ASYA SS- Dotted Line- Chapter 12 Updated- Page 143

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jasmine ansari

@AMMY12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#931

Awsm update
Cute one.
Luvd it.
Plzzz cont asap
Thnx for d pm
T.c

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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#932

Wow this was awesome. . I'm so loving asya in this story..
they are superb.. I loved it..:)
The way they both trust each other and getting more and more comfortable with each other is just so soothing to read..
I'm so excited to read more of it..
update soon..:)

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Amin21Khpulwak

@Amin21Khpulwak

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Posted: 10 years ago

#933

Brilliantly written👏

very beautiful update⭐️

love it😊

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Gourav

@Shubh007

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Posted: 10 years ago

#934

Awesome & Cute Update...👏

Just Love It...😊

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Gourav

@Shubh007

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Posted: 10 years ago

#935

Every Scene Was Beautifully Written...👍🏼

Update Next Part Soon...😃

Edited by Shubh007 - 10 years ago

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-Prinky-

@-Prinky-

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#936

Amazing !!!!!! 👏👏

i can't explain Sadia...how beautifully you portrayed AsYa here...the way both are dealing with this new born feelings...its seems so natural...

Their little talks...messages...his feelings reading that "us" in her message...her frown on his reply but again reasoning herself that he was busy...his doubt seeing her happy with ayaan & the next moment reminding himself the promise...& his way of using words to compliment her..."You look serene"...the intensity of the word...ohh Sadia I can imagine how Zoya may feel when she read it...

Then the most beautiful part of this update...Rain...the significant part of their journey...this time rain drenched them with the new joy...that slow walk in the rain...with each other...Asad's reaction when she said..."I enjoyed with you"...& the song was so perfect..."Jo degi haath tu , dunga main saath yun, main tere saath hoon, chal ab chal pade"...that are truly for them...

Their trust in each other...that is the magic of their relationship...

Such a brilliant job dear...👏👏 Loved the every bit of it...& I mean it...

continue soon...

Thanks for pm 😊

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Alone111

@Alone111

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#937

Wwooowww it was sch an amzng updt swapno...
Loved it... Loved d way u wrote..
I enjoyed their convo...
Song seq was awesome..
I totally loved dis updt...

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#938

Beautiful , Esctatic and Blissfull...
It feels real for some reason...but then All good things in life are ficitious..
Have no proper words to explain...but very very Good chapt.
Continue soonish..

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#939

Nice update
Loved it.
Liked the way zoya told him that she like his company, wish she said everything which she thought. She told him to forget the past & move on. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm