New ASYA OS: A Little Lost A Little Found

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-silentbang-

@-silentbang-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Loved it... The way asad tried to tell her ... Was so adorable😳

Thank you for pm😃

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Heyyy...Choco :-P well it was nice to read something from you after a good gap...well coming to the Update...it was really suprising yet satisfying update...both Asad & Zoya are having feelings they never felt before for anyone but can't seem to stop themselves for feeling them for eachother...well i don't remember Asad ever giving back that earing to Zoya in the show...but atleast here the earing went back to its owner...Dilshaad and Zoya shared such a lovely bond...you know there are many FF's i have read with different concepts and relationship status...but i noticed it that Dilshaad and Zoya were always as this caring and loving towards each other everywhere...still After finding out that Asad had held her Earing his hostage she did questioned him directly...but waned to clear her heart also about these alien feelings...i had a feeling that Asad would have almost confessed his love but he controlled himself...and then...Asked for freindship...so true and practical...loved it...continue soon with something new and thanx for the P.M...

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: nilusoni
Awesome loved it
Asya talk is wow
Plz pm me for your next work

Thank you Nilu di 😃

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: nilusoni
Thanks for pm

You're welcome 😊

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: cale
Loved it... The way asad tried to tell her ... Was so adorable😳
Thank you for pm😃

Thank you Cale. Glad you liked it 😃

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Heyyy...Choco :-P well it was nice to read something from you after a good gap...well coming to the Update...it was really suprising yet satisfying update...both Asad & Zoya are having feelings they never felt before for anyone but can't seem to stop themselves for feeling them for eachother...well i don't remember Asad ever giving back that earing to Zoya in the show...but atleast here the earing went back to its owner...Dilshaad and Zoya shared such a lovely bond...you know there are many FF's i have read with different concepts and relationship status...but i noticed it that Dilshaad and Zoya were always as this caring and loving towards each other everywhere...still After finding out that Asad had held her Earing his hostage she did questioned him directly...but waned to clear her heart also about these alien feelings...i had a feeling that Asad would have almost confessed his love but he controlled himself...and then...Asked for freindship...so true and practical...loved it...continue soon with something new and thanx for the P.M...

Aww thank you Mayur. Am happy to see that it was satisfying to read thia and looked practical. Thank you for reading dear 😊

Something new I will try as and when I can take time out. Life is becoming a lil difficult these days. You wouldn't believe it but I was trying to write this one for almost 20 days. It took forever to finish cause of lack of time. But promise I will try 😃

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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Wow yaar.. that was just soo amazing. .!!
All those asya's memories came back..
Loved the os..:)
Thank for such an awesome one..
Loved how asad took care of zoya here..
nd it was soo cute "friends forever."..:)
Superb 👏
plzz wrote more like this..
love your writings. .:*
Thank u..:)

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rajsmi

@rajsmi

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Ah...these cute Asya OSes...cant get enough of them :-)

Nice one!!

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Saima Syed

@Saima-Syed

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: ChocoBerry
Res for Sis, Nims and Ankie 😆

Thank you for ressing my spot Choco

An absolutely beautiful OS, so simple and heartwarming

It had a brilliant mixture of every emotion, the conversations between Dilshad and Zoya made me laugh, her monologue when she was pondering whether she should look through his draw...and mostly the conversation she had with Asad.

The stepped foot into a beautiful bond, friendship one that will grow with them and then they will fall head over heels in love..

I loved it Sis

Mwah

But love you more 🤗