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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -hotsauce-

Lovely start!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice start dear
Zoya was heart broken after what she saw. Liked the way she bravely faced him. She saw injection, may be it will a clue that will sort out that misunderstanding. Continue soon plz. Do pm me. Thanks

thank you! 😊
yeah she was because she trusted Asad but it broke down! Maybe or maybe not! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Credit to Sameera_12

Chapter 1


It was a very painfull night for everyone except for Tanveer who was enjoying her victory

Tanveer smiled happily in her room

"bechari Zoya humary chaal ko smjh hy nhy skky, yahn tak kai jab hum chahte the kai Asad usse dekhe humne usse kitne horror full expression se dekha! phir bhi wo smjh nhy paye. han kese smjhty jub khud itne sadme aur udasi mai thy. Bechari!*and she laughed evilly*(poor Zoya didn't understood my plan, even when I wanted that Asad look at her, I looked at her with so much horrorfull expression still she didn't understand...yeah how can she? When she was in so much shock and sadness)"

She remembered that time when she planned so quickly



Asad woke up with heavy head, suddenly his eye caught his surrounding, he looked around and saw Tanveer. He was completely shocked

Tanveer had already noticed Zoya so she was not able to think what to do as she didn't knew Asad will wake up so quickly. If she replied to Asad queries, as she planned then both will know truth and if she answered Zoya then also will hapened same she didn't expect this

"look at the door not me stupid"thought Tanveer frustrated while Asad get down of bed and looked at her in horror

Tanveer mind worked and she make some horrorfull expressions looking at Zoya. Asad followed her gaze and looked at Zoya he was shocked and as Zoya ran out he also ran behind her.



"she is such a fool and now Asad will be mine his property will be mine"she said laughing horribly

Asad walked in Dilshad room with his bow head and eyes red with tears

"Ami"he whispered

Dilshad was sitting on bed, she quickly stood up and looked away

"what do you want now? Go away please"

"Ami please listen to me once please"he pleaded

"I don't want to listen anything, go away Asad, please leave me alone"she said letting her tears fall

Asad hold back his tears and went away with heavy heart


Zoya stood on roof holding railing and crying looking down. She was drenched completely in her pain and rain both.

"why Asad why? Why did you do this to me? Why?"she cried hardly

She remembered her moments spend with Asad after there marriage fixed. How soft he became then, how much he cared for her then, how much his every care and talks speak that he loves her. How romantic he became than even he prepared a romantic candle light dinner and was going to say something maybe that he loved her.

"he loved me? Then why did he decieved me? Was that all lie? Was he also forced to do that?"she asked herself

She then remembered how he left her always and went behind Tanveer even on the day maybe the day according to her he was going to propose her.

"his first priorty was always that witch Tanveer. He was always more concerned for her rather than me. He lied to me even if it is indirectly that he loved me, he lied!. He was not even going to propose but he act so"she said with pain and anger letting her tears to fall

"I never lied to you! I always cared for you more than her. I was actually going to propose but never could*paused* but today I say maybe it's late but still...I LOVE YOU ZOYA"came Asad voice

Zoya looked on her side and saw Asad standing near her. His both hands on railing like it was his support his eyes red and puffy while head down.

"I loved you from all my heart Zoya, I always did"he said looking at her

Zoya shook her head with disgust. At same time she felt pain hearing those most awaited 3 magical words at such situation.

"how many more lies Mr Khan? You decieved me, you ruined me Mr Khan, and you say that you love me? No you never loved me but try to show so, so that i don't break marriage*she smiled sarcastically*everything is crystal clear Mr Khan, nothing is left to say or anything. The truth is that you loved Tanveer not me you was just marrying me because of your Ami"she said with a killer pain

Zoya start to go but stopped

"but what hurts Asad is that you played with me, you played with my emotions. I was all ready to accept that you wanted breakup when actually you was planing to purpose me maybe*she paused* that too was maybe on your lovely Tanveer wish"saying so she went away

Asad stood there, guilty and sad. He looked at sky who was crying just like them

Zoya locked her room and jumped on bed crying her heart out. Crying at the situation in which they are.

How much she wanted to hear from Asad that he too loves her but today when he did, she even can't be happy as now his every word is lie and conspiracy for her yet don't know why somewhere deep in her heart she know that it's truth.

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So here is first chapter guys! I hope you all liked it😊

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Tada!!!

Chapter 2
Edited by Starry-sky - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: suni_104

Nice update
I loved it
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thank you dear
for sure, I will! After all we both need each other 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved the updatee!
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Edited by -hotsauce- - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -hotsauce-

Loved the updatee!
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thank you 😊
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nce update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved it
Plzz update next part soon n thanks for pm
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it was awesome poor asya i m very eager to know what happens next!

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