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@-Awaari-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

This is amaaazing ^^

I just cant wait :D

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Azraa

@Azraa01

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Aahil is alone raising a child, but why did Sanam and Seher leave??

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Heyyyaaa my darling sweetheart!

I know I knowww I'm a lil late here *just a lil...Coz super late...thats me elsewhere, ;) heee*

Okay so.

This is what I'm gogoing to do!

I'll comment for the prologue first...(Coz I've only just started reading..whooops)

I'm so attached to it already! Imagine! Only prologue so far I've read. Bookmarking this for a few days already and only now coming to it...you must hate me right? Please..pleaseee don't.

You know I'm an ardent (and almost loyal) fan of yours! I'll work on the loyalty part. ...be there for you, in every step.

I love Aahil looking at her that way. I'm all filled with suspense...what happened here, why did he not think her love is for him? Oh my heart filled with such joy when she looked at him with all that love.

They're made for each other, and I'm only at prologue. :')

You know what I like most about you? You don't? Okay even I don't know. There are so many excellent qualities I find in you. One of which is that you write with such conviction and clarity that I'm always fully immersed in it when I read. And imagine, even for this stir, you've proven the exact same, and again. ..like I've mentioned at least 15 times now, this all you've shown, and I'm only at prologue. I can only imagine what the other parts would be.

Okay before I annoy you any further *yes annoy being the operative word here coz I know I don't bore you ;)* I'll just go *I mean there's chapter 1 that needs reading!! woohooo*

Love you loads! Mwah mwahh!

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Oh wait wait I forgot something.

The banners!!!!

Always always leave me all hayyyeee. Nghhh!

And you're featuring SeHan here, I'm overjoyed! So glad you're finding them inspiring to write on too! Yayyy! Awesome you are! Coz you write on my favourites!

Okay really am done.

I'll come back after chapter 1.

Maybe.

If you don't hear from me in the next 24 hours, chances are I can't let my eyes off of that chapter. I mean, come on. It's you!

Hehe.

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mahwash

@Mahu34

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: SprinklesOfLove
Wonderful! Loved it, some parts of the story are started to make sense now. Feel bad for Aahil here, his only support now is his brother, Rehaan!

Why did the sisters leave though? Oh and Aahil has a daughter, Imaan! Beautiful name.

Please continue soon, can't wait to read the next chapter :)

I'm really touched by your wonderful words. I'm glad that you can see how the prologue fits to the story-line.

Yes, he's only got his brother and his daughter to be there for him. Those years has been rough on him but let's see what happens next.😉

Thank you for such a great review. You'll soon find out why the sisters left.

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mahwash

@Mahu34

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: siyasharma94
nce prt
ahil is already father of a7 years old grl
sanam lft ahil..hope she cmebck soon in nxt update may be 😉

continue soon...
thnks 4 the pm

Yes! She left him which made him regret a lot of things. But you'll see in the story how he has been without her.

Hmm.. Maybe she'll make an appearance in the next chapter. 😉

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mahwash

@Mahu34

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: sahil333
Great update!

Aahil is father of an 8 yr old girl? Nice.

😲 But, so sad to hear that his love sanam has left him 😭.

Oh dear, what's the problem !!! 😔

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Thanks for the pm!

(maybe I sound like a broken record, but pls. if you can give a translation of the Hindi/Urdu part, that would be wonderful)

Yeah... I needed some angst to start out with the story. (I have a thing about dark angsty kind of romance 😆)

I promise you'll soon get to know what the problem is between SaHil. But first of all, thank you for the awesome review. I'm so happy to know that you enjoyed the first part. 😳

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mahwash

@Mahu34

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: PrettYSmile
Simply beautiful...

Ahil really should experience this distance...
The way he is treating her...

Grt going.

Thank you so much! <3 Even I feel the same way, but let's see what happens on the story. I hope you'll enjoy the next part as well. 😊

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mahwash

@Mahu34

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: sageflower7
Oh i love sad wistful tales...
Lovely start mahwash...

Wonder why Sanam left him and that he was forced to give her space... very intriguing. ..

Very curious to see where you're going with this!

Thank you so much, darling ! 🤗 It's such a honor from me to read this review from you. Ah, yes the separation .. I just had to use it to begin the story.

I hope you'll enjoy the next chapter, sweetie 😳