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Posted: 11 years ago
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LOVELY ASHI
AWESOME
ASAD SHIFTED KV
NICE CONTINUE SOON
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice concept
But I am not liking asya separation
So billi jailed rashid fine gafur truth out
Asad was fine her knowing her Abu and accepting it
But he is guilty bcuz his father is a part of her mother demise
And she is guilty bcuz she is asad biggest enemy daughter
So now he is moving to KV and tells her to stay with his parents in SM
Not nice asad
Is she pregnant yet and tht would unite them
Continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thnxx nd i wil surely pm u
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: anopama

Nice concept

But I am not liking asya separation
So billi jailed rashid fine gafur truth out
Asad was fine her knowing her Abu and accepting it
But he is guilty bcuz his father is a part of her mother demise
And she is guilty bcuz she is asad biggest enemy daughter
So now he is moving to KV and tells her to stay with his parents in SM
Not nice asad
Is she pregnant yet and tht would unite them
Continue


actually i love separation tracks bcox it turns out to achieve more heights of love...
yeah both r not communicating but will be togather soon...
zoe is not pregnant...
their union will be amazing so u have to be here nd i m sure u will love that...
thnx buddy...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Salam... Thank you sooo much for liking my new concept... ur comments really mean a lot to me... its a separation track but i hope u will surely love it so i m here just to post 1st chapter for you guys and after reading it plzzz tell me honestly what you want...

Separation... No Moreee


Part 1:


In early morning as the sun rays entered the room she turned to the right side of the bed and a tear escaped from her eyes and she immediately wiped it off and creases the other empty side of the bed...

At the same time he woke up from a sleep of 4 5 hours and he turned to the left side of the bed creases the other side of the bed and spoke...

Asad: Good Morning Mrs. Khan...

Zoya: Good Morning Mr. Khan...

Asad: App etni jaldi kyun uth gayi...

Zoya: Aap yaha pe nahi hain na mjhy tang karny k liye...

Asad: Hum sath nahi hain to kya hua par hamara pyaar to hamesha sath hai na...

Zoya: Issi pyaar ki vaja se to main yeh doori seh rahi hoon...

Asad: Mjhy thora time chahieye Zoya...

Zoya: Mr. Khan main apka wait karongi but you have to come soon warna main app se baat nahi karongi...

Asad: Bas main khud ko iss guilt se bahir ly aon phir hum sath hongy "hamesha"...

Zoya: "hamesha"...

It was 10th day after Asad moved to KV but they daily imagine each other and try to communicate by just being talking like other is hearing his/her... They moved to their respective bathrooms to get ready for the day... Asad left for the office without having breakfast and Zoya moves towards his dost's room to inquire about his health...

Zoya: Assalam o Alaikum dost... aj kesa feel kar rahy ho...

Rashid: Main to acha hoon par tumhy aisy behave karny ki zaroorat nahi hai mjhy pata hai tum ro kar ayi ho...

Zoya: dost app janty hain na mjhy yeh typical ladies ki tarha rona acha nahi lagta...

Rashid: par apny dost se jhoot bolna to aata hai na...

Zoya: dost plzzz...

Rashid: achaa Asad ka phone aya???

Zoya: nahi wo office chaly gaye hongy na...

Rashid: 10 din ho gye ussy gaye huway or sirf 2 bar ghar aaya wo bhi bas raat k time aisi kya majboori hai jo ussy apni hi biwi se nahi milny deti...

Zoya: aisi baat nahi hai dost...

Dilshad entered the room and spoke...

Dilshad: Miss understandings hain jo yeh clear nahi kar pa rahy...

Zoya: Ammi app bhi... or waisy bhi main bhi to 4 bar Mr. Khan se milny gayi thi to aisa kuch nahi tha...

Rashid: tum milny gayi par wo har dafa meeting main tha Zoya or bas usy khana dy kar aa gayi issi milna nahi kehty or wo call bhi to nahi karta...

Zoya: dost he is busy...

Dilshad: tum kyun uski side ly rahi hi ho 2 din bad Najma bhi yahi aa rahi hain goad bharai ki rasam k liye mai uss se bat karongi k ghar wapis aaye warna tumhy bhi ly jaye...

Zoya: Ammi app aisa kuch nahi karengi or agar mere yaha rehny se problem hai to main kahi...

Rashid: agar ghar se jaany ki baat kon kar raha hai dost hum chahty hain tum dono sath raho...

Zoya: dost hum aisy bhi sath hain...

Dilshad: or jo dard tum dono chupa rahy ho uska kya???

Zoya: mjhy iss bary main baat nahi karni aj main lunch ly kar ja rahi hoon oe Mr. Khan se baat kar k hi aongi khush???

Rashid: hamari khushi tum dono k sath rehny main hai bacha...

Dilshad: haan or tum uss se jitna jaldi ho bat kar lo warna main tum dono ki nahi sunogi...

Zoya: Okay ab baty bad main nashta karty hain na sab wait kar rahy hongy...

After sometime, Zoya called Prasad...

Zoya: Hello Prasad... Mrs. Khan here...

Prasad: Yes mam app ne kyun call ki main khud apko call karny vala tha aj sir k pass lunch time main 2 hours free hain or mene unhy kaha aik special client aa rahy hain to app plzz time se aa jaiye ga warna sir...

Zoya: Thank you Prasad or main time se aa jaongi bas Mr. Khan ko pata nahi chalna chahieye...

Prasad: Son;t worry mam and sorry mam mjhy jana hai sir wait kar rahy hain hope you don't mind...

Zoya: App ne mere liye etna bada favor kia thanks again and bye...

Zoya: Ya Allah aj to Mr. Khan ko mere sath lunch karna hi hoga akhir appointment li hai...

Zoya prepare his favorite dishes and packed them and she too get ready in a sarree because she want to surprise him that too by wearing his gifted sarree...

Asad: Prasad jaha tak mjhy yaad hai aj main lunch time free tha mjhy ammi se milny jana tha or tum ne pata ni konsi meeting fix kar di...

Prasad: Sorry sir but client special hain...

Asad: Special client matlab...

Prasad: Sir wo... his phone rand and he excused himself to answer the phone...

Asad turned his chair and mummers...

Asad: Aik to pehly mjhy kuch samjah nahi aa raha uper se yeh business Ya Allah main kyaa karon vaha Zoya bhi...

Prasad: Sir client aa gaye hain main unhy bhejta hoon...

Asad: Hmmm... he said with turning...

After a minute he heard the twist of door knob and in a flip he felt a pair of soft hands on his eyes and he immediately recognize his wife his Zoya and he placed his hands over her hands...

Zoya: Kesa laga surprise... she whispered in his ears...

Asad: Boht acha...

He got up from his seat and hugs her with all his power...

Asad: I missed you so much...

Zoya: Not more than me Mr. Khan...

Their hug was not an ordinary hug but it was the symbol of love, pain and hurt which both were facing from so many days... and they don't wanted too broke that hug... Asad's hands were roaming on her exposed back and Zoya was ruffling his hairs...

Asad: Mrs. Khan saree wo bhi mere liye not bad...

Zoya: Ab kya karein app kuch karny ko kehty hi nahi hain to mjhy hi khayal aa jata hai...

Asad: Mjhy nahi pata tha main etna lucky hoon... he said while cupping her face...

Zoya: Mr. Khan i m the lucky one etna handsome hubby mila hai...

Asad: I love you...

Their faces were too close and noses were touching... They can feel their breathes on their faces and their heartbeats were providing a background music for such a beautiful moment... They were about to kiss but a sound of clearing throat bring them out of their romantic moment...

Prasad: Sorry sir but i m here just to tell you that next 2 hours are totally free so...

Zoya: Thank you Prasad...

Prasad: Any time mam... and he leaves...

Asad: Mrs. Khan aap ne mere PA ko apni side pe kar lia or aj uss ne mjh se jhoot bola k meri meeting hai par main ghar aany vala tha...

Zoya: Mr. Khan main na Prasad k boss ki boss hon or app usy kuch nahi kahengy or app etna time kyun waste kar rahy hain lunch karty hain na or mjhy pata hai app ne breakfast bhi nahi kiya...

Asad: Apko kesy pata...

Zoya: Biwi hoon apki or yeh halat kya bana rakhi ha dark circles or glasses Ya Allah mere handsome shoher ne kyaa haal bana rakha hai...

Asad: Mrs. Khan main boht busy hoon aj kal time nahi hai par app kyun panic ho rahi hain apko apky vohi valy Mr. Khan wapis milengy...

Zoya: Paka na...

Asad: Paka... ab khana khayen boht bhook lagi hai...

Zoya dragged him to the sofa and made him sit and then she served him food...

Asad: Mjhy aisy nahi khana...

Zoya: Mr. Khan ab apko kesy khana hai...

Asad make a morsel and feed her with his hands...

Asad: Aisy khana hai mjhy...

Zoya was very touched by his demand... she can feel his pain by looking in his eyes... she was on verge of crying but she controls herself from crying in front of him and she started to feed him with her hands... AsYa were feeding each other with tears in their eyes... After lunch Zoya made his black and bitter coffee with a little bit of suger which he drinks without arguing... After chit-chatting for some time she made him lie down on her lap so he can rest for sometime...

Zoya: Mr. Khan app ghar kab ayengy... she said while playing with his hair...

Asad was enjoying this moment and he closed his eyes so that he can preserve that moment...

Asad: Zoya... mjhy vaha boht suffocation feel hoti hai...

Zoya: Par wo apka ghar hai Mr. Khan... sab log vahi hain ammi, dost, dadi, nikhat or nuzhat...

Asad: Main vaha nahi aa sakta Zoya mjh main himmat nahi hai... he said with tears brimming in his eyes and hug her from waist...

Zoya: App vaha nahi aana chahty or mjhy bhi apny pass nahi aany dety Mr. Khan ab mjhy se yeh sab nahi saha jata... thak gayi hoon main apka intezar karty karty app hum dono ko saza dy rahy hain...

Asad: I m sorry Zoya par mjhy kuch time chahieye...

Zoya: Mr. Khan mjhy samjh nahi aa raha apko kya sochna hai kya karna hai main samjh rahi hoon app andar hi andar kuch soch rahy hain apki aankhein saaf saaf keh rahi hain app kitni takleef main hain par app khud ko or mjhy kyun saza dy rahy hain??? she said with tears in her eyes...

Asad: Zoya mjhy boht guilty feel hota hai par jab tak main khud ko iss guilt se bahir nahi ly aata apko bhi mera sath dena hoga... he said while sitting besides her...

Zoya: Main hamesha aap k sath hoon bas main apko aisy nahi dekh sakti...

Asad: I promise Zoya main boht jaldi apko apny sath ly jaonga... he said while wiping her tears...

Zoya: Mjhy bas app k sath rehna hai and that's it...

She throw her arms around his neck and hugs him... he too reciprocates with equal passion... they were crying their hearts out but Zoya was unable to control herself... her sobs were becoming louder... Asad just can't let her become weak because her believe on their love is his only strength... Asad was telling sweet nothings in her ears to calm her down and it helps...

Asad: Zoya look at me...

Zoya: No i can't...

Asad: Look na... he said while placing a finger under her chin...

Zoya looked at him with red puffy eyes...

Asad: App chahti hain na k main app k pass jaldi se wapis aa jaon???

Zoya nodded her head in approval...

Asad: So you will not cry again promise me...

Zoya just cry again and hug him...

Asad: Zoya agar app himat haar jayengi to main kya karonga plzzz meri khatir hamary pyaar ki khatir...

Zoya: App mjhy chor to nahi dengy na... and here she reveal her biggest fear...

Asad: You are my last breath Zoya or main apko kabhi nahi chor sakta or agar mene aisa socha to main mar... he was going to complete his sentence but Zoya shut him up by placing her lips on his lips...

Zoya knew that her fear is just a insecurity Asad loves her unconditionally but she was going crazy with such thoughts so she asked but Asad's reply made her believe that they will be together in good and bad days but he was going to talk about his death and she can't bear that thought even for a second so she just kiss him to stop him from saying such rubbish...

Asad was too shocked with her sudden kiss but he can feel her pain when he told her such things... he knew she will be mad at him but he didn't expected a kiss...

AsYa were totally lost in that moment they just feel the togetherness of their lips and after satisfying their needs they kissed... Asad was nibbling her lower lip so that Zoya was treating his upper lip... Soon a sweet kiss turned in a passionate kiss and after enjoying their kiss they broke apart and rested their foreheads together...

Zoya: Ainda aisa kuch kaha na to kiss ki bajaye thapar se jawab mily ga...

Asad: Or agar ainda app ne aisa soch na to respond karny ki bajaye office se direct apny bedroom main ly jaonga... he said while pecking her lips...

Zoya: Office main reh kar kuch zaida hi badtamiz ho gaye hain app???

Asad: Ab kya karon biwi jo pass nahi hai...

Zoya: Now stop teasing me mjhy ghar jana hai...

Asad: Zoya stay na...

Zoya: Mr. Khan app bhool rahy hain yeh apka office hai and mjhy shopping pe jana hai iss weekend pe Najma ki goad bharai jo hai...

Asad: So mean Mrs. Khan apko apny shoher se zaida shopping azeez hai...

Zoya: Zaida drama karny ki zaroorat nahi hai app jaldi se kaam khatam kejieye or ammi ne strict orders diye hain k function se pehly aap ghar hoon and no pending work at all...

Asad: Okay boss...

Zoya: That's like my good husband... ab iss se pehly k Prasad time limit khatam hony ka kahy mjhy car tak to chor k aaiye...

Asad: Aaiye mam...

Zoya: Miss me haan... she said while sitting in car...

Asad: Drive safely and ghar pohnch kar inform kar dena... Bye...

Zoya: Bye...



Sooo that's it...
kesa laga??? achaa ya boaring???
Ignore my mistakes haan...
Hit like and leave your precious comments and suggestions as well...
Next update till 30+ likes...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
It was happy update
Asya miss each other so much
loved zoya's suprise vist
Well written
do pm me
Edited by smj7 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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super cute update
full of asya👏
conti soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update..
loved it.
awww they miss each other alot..
radil r so good
loved Zoya surprise visit..
ASYA convo is much needed here..
n they kissed 😳 love it
continue soon aashi
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome part
asya understanding was wow loved it
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
It was a feel good wala updt
enjoyed reading it
continue soon😛

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