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mahwash

@Mahu34

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Raingoddess
Hey! Omgsh I am so sorry for such a late comment! 😒 I had recieved ur pm so long ago n read this as soon as it was updated. But unfortunately because of snow my internet was down n my fone takes forever to type out comments lol so I could not type out my entire comment. I apologize again! I love leaving feedback whenever I read! Anyway back to the story lol I have to say I loved the update! 👏 It was emotional and at first I thought the child belonged to Sanam but then as the events slowly unfolded it was much more interesting n not cliched at all! I have said this before, you writing has a certain intrigue that makes it very unpredictable and equally interesting to read! I loved this update and being privy to Aahil's thoughts created a deeper connection with his character! So SeHan are separated as well! I cant wait to see things unfold and how the lovers reunite! Also excited for the romance n passion between them 😉 😆 Also interested to see where the prologue fits in! Anyway thanks again for the pm and plz do update this wonderful story soon ❤️

Okay, first of all I need to take a deep breath and come down from the seventh cloud I'm resting on right now...

Right..

Thank you so much for loving the update, darling 🤗 You're seriously one of my favorite reviewer of all time. I totally love reading them and they always make my day so damn better. 😳

Awww.. I'm blushing like I don't know what.. Seriously, thank you so much for the kind words. I don't even deserve them, but really.. Thank you ☺️

Don't worry, everything will soon be explained. SeHaan will make an entry as well, which I'm sure you're going to love.

And of course, the story is filled with angst, comedy, love and some pretty deep passion filled dialogues.. Now you've been warned, darling 😆

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mahwash

@Mahu34

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Tannakstar
OOOHHH 😲

THERE IS A SERIOUS RISK THAT I SHALL BECOME ADDICTED TO THIS.

Seriously.

What a storyline!! How did you think of this? Absolutely brilliant so far! The Daughter, Sanam leaving, how he found out about Tanveer, are Rehaan and Seher separated or are they in touch? So many questions!!

Love it!

Do PM me on updates pretty pretty please?

Tannu

Thank you sooo much, darling 😆

Trust me, even I get surprised at myself of how I come up with these kind of stories... You don't want to be in my brain when I'm about to start a story 😆 It can be pretty crowded.

Ah, so many questions yet so little time. :D Everything will be explained. I just hope you'll enjoy the next few updates.

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mahwash

@Mahu34

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: najma123
Wonderful! Loved it! A daughter too? SO CUTE! And so different!

Thank you! I'm so glad that you liked the idea of the story. 🤗

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mahwash

@Mahu34

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: farz_parachute
Heyyyaaa my darling sweetheart!

I know I knowww I'm a lil late here *just a lil...Coz super late...thats me elsewhere, ;) heee*

Okay so.

This is what I'm gogoing to do!

I'll comment for the prologue first...(Coz I've only just started reading..whooops)

I'm so attached to it already! Imagine! Only prologue so far I've read. Bookmarking this for a few days already and only now coming to it...you must hate me right? Please..pleaseee don't.

You know I'm an ardent (and almost loyal) fan of yours! I'll work on the loyalty part. ...be there for you, in every step.

I love Aahil looking at her that way. I'm all filled with suspense...what happened here, why did he not think her love is for him? Oh my heart filled with such joy when she looked at him with all that love.

They're made for each other, and I'm only at prologue. :')

You know what I like most about you? You don't? Okay even I don't know. There are so many excellent qualities I find in you. One of which is that you write with such conviction and clarity that I'm always fully immersed in it when I read. And imagine, even for this stir, you've proven the exact same, and again. ..like I've mentioned at least 15 times now, this all you've shown, and I'm only at prologue. I can only imagine what the other parts would be.

Okay before I annoy you any further *yes annoy being the operative word here coz I know I don't bore you ;)* I'll just go *I mean there's chapter 1 that needs reading!! woohooo*

Love you loads! Mwah mwahh!

Alrighty ..

Farruu.. My darling! My sweetheart! My cutiepie! Mine!

Darling, there's are no need to apologize, besides you might have heard; Deer aye, durust aye, no? 😆

NOOO! Don't you dear say the word; annoy! You're reviews are ⭐️❤️

Have I told you just how much I LOVE and CHERISH your awesome reviews? 👏 You're one cute lil reviewer that knows how to cheer someone up. You totally made my day so much better and I had this ongoing smile on my face - and it's all because of you! <3

You have no idea how close that prologue is for me. It actually came while riding the bus for my uni. And then *whoosh* The prologue was in my mind while I was going crazy on the phone trying to write it all down. 😆 I know.. It's so crazy..

And you're right, Farruu.. I use a lot of time to feel and write down the emotions that the characters might go through . Or at least, I try to do so. 😳

So here it is again, You're reviews are something I will never ever get tired of reading. 🤗

Bring on review number #2.

*Goes to read the second review of my cute and awesome reviewer - Faruu.*

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mahwash

@Mahu34

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: farz_parachute
Oh wait wait I forgot something.

The banners!!!!

Always always leave me all hayyyeee. Nghhh!

And you're featuring SeHan here, I'm overjoyed! So glad you're finding them inspiring to write on too! Yayyy! Awesome you are! Coz you write on my favourites!

Okay really am done.

I'll come back after chapter 1.

Maybe.

If you don't hear from me in the next 24 hours, chances are I can't let my eyes off of that chapter. I mean, come on. It's you!

Hehe.

Haha, I'm happy to know that you loved the banners. 😆 Of course when our dear Nawab is present with his handsomeness 😉

I had to include SeHaan. They are way too cute together. I simply love their chemistry ! Haayeee..

Awww.. You're being way too kind to me. I so wish I could hug you right now, so I'm sending you a warm hug 😳🤗

Hope you enjoy 1st chapter, darling. ! <3 Love you!!

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Esha

@Raingoddess

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: mahwash22

Okay, first of all I need to take a deep breath and come down from the seventh cloud I'm resting on right now...

Right..

Thank you so much for loving the update, darling 🤗 You're seriously one of my favorite reviewer of all time. I totally love reading them and they always make my day so damn better. 😳

Awww.. I'm blushing like I don't know what.. Seriously, thank you so much for the kind words. I don't even deserve them, but really.. Thank you ☺️

Don't worry, everything will soon be explained. SeHaan will make an entry as well, which I'm sure you're going to love.

And of course, the story is filled with angst, comedy, love and some pretty deep passion filled dialogues.. Now you've been warned, darling 😆

Ur welcome you truly deserve it 🤗 Aww thanks for saying that ❤️ I love reading ur work and it always wonderful to give feedback and then look forward to the next part! Your writing is always intriguing and has me hooked from the first prologue itself! I will heed ur warning and keep reading cuz thats what I love 😉 😆 Passion, intensity n angst is what I love along with some comedy n soft romance lol So plz update soon 😊