New ASYA OS: A Little Lost A Little Found - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
Retiring to bed with a big smile on my face.


😃


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Reserved!



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Unreserved!


"A little lost A little Found" - The little Found - Was magical!



"The strong fragrance of his cologne seemed to be reaching out for her, slowly engulfing her. She closed her eyes and took in another deep breath feeling her body relax, her stomach summersaulted and her heart did a funny flip flop."



This was so profound in context of love, yet not so because this is just the beginning of their journey.



"Is it better... Does it hurt now?"


I don't know why, maybe because I saw the picture recently but I imagined the expression on his face when he kneeled before her after breaking the musical memento to the quoted dialogue.


The sort of mechanical Q & A was endearing.



"Yes, I did. The same place you told me it could never be"



As brazen as Zoe was on the show, AsYa always kept little moments between themselves clandestine, sometimes even from Ammi too, this was one of those intimate ones and Zoe's explicit dialogue was a refreshing change. Though when she was searching for the earring with Dilshad I wanted them to find it together but it was her discovery to make alone.


Friends! 🤪 I guess that's a good place to start! 😆

Edited by p_s05 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
Oh man, how I wish this happened on the show, but alas Asad never got to return the earring to Zoya did he? I don't quite recall. This was an absolute pleasure to read, it is really well written and I am so glad I discovered this forum, there seem to be so many talented people on here that are keeping AsYa alive.

-Meera
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Aww this is just cute
Friends forever
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
ALLAH MIYAH WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOU? You just made me so nostalgic man, I miss AsYa so much! This was AMAAA-ZINGGG. Haiii, I wish this happened on the show, sighhh. I love how you incorporated the fact that the drawer is where Asad keeps his cherished memories, and it's where the earring ended up.

*tear tear*

itni khushiii!

*fangirls b/c mental image of Asad carrying Zoya away*

*fangirls b/c I can hear Zoya saying "Asad" for the first time*

*cries b/c my bbys never got a happily ever after*

Thank you for writing this! <3

You know what I feel like doing sometimes, re-writing all of QH from the first episode but the way normal stories go - there aren't any crazy best friends and people out to kill you!

XOXO,
Anjali
Edited by astonm - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Excellent' this is one of the vital part gul didn't utilize properly! U did it well... Superb writing...wish it happened in d show too!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
awww such a sweet os it was
asad ki chori pakdi gai
n they became friends
n asas is waiting to make her his!
awesome
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Aiaa kuch show main kyun nahi hua ?? 😭

Jahapana Six Packs ☺️

I so miss him 😭

Kash koi lauta de purane din ... 😒

But without billi 🤢

I hate that meow 🤢

OS was very cute 😛

Dilshaad and Zoya bond

Asad ka behaving like a Lovestruck Teenager 😆

Zoya finding the earing😃

Asad running like uski chori pakdi gai 😆

Next when you writing ??😳
Edited by Niya_789 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Awesome OS..😳
Keep Writing on AsYa.
Wish this could have happened in Show..
Thanks for pm..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: -ABI-

unres
well it was Amazing
&
I Love it



Thanks lil Bro. Hope you're well 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: cutie15

Wow yaar.. that was just soo amazing. .!!
All those asya's memories came back..
Loved the os..:)
Thank for such an awesome one..
Loved how asad took care of zoya here..
nd it was soo cute "friends forever."..:)
Superb 👏
plzz wrote more like this..
love your writings. .:*
Thank u..:)



Hey thank you dear you made me smile wide 😃.. Am so happy you loved it 😃

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