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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting concept
Nice update
Both live separately but living together. Their office time was wonderful. I didn't understand one thing why asad is guilty. If it's bc of rashid so he shouldn't be. Plz continue soon. Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Interesting concept
Nice update
Both live separately but living together. Their office time was wonderful. I didn't understand one thing why asad is guilty. If it's bc of rashid so he shouldn't be. Plz continue soon. Thanks for pm


asad is guilty bcox of rashid as zoya forgives him easily and breakes her relations with her father so he is guilty that how can she love him like this ans accept his family wholeheartedly he thinks that she deserves more so he is fighting with his inner thoughts hope u got my point...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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asad is guilty bcox of rashid as zoya forgives him easily and breakes her relations with her father so he is guilty that how can she love him like this ans accept his family wholeheartedly he thinks that she deserves more so he is fighting with his inner thoughts hope u got my point...



I got it now.
Thanks for explanation
Hope asad will come out from his guilt soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yeah buddy i m going to update soon just typing and all u knw...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aashii dear i love this story\
Pls update soon

Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: aseelashah

Aashii dear i love this story\

Pls update soon

Thanks for pm


dear i m working on it update is on the way...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh



I got it now.
Thanks for explanation
Hope asad will come out from his guilt soon


yeah he will but after some separation as the title says: separation is my main point in this story but i can guarantee u that u will enjoy it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Salam... thank you sooo much for ur support... i know its a sad story but i am sure u will not regret reading it... so without wasting more time here is the next part hope u enjoy...


Part 2:

Zoya was really happy after meeting Asad... after so many days she felt like she is alive and all because of beautiful moments she spent with Asad... Next 2 days went in blur and now Najma was at SM and all the preparations were done but Asad was not arrived yet... Zoya was angry at his behavior but for the sake of family members she never showed her anger... but Radil were totally aware of her mentally situation but they decided that when Asad will come tomorrow they will talk to him personally...
Next morning Zoya wake up and as per her routine she talked to her imaginary Mr. Khan... she was in a good mood but suddenly she felt a strange feeling inside her and before she can figured out what's going on she was throwing up in the washbasin...
Zoya: Allah Miyan... aj ke din to fit rakhna tha function hai or Mr. Khan bhi ghar aa rahy hain plzzz mjhy abhi bemar nahi hona etna kaam hai ghar main or...
She was talking to herself when she again throw up... she was feeling very nasty... she got ready and made her way downstairs... she skipped her breakfast due to frequently throwing up but she managed to hide her sickness from others... The function was going to start around 4pm so all family members were really excited after all it's a welcome function for a new family member... all were ready for the function but Zoya was in her simple baby pink salwar suit because she wanted to get ready Najma first and after this she can get ready...
Soon the guests arrived and all were blessing Najma and her unborn baby... some elders were asking her about mornings sickness and how she is feeling now and all... some aunties share their experiences to provide more knowledge to Najma... There was a lady who just gave birth to a baby boy 3 months ago and Najma was asking her silly questions... Zoya was going in her room to get ready when she stoped in her tracks because Najma and the other lady were saying that in pregnancy the more tiring thing is morning sickness and frequent throwing ups... Zoya remembered her vomiting and placed her hand on her tummy and thinks is it really possible???
Zoya was in her own thoughts when Dilshad scolds her and ordered her to get ready but she made her way outside the house... she reached to the nearest medical store and bought a pregnancy test kit... she came back home where all the guests were arrived... Nikhat informed her that everybody was asking for her but she asks her to manage it for sometime till then she get ready...
Zoya came in her room and directly went to washroom and brought out pregnancy kit from her purse with shaking hands... she was in dilemma to do the test or not??? But she composes herself and gives it a go... After 5 minutes the result turned out to be positive and Zoya was hell shocked with the outcome... she blinked her eyes for the several times but it was showing the same result... she was worried that how will Asad react after all they got married recently and tears made their way and but she was sure that Asad will be on cloud nine after hearing such news... she thanked her Allah Miyan for such a beautiful gift... she fresh n up and came out of washroom...


Zoya stood in front mirror and apply kohl, mascara, baby pink lip gloss and she was done... she wore a pair of Kangans gifted by Dilshad but her earrings were missing... she was searching in the drawers but suddenly she felt a pair of arms on her waist from behind and she froze but soon she recognize the touch of the most important person in her life and spoke...
Zoya: you are late...
Asad: I m sorry but you are not ready yet so it's not a big deal haina...
Zoya: wo kesy???
Asad: agar meri biwi ready ho kar wait karti to mjhy zaida bura lagta...
Zoya: I missed you... she said leaning on him...
Asad: I missed you too... he said while nuzzling her neck...
Zoya: Mr. Khan we are getting late or mere earrings bhi nahi mil rahy...
Asad: I have a surprise for you close your eyes...
Zoya: Mr. Khan app...
Asad: ssshhh... he said while placing a finger on her lips...
A shiver ran down her spine and without wasting more time she close her eyes... Asad made her wear a pair of new earrings and asked her to open her eyes... she looked at her new earrings and then looked at her hubby through mirror...
Zoya: yeh kis khushi main???
Asad: bas wesy hi dil kar raha tha k apko gift don...
Zoya was happy because some moments ago she find out that she is expecting and now Mr. Khan is gifting her such a wonderful coincidence...
Zoya: thank you Mr. Khan or mjhy apko kuch btana hai...
Asad: Mrs. Khan actually I have decided something for both of us and I really need your support...
Zoya: Mr. Khan you are scaring me is everything alright???
Asad: everything is fine but you have to stand beside me actually...
They were intruppted by Dilshad...
Dilshad: Asad wesy to tumhy apni biwi ka bilkul khayal nahi hai ab tum dono apna romance bad main continue karna nechy sab wait kar rahy hain...
Zoya: ammi app kyun Mr. Khan ko dant rahi hain hum bas nechy hi aa rahy thy...
Dilshad: dekha kesy tumhari side leti hai...
Asad: haan to biwi kiski hai...
Dilshad left the couple...
Asad: function ke bad hum dono bahir ja rahy hain mjhy app se boht zaroori baat karni hai...
Zoya: Mr. Khan mjhy bhi apko kuch btana hai...
Asad: lets go warna ammi phir se aa jayengi...
AsYa came together and blessed Najma and her unborn baby... Zoya excuses herself and went towards the middle of the hall and suddenly lights went dim... all were confused but a spot light was enlightened on Zoya and she started the dance...
Eli re eli, kya hai yeh paheli
Aisa vaisa kuch kyoon hota hai saheli
Meri angdaaiyaan
Meri angdaaiyaan, meri tanhaaiyaan
Meri angdaaiyaan kitni akeli
Nikhat and Nuzhat too joined her...

Eli re eli, kya hai yeh paheli
Aisa vaisa kuch kyoon hota hai saheli
Tu du rum, tu du rum tu du rum
Tu du rum, tu du rum
Zoya came forward and sang while watching out Najma...

Chali hain ab ke baras na jaane
Kaisi yeh hawaayein
Chaloon main laakh sambhalke
Par kadam dagmagaaye
Na jaane kyoon aisi baatein
Mere dil mein aaye jaaye
Ke meri saari saheliyaan mehndi lagaaye
Zoya forward her hand to Dilshad and sang...

Main bhi aage kar doon apni hatheli
Eli re eli, kya hai yeh paheli
Aisa vaisa kuch kyoon hota hai saheli


Asad was watching her moves and soon their eyes locked but Nikhat came and broke their eye romance... Zoya continues...

Kahan hoon, main to yahan hoon
Bas main to yahin hoon
Na jaane dil hai kahin mera
Aur main kahin hoon
Na aisi soni hoon main
Na main itni haseen hoon
Ke dekhoon darpan to lagta hai
Yeh main nahin hoon
Nikhat teases her and continues...

Oye oye koi dekhe meri yeh atheli
Eli re eli, kya hai yeh paheli
Aisa vaisa kuch kyoon hota hai saheli
Zoya, Nikhat and Nuzhat again danced together...

Eli re eli, kya hai yeh paheli
Aisa vaisa kuch kyoon hota hai saheli
Tu du rum, tu du rum tu du rum
Tu du rum, tu du rum
The function came to end and Zoya was with Najma in her room and helping her out in changing and all... Asad was about to go in his room when Rashid stops him...
Rashid: Asad we need to talk... in my room... after 5 minutes...
Asad: abbu mjhy Zoya ke sath...
Rashid: I m not asking you just come In my room or haan Dilshad ko bhi le kar aana... saying so left...
Asad was confused with Rashid's behavior... he informed Dilshad and they made their ways towards Rashid's room...
Asad: abbu apko kya baat karni actually mjhy...
Rashid: that;s my point Asad har time tum tum or bas tum... tumhary iss ego k samny koi or matter hi nahi karta...
Asad: abbu apko jo kehna ha saaf saaf kahieye...
Dilshad: Asad tum kyun nahi samjhty tumhary iss behavior ki vaja se Zoya par kya guzar rahi hai wo bhaly hi kuch na kahy par hum janty hain uss par kyaa beet rahi hai...
Asad: ammi abbu main job hi kar raha hoon apny or Zoya ki khushi k liye hi kar raha hoon...
Rashid: uski khushi tumhary sath rehny main hai Asad or tum uss se dor ho rahy ho why can't you understand...
Dilshad: Asad tum yaha kyun nahi reh sakty kya problem hai yaha???
Asad: ammi iss ghar main mera dum ghut'ta hai...
Rashid: wo kesy???
Asad: yeh app poch rahy hain abbu... iss ghar ne meri ammi ki khushiyan cheeni hain or main wo sab nahi bhool sakta...
Dilshad: par beta issi ghar ne mjhy mera sab kuch wapis kiya hai main kuch nahi janti tum ab kahi nahi jaogy...
Asad: ammi main yaha nahi reh sakta...
Zoya knew that Radil are going to force Asad but she can't let them force him and she made her way towards Radil's room and stopped at door...
Rashid: Asad main manta hoon tum yeh sab meri galti ki vaja se kar rahy ho par tum inn sab ki saza Zoya ko nahi dy sakty...
Asad: abbu main ussy koi saza nahi dy raha app log galat samajh rahy hain...
Dilshad: Asad tum kyun nahi samjhty hum sabko tumhari zaroorat hai or Siddiqui Sahab bhi issi vaja se yaha se shift ho gaye kyun k wo nahi chahty thy k unki vaja se tumhy or Zoya ko koi pareshani ho...
Asad: ammi mene unhy yaha se jany ka nahi kaha tha main kuch time akela rehna chahta tha...
Rashid: par in sab main Zoya ka kyaa qasoor hai...
Asad: qassor sirf apka or Siddiqui Sahab ka hai abbu...
Dilshad: Asad abbu hain tumhary tum unhy aisy kesy keh sakty ho...
Asad: sach to yehi hai na ammi k mjhy abbu ki galti ki saza mil rahi hai or Zoya ko uss k abbu ki galti ki saza...
Rashid: aik minute Asad main manta hoon mene galti ki or sath main Siddiqui Sahab bhi thy par Zoya ka inn sab se kya lena dena wo to...
Asad: beti hai wo uss insaan ki jis ne meri maa ka ghar barbad kiya yaad haina apko...
Zoya just held her breathe to understand what's wrong with Asad... he can't blame me for her father's sins...
Dilshad: par Zoya ka in sab se koi taaluq nahi hai...
Asad: jis tarha mjhy meri abbu ki vaja se saza mil rahi hai ussi tarha Zoya ko bhi yeh saza sehni hogi ammi...
Rashid: tum galat ho Asad...
Asad: janta hoon abbu par yeh sab mene app se virasat main lia hai na ab kuch nahi ho sakta... saying so he left the room...
Zoya was standing near the door but manages to hide from Asad... she was silently crying on her destiny... here she was going to give him such a great news but he was blaming their relation, their love and their togetherness for the cruel past... she wipes her tears and decided that she will never force herself on him... never and ever... and their child will never let him change his decision... she was ready to listen Asad's decision with open mind...
On the other hand Radil were praying to God to keep their children together...
Rashid: sab meri galti hai Dilshad or aj meri galti mere bacho k liye saza ban gai hai...
Dilshad: Rashid app fikar mat kejieye Zoya ussy samjhaye ggi na bas app Allah pe bharosa rakhieye...
Asad came in their room but Zoya was not their... she came after 10 minutes...
Asad: kahan thi app mjhy app se baat karni hai app plzz mene sath chalieye...
Zoya: Mr. Khan main bas fresh ho kar ayi...
Zoya came in washroom and cried her out... she placed a hand on her tummy and spoke...
Zoya: Mr. Khan I promise main or mera baby apky decision ko dil se accept karengy... or agar Allah ko hamara sath rehna manzoor nahi to mjhy bhi Allah ki raza
"Qubool Hai"...

Precap: Zoya faints...


Sooo that's it...
how's it?????
ignore my mistakes...
leave ur precious comments plzzz...
next update till 40+ likes and 20+ comments...
with love Ashii...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey aashi...just red both the parts
sorry for the delay
it's an amazing start
sad one but glad that asya are together even when they r far
and let me tell you that i love sad stories😳
especially those one which can bring tears in my eyes 😭
u know i cry when i write emotional parts in my stories too😆
i loved this one too...
do continue soonish...
i m dying to know that wht will happen nw
thnks for pm
Edited by asyaarshilover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update
Zoya was happy after meet asad. She was pregnant that's a wonderful news. Rashid called asad in his room. He told him that both fathers were responsible for their problems. Zoya wanted to share the happy news with asad but stopped after hearing it. She decided whatever asad decide for them, she will accept it. Plz continue soon. Thanks for pm
Edited by asifiqbalsh - 11 years ago

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