Asya - I Have Fallen for You (COMPLETED - Chap26 - pg 88 )(06/09/15) - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Linsie

So far ... is good.. taking more details...
story moves...
keep it going...


Thank you...nd every detail here hold some importance...just wait ...thank you for your constant support.. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
hey I...read all 3 parts in one go..its awesome...
awww Zoe baby is so selfless..
I like zoes nightmares...v vl get 2 c caring asad during that time...
hope asad finds out truth n helps Zoe...
excited fr dillu budday
continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
Superb update dear
i love it

if u can pls pm me next time

thanks for the pm Linsuuu

its getting more interesting😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
It was so cute!
Update soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
nice story...
continue it soon n pm me please
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Nice story. Read all 3 parts.
Looks interesting.
Plz send me pm for next parts.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
CHAPTER-4

.nxt morning...
Asad got up at 6:30 and got into zoyas room to check on her ...he moved towards rhe bed she was sleeping but her head was slightly hot ...he realised it was fever..

Suddenly she got up...

Zoya:- what...I'm sleeping ...why dint you wake me up Mr Khan ...she said...suddenly she put her hand on her head...there was sharp pain...

Asad: zoya you ok...
Zoya: ji
Asad: ms Faroouqi lagta hai aap abhi se budhi ho gyi he...he said smirking
Zoya: bhudhi me my foot...her head was banging with pain...
Asad: ms Faroouqi hold on aap kuch Der rest kijiye breakfast ban jayega to ill call you...

Dilshad saw Asad coming out of Zoya's room...
She was confused seeing Asad at this time in,Zoya's room...

...Asad's room...

He called Dr. who visited Dilshad once a week ...he was supposed to come next day but Asad called him that day itself...

...
Najma has already left for the college...Dilshad asked Asad to call Zoya for breakfast...as its late already...Asad went to zoyas room...knocked...no response...

Dilshad: Asad why do you called Dr sahib today beta ...I am fine...

Asad came back to dining area as Dilshad called...

Asad: nhi ammi bas yuhi...

Dr done dilshads checkup and told that she is fine bit should continue medicines..

Doctor: I should leave now...

Asad: wait a minute ...vho actually ...hamare yha ek guest hai Jo kal Raat faint ho gyi thi...aap ek bar unhe bhi dekh lete to achha hota...

Doctor: ji bilkul ...

Dilshad: kya hua Zoya ko beta ...vo thik to hai..

Asad: ammi aap tension mat lijiye bas shayad halka sa bukhar hai ...Dr sahab dekh lenge...
Dilshad understood Asad's purpose of visiting zoyas room
Nd was happy seeing asad's concern for zoya...as he never was so affected by others...apart from his family...

...zoya's room...

Zoya was sleeping when everyone entered ...the doctor touched her forehead ..

Doctor: she is having fever

Zoya, suddenly got up ...seeing all of them she said...

Zoya : Mr khan apne itnese fever ke liye Dr ko bula liya...

Asad : ms Faroouqi rat ko jis halat me aap uthi thi ...nd fir faint ho gyi...aap use itnasa kheti he...

Zoya: par..
Dilshad was not getting anything but for now zoyas health was top priority

Dr : I am giving you this medicine just take it ...one tablet now and if you feel like one in evening...

Dilshad: ji abhi to usne breakfast bhi ni kiya...vo medicine kese le sakti he

Dr: koi bat nhi kal dinner kiya hoga na...to le sakti hai

Zoya: vo phupphi me Raat ko khana khana bhul gyi

When Dilshad was handing her a glass of water
Asad hearing this was feeling more guilty...he remembered his shouting ...her sobbing..

Dilshad: kya...tumne kal last tym kitni baje kuch khaya tha.??

Zoya: vo phupphi actually...kal subhe breakfast kiya tha...phir tym hi ni Mila nd ghar aane me late ho gaya so mai so gyi...

Dilshad: zoya ...I never expect this from u beta...to be so careless about your health..

Asad: you didn't had anything since morning and the you were awake for whole night nearly...means I saw your room's light..( Asad covered up...seeing dilshads expression.)

Dr: you may eat something..and take the medicines you would be fine...nd dear your eyes are showing you cry a lot ..don't do that beta...its bad for health too

The doctor left...

Dilshad then noticed Asad's, coffee cup near the couch ...nd zoyas cup nxt to it nearly full...

Dinning hall...
Dilshad: zoya eat properly or else I will call your appi, nd tell her all about it..what happened...

Zoya: no phupphi I have ate very much nd my stomach is full..

Dilshad: Asad i am leaving please...do look that this girl eat the lunch on tym..

Asad was still thinking what the doctor said " she cries a lot" but why..

Dilshad : Asad I am going to dargah will return in evening or may be night...pls see she eats properly...Allah hafiz

Asad: ji ammi Allah hafiz
Zoya : bye phuppu ...Allah hafiz

...

Zoya: Mr khan let's start we have to finish the preparations before phupphi come home ...nd have to hide it all till tewelve o'clock...

P.S.- tell me how it was ...nd IF not allowing to send pm to al sry ...


Edited by 5shanaya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
its lovely...
asad cares for her and call the doc...
zoya again being selfless so asad is going to baby sit her not bad...
update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
lovely update...
asad is so caring...
dillu momma is thoda confused 😛
can't wait fr d surprise ASYA planned fr dillu.
continue soon

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