AsYa FF : Hopeless end (completed) -Chapter 17 - last part on page 111 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: nilusoni

Gr8 part loved it

Omg such emotional
Wanted to kill that bill I
Excited for next part
Wow a sad finally confessed his love but everything is messed up
Thanks for pm
Plz pm me for next part
Continue soon

thank you dear
after all she is billi 😉
yes he did but now it cannot melt Zoya 😔
for sure 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: sanah12

Hey sis awesome update!!
Loved it to the coree!!!!
Awww zo my baby she is so badly hurt I just feel like strangling that tanveer...
Poor asad he is stuck in a trap and he doesn't realise that nor can he see that witches evil!
Its so sad to see Asya heartbroken and in pain but I'm sure this will end soon..
Do continue asap
Thanks for the pm 😊
Hugs...

thanks sisy your coment made my day 😛
she is hurt after all her trust is broken
i don't think here asad is poor because it is all his fault of blind belief in tanveer and not trusting zoya, so i think he deserve this
it will!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice update dear
Asad wanted to talk to Dilshad but she was not ready to listen to him. His confession was nice but little late. Zoya wanted to hear those words but now it's give her pain. Only tanveer was happy in all that. Continue soon plz. Thanks for pm

yeah he wanted to tell the truth but than dilshad was hurt!
Yet solace too! Ofcourse she will be happy after all her planned was successful yeah?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Starry-sky

don't worry dear my zoya will be strong and give asad hard time too but in different way!
Thank you dear i will look forward for your views always don't know why but your words really inspired me 😉



Zoya always mentally ran after Asad hoping him to say dat d marriage is real n confess to her but he was really heartless wen he said after cumn 4m airport dat d engagement is fake n after he saved her bathtub incident she asked if he meant dis engagement n he said no hurting her feelings even more. I wish Asad to run behind Zoya now n she ignores him so dat he feels wat all he did to her. I always tried to like Asad but cud like him very few times. He was really dumb n worse than Ahil. If he was a little smart being a businessman then he wud check n investigate secretly whether Zoya's doubts r right but he never even trusted her even a little bit even during chicken n fake skin thing? D scene where he forced Zoya to apologize to dat bitch was very humiliating as he brushed her doubts as childish antics n how childish antics will not be tolerated in his house. I really wanted Zoya to slap him n threw his ring on his face for making her apologize to another woman. I even hated Dilshad as she only cared abt her 10 day challenge and a so-called girl to bring rang in her son's zindagi n sudharofy him. She told her by smiling dat she knows abt Asad's anger n wen Zoya told her abt him not trusting her then she again made stupid excuse dat her son is emotional abt his own people. Does dat means sud Zoya always tolerate Asad's anger n insults? According to me, Dilshad never truly loved Zoya. If she loved her truly then she wud not have made them marry so soon dat also by faking her illness. How many times did Dilshad stopped Asad 4m treating Zoya in horrible ways? She claimed to have raised him wid good upbringing. But I can't see any good upbringing where he can treat any women in horrible ways abusing them mentally n physically if they r modern. Dats why, Dilshad disappointed me many times. If she had really given Asad good upbringing then he wud not turn out to be jerk. Ayaan being brought up by persons like Gaffur, Shirin n Razia was 100 times better than Asad. Dat guy was at his best during Vikram track where he was d only one who always believed dat Vikram is someone fake n Rajni is Humeira only. Asad was worse than Ahil.


I am blabbering too much but I am getn attached to dis story which is different 4m others. Zoya is accusing Asad to be fake n doing drama n playing wid her emotions. Glad dat she did not ran into his arms wen he confessed. If she forgives him so soon n accepts him then he will continue to take her for granted, insult her, never trust her, manhandle her n wat not. I wish Gul showed Zoya as a true modern NRI girl but even illiterate village girls have more self-respect n they don't forgive so easily like dumb Zoya. I have seen some stories of PTKK on Zing n there d women r shown giving d men a very hard time if they insult them or don't even stand for them if they r insulted.

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Zoya always mentally ran after Asad hoping him to say dat d marriage is real n confess to her but he was really heartless wen he said after cumn 4m airport dat d engagement is fake n after he saved her bathtub incident she asked if he meant dis engagement n he said no hurting her feelings even more. I wish Asad to run behind Zoya now n she ignores him so dat he feels wat all he did to her. I always tried to like Asad but cud like him very few times. He was really dumb n worse than Ahil. If he was a little smart being a businessman then he wud check n investigate secretly whether Zoya's doubts r right but he never even trusted her even a little bit even during chicken n fake skin thing? D scene where he forced Zoya to apologize to dat bitch was very humiliating as he brushed her doubts as childish antics n how childish antics will not be tolerated in his house. I really wanted Zoya to slap him n threw his ring on his face for making her apologize to another woman. I even hated Dilshad as she only cared abt her 10 day challenge and a so-called girl to bring rang in her son's zindagi n sudharofy him. She told her by smiling dat she knows abt Asad's anger n wen Zoya told her abt him not trusting her then she again made stupid excuse dat her son is emotional abt his own people. Does dat means sud Zoya always tolerate Asad's anger n insults? According to me, Dilshad never truly loved Zoya. If she loved her truly then she wud not have made them marry so soon dat also by faking her illness. How many times did Dilshad stopped Asad 4m treating Zoya in horrible ways? She claimed to have raised him wid good upbringing. But I can't see any good upbringing where he can treat any women in horrible ways abusing them mentally n physically if they r modern. Dats why, Dilshad disappointed me many times. If she had really given Asad good upbringing then he wud not turn out to be jerk. Ayaan being brought up by persons like Gaffur, Shirin n Razia was 100 times better than Asad. Dat guy was at his best during Vikram track where he was d only one who always believed dat Vikram is someone fake n Rajni is Humeira only. Asad was worse than Ahil.


I am blabbering too much but I am getn attached to dis story which is different 4m others. Zoya is accusing Asad to be fake n doing drama n playing wid her emotions. Glad dat she did not ran into his arms wen he confessed. If she forgives him so soon n accepts him then he will continue to take her for granted, insult her, never trust her, manhandle her n wat not. I wish Gul showed Zoya as a true modern NRI girl but even illiterate village girls have more self-respect n they don't forgive so easily like dumb Zoya. I have seen some stories of PTKK on Zing n there d women r shown giving d men a very hard time if they insult them or don't even stand for them if they r insulted.

am really amused to see your anger for asad and dilshad but I must say you are right
don't worry here Asad will get permanant lesson for his mind i can't tell you what am planing but will tell that here zoya will be strong 😊
and no problem about more blabering because i really loved to read your coments 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Starry-sky

am really amused to see your anger for asad and dilshad but I must say you are right
don't worry here Asad will get permanant lesson for his mind i can't tell you what am planing but will tell that here zoya will be strong 😊
and no problem about more blabering because i really loved to read your coments 😛


I have read much bigger blabbering than dis😆. Not only me but there r many people who were irritated wid Asad as well as Dilshad. Dilshad never paid attention to wat Asad has become. Her words to Zoya were usually nonsense wen she gave stupid excuse abt his abbu past n all. Well, his abbu is not orthodox n judgemental like him. Isometimes wonder wat wud have been d situation if Ayaan was born to Dilshad n Asad born to Shirin. Ayaan wud have been more sweeter while Asad wud have been more irritating. I can't believe Dilshad cared abt a stupid challenge n to win dat challenge she used her own son n Zoya pushing them them to get married in 10 days dat also to d people who never got along wid each other n were not sure of their feelings. She only cared abt her challenge n abt her so-called gentleman son. Lets see wat u show😉.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I want to clear somethings please read it

Clearifications

1.There was no doll factory incident before this track because it was all crap i will write it on my own way 😉

2.Tanveer came at Asad place by chance not on Razia's order

3.Razia doesn't know that Zoya is Gaffur's daughter

If there is anyother thing that is confusing you all than please ask without hesitation
I will update the chapter tomorrow or maybe tonight don't know

Tada!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I read the chap and it was just fantastic . Loved it dear , do continue soon
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Originally posted by: Texie-Shady

I read the chap and it was just fantastic . Loved it dear , do continue soon

thank you dear
will do it for sure maybe tomorrow 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thanx for all clarification
eagerly waiting for update
continue soon
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