AsYa FF : Hopeless end (completed) -Chapter 17 - last part on page 111

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sanarujub

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Posted: 10 years ago

#471

Continue soon and thanks for the pm

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Pragnya Kiran

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Posted: 10 years ago

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hey intresting update pls pm me whn the nxt prt is updated

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sweet_tehs

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Loved the part.

N tamatar was awesome.

But very short update.

Continue soon please don't take long for next part.

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aseela sha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#474

Superb update

Looking forward to read more on Asya

I like tamatar part

Pls update soon

Thanks for pm

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ChipChipiBhaalu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#475

Awesome Part Dear👏😊

Asad is in such a trouble which serves him right. Wat he all did to Zoya 4m day 1 is nothing in front of his problem. He really needs to learn a very hard lesson.

I think d boy in Zoya's dream is Haider n other 2 are Gaffur n Razia. I think Haider was abt to save Zoya but after dat blast, he thinks dat Zoya has died😭.

Humeira's part is awesome. Due to ur way of writing SM part, I sumtyms imagine RS as Ayaan n sumtyms VM as Ayaan. Ayaan n others r happy wid Humeira's progress. Atleast, Ayaan truly cares for Humeira wen he started loving her unlike Asad.

So, d reason for Najma's rudeness is revealed. How come Tanveer wud have used Najma wen at dat time NajRan relationship was not shown in d show?

Zoya's fear is right dat she can't trust n love Asad easily after dis

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Annie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#476

Hi Aashi...I've read all parts and I'm really impressed. Great storyline and the way you write is really amazing dear :)

The pain Asad is suffering serves him right but I can't see him in pain...:( anyway, he needs to understand Zoya's worth in his life and starts respecting her :)

Keep it up dear! Continue soon and do PM me :)

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Asshi...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#477

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh
Nice update
Najma saw asad pain. She acted normal but asad saw that she wasn't normal at all. Dilshad announced asad & tanveer wedding. Flashback was nice. So najma was first one to know abt tanveer doing. Now she knew what she will do. I liked her outburst on tanveer. Bro-sis bonding was wonderful. Update soon plz. Thanks for dedicating update & pm

thanks dear😛
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