AsYa FF : Hopeless end (completed) -Chapter 17 - last part on page 111 - Page 44

Originally posted by: jas91

Hi Ashi

where were u gayab??

hope u r fine

updt was nice

Asya working as team 2 solve d mystery😉

i loved d 2 eyelocks of Asya were beautiful😛

it was really painful 4 both of them 2 visit d same place as it brought pain 4 Zoya & guilt 4 Asad😭

but they got some solid clues i m sure they will unmask Billi soon😡

Asad agreed 2 marry Billi 2 buy some time

although painful but i liked how Zoya maturely accepted that in QH & d reason she gave she told Asad she was proud of him cuz ppl in his place run from responsibility was awesome scene but ofcurse that was painful 4 her that's why when she came face 2 face wid Dillu she burst into tears.

here she was hurt & Asad saw that

d end scene & their silent wishes i wish u make them come true soon cuz tum hi toh writer ho😆

PS- Ashi hope u don't mind this but i just felt it so thought 2 point it out & hope u or nobody else mind that...well i want 2 say 2 plz don't hurry wid romantic scenes i mean Asya falling on that bed or when Zoya was opening backdoor & Asad watching it was nice & i know i was d 1 2 ask u 2 bring some romance & u said in endnote u feel Billi track is being strached 2 much but it was needed 2 buildup d story so now take it easy make it subtle wid adding dose of little romance in each part so don't rush it dear...no1 is running away we r here 2 stay & read ur story😊

hey jas🤗
am all fit and fine😃
there pain and everything is connected about Asad accepting to marry Tanveer is whole different here and yes Zoya really maturely accept Asad desicion in show and it was nice to watch!
Haha write am the writer but truly I will not mind hearing all of your suggestions and accepting them too😉 because a writer is nothing without readers

I understand your point and leaving mind am glad that you thought to tell me👍🏼 don't worry I will not rush with romantic scenes but the fact is when AsYa are together then dose of romance came itself also bed scene was aded so that Zoya and Asad forgot little bit of that day and instead remember this😉 Billi is not so much cuning she left many clues but the fact is our heroes never look at it so now when AsYa is on mission she will be exposed easily also you forgot our sweet Tamatar behaviour she has reason too... Overall I will say that AsYa has just one hour together in factory they were alone and things were scattered so falling was easy but the next updates will not hold much romance

Thanks again for your precious and honest coment need it most🤗

True

Originally posted by: KeyaHira2

True

Its being dragged a bit

No problem

Lets just get rid of Tanveer

I know😆
don't worry now Tanveer will be out but not permanantly

awesome update
loved it😉

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

<font size="6"><font color="#9900FF">awesome update
loved it😉
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thanks sue🤗
glad that you liked it😛

Nice update
They started to collecting clues. Both thought abt same thing. Zoya remembered syringe & told him that she saw some liquid as well. Their small romantic moment was wonderful. Asad told zoya abt his marriage. His confession was sweet & relaxed zoya. Waiting for Tanveer truth out. Plz continue soon. Thanks for pm

ashu...i will read and comment after exams ohkay...😛

Originally posted by: Asshi...

unres soon😳

hay sorry for the lateness;actually Networks&WiFi were jammed overhere

Hi dear update is superb dear