Thread#1 AsYa SS 'Separation... No Moreee' Thread#2 Page 1

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Salam all... I m Ashii... I m going to start a new story on AsYa... Actually i just can't live without Asya... in my free time i m just imagining Asya and only Asya and let me tell u this story will be emotional one but i m sure you guys will love it... So here you go...


Separation... No Moreee


Banner Credit goes to: Immortal Love 🤗

Plot:

Asya got married in front of the symbol of love "The Taj Mahal" and they were enjoying their married life... It was the day of their Walima (same as they showed) and they become one in all senses last night
but their happiness were ruined by Tanveer... She tried to kill Rashid but Asad catches her red handed so he made sure she will spend her entire life in jail so there is no "Billi"... Rashid got saved and every body was happy with his recovery now he can walk and talk easily... Shireen also came back home... Asya were too happy and they arranged a small get together for family members... Ghafoor came and announced that Zoya is his long lost daughter and Haider clarifies it... Asad was shocked with turn of events but he ignored it for Zoya's sake because he knew that Zoya has always craved for her father... But Zoya broke all her relations with Ghaffor when he confesses about her mother's murder... So Ghaffor and Razia made their ways out of the house... Haider supported her Chutki... Rashid and Dilshad also try to console her but she told them she is doing all this to justify her mother... Asad never spoke to her because his own father was her criminal but she forgives him easily so he was guilty... Asya were living under a same roof on a same bed but like strangers... They were fighting with their inner thoughts... Zoya was going crazy with the thought of being Ghafoor's daughter Asad's biggest enemy... On the other side Asad was guilty... 2 weeks have passed like this... Haider and Humaira moved to Dubai... Rashid transferred the house and his company to both his wives... Nuzhat and Nikhat were happy because now they all siblings will remain under the same roof forever... Ayan was in London and he apologies Humaira but he was happy for Humaira and Haider... Najma was 5 months pregnant and was living in Khan Villa with Imran...

Asad was so busy in his work... He came late at nights and leaves early in the morning for work... Zoya was disturbed with his behavior... Dilshad was aware of their miss understanding but she concluded that they have to face that problem on their own...
Next day Asad was packing a bag when Zoya came and spoke...

Zoya: Mr. Khan hum kahi ja rahy hain?
Asad: Hum nahi main ja raha hoon wo actually mjhy boht kam rehta hai ghar pe late aata hoon subja jaldi jana hota hai...
Zoya: Par app ja kahan rahy hain...
Asad: Zoya main KV shift ho raha hoon vaha se office zaida pass hai to...
Zoya: Achaa to main bhi aati hoon bas main packing kar loon... she was opening her closet when he spoke...
Asad: Zoya agar hum dono gaye to ammi abbu ko lagy ga hum ghar chor k ja rahy hain or Shireen ammi shayad samjhen hum unki vaja se ja rahy ain to app yahi rahengi sab k sath...
Zoya: Mr. Khan app...
Asad: Plzzz Zoya mene decide kar lia hai app yahi rahengi...
Zoya: Okay... saying so she left the room...
Asad was really angry on himself but he needs a time to decide something for their future...
Dilshad was too upset but Zoya made her understand the situation...
Asad left the house and shifted to KV with Najran...


Sooo thats it???
Kesa laga??? Ignore my mistakes plzzz...
Asad is not going to think about divorce and all sooo plzzz aisy ideas apny mind se bhaga do sab log...
Hit Like and leave ur comments and tell me should i continue or not???
With Love Ashii...
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AkaiBara thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Love it... u write stories in jet speed and nonetheless they are sooo good. ...sometimes I think I dont hv the capacity to comment on ur stories compared to the speed u update...coming to story, great plot... the space will defo show them what they miss...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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very interesting
excited for updates
thanx for pm
plz pm me for updates
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Really nice plots
mi AsYa so much!
Wish it happened like this in the show! 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting continue soon 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting..
asad is shifting 2 kV coz of guilt
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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very interesting concept👏
Asya fighting there inner demons
start soon😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: asyaloveu

Love it... u write stories in jet speed and nonetheless they are sooo good. ...sometimes I think I dont hv the capacity to comment on ur stories compared to the speed u update...coming to story, great plot... the space will defo show them what they miss...


its my pleasure you like it...
and yaar dnt feel hesitant in commenting i truly respect ur comments...
thnx for being here...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: jas91

very interesting concept👏

Asya fighting there inner demons
start soon😃


thnx nd i will cont. soon

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