ASYA SS- Dotted Line- Chapter 12 Updated- Page 143

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Shaila Banu

@Shailu..

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#921

Awesome update aww asad ask her for dance love asya moments n rain sequence also continue soon😊

Edited by shailu123 - 10 years ago

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anopama

@anopama

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#922

Love the update

Absolutely beautiful

So love asya growing towards each other

Their text they don't talk much but text at least anything

So learning slowly abt the other

Aww the feelings can't stop it glad he took her to his parents grave

He brought her lunch but didn't interrupt too much fun he didn't want to be the solemn one

But boy when he loosen up he sure does

So the dinner omg the complement the man has a way with words

So he danced can't believe it he danced with her

Love the rain the chai the football game his personal cheerleader

Aww he twirled her

And they hugged each other and walked home

Great advice Zoya give him let it go

All the burdens forgive the past and move forward all has suffered

Will he take her advice he said he will try

Continue soon

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Aashka

@Chillichick

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#923

Very beautifully written.

I think this update will be the most favourite and i don't think even them confessing verbally will be as beautiful as this because somewhere unknowingly they have accepted each other.

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kaju27

@kaju27

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Posted: 10 years ago

#924

loved this update...they are getting close nd realising it too...
loved their texts to each other...
rain part was amazing...especially the song...

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#925

MY CHILD IS BETTER THAN ME 🤣

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KeyaHira2

@KeyaHira2

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Posted: 10 years ago

#926

Now this chapter was serene

I loved the Rain scene

I could just imagine everything

❤️

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aniha

@Aniha

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#927

Hello !!!! 😕
I even didn't reads the last two chapter . Hopefully will read and comment here soon 😳 Will tell more after 😛

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#928

Ayeshad paaa ball khelse

Moriya geci tho ami.

Obbak hoye takitisi

Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 10 years ago

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Kanwal4salman

@Kanwal4salman

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#929

wonderful update..
M again in love with asya..
Their slow but strong journey toward love is so beautiful..
U have written and describe thier feeling beautifully..
Cant wait to read more plz try to update soon..