will be on AsYa again😊

Tada!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
Najma saw asad pain. She acted normal but asad saw that she wasn't normal at all. Dilshad announced asad & tanveer wedding. Flashback was nice. So najma was first one to know abt tanveer doing. Now she knew what she will do. I liked her outburst on tanveer. Bro-sis bonding was wonderful. Update soon plz. Thanks for dedicating update & pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome so this was the reason why najma changed is billi ko jaldi bhagao yaha se

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