Asya - I Have Fallen for You (COMPLETED - Chap26 - pg 88 )(06/09/15)

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<p align="left"><font color="#990000" size="7" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Prologue:
</font><font size="4">Asad and zoya were living in the same house for the past 2 months...Asad don't like her was quite evident...
But seeing his sister and mother open up was quite new for him
Both of them were like two entirely different personalites
Zoya who easily mixed up with people and Asad a complete introvert
For one family is everything and for other...is completely unaware about what family is

Two people so different ...don't know what fate hold for them . ..

P.S.-tell me should I write any more...
Nd jutta chappals accepted... 😃 😉 ...and you would know about the character as the story proceeds...also there background may be slightly different..
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INDEX -
CHAPTER 1 - page 1
CHAPTER 2 -PAGE 4
CHAPTER 3-PAGE 5
CHAPTER 4 -PAGE 8
CHAPTER 5-PAGE 10
CHAPTER 6-PAGE 11
CHAPTER 7-PAGE 16
CHAPTER 8-PAGE 18
CHAPTER 9-PAGE 20
CHAPTER 10-PAGE 21
CHAPTER 11-PAGE 22
CHAPTER 12 A -PAGE 24
CHAPTER 12 B-PAGE 26
CHAPTER 13 -PAGE 27
CHAPTER 14 A-PAGE 29
CHAPTER 14 B-PAGE 32
CHAPTER 15 - PAGE 35
ASAD's POV on CHAPTER 15 - PAGE 37
CHAPTER 16 - PAGE 41
CHAPTER 17 -PAGE 53
CHAPTER 18 - PAGE 58

CHAPTER 19 - PAGE 67

CHAPTER 20 - PAGE 70
CHAPTER 21 - PAGE 73

CHAPTER 22 - PAGE 76

CHAPTER 23 - PAGE 78

CHAPTER 24 - PAGE 82
CHAPTER 25 - PAGE 85
CHAPTER 26 - PAGE 88(COMPLETED)
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Chapter 1

It was another morning in the khan mansion...as usual Asad was reading newspaper and zoya walked . For a change she was wearing a red kurti teamed up with black jeans...and a high ponytail...she was looking beautiful ...when Asad was about to take a SIP of his famous black coffee...he saw her...without blinking...jusr then najma squelled Zoee you are looking amazing...
Zoya: thank u tamatar..
Dilshad:meri zoya Jo bhi phenti hai vo use compliment karta hai

...Asad in his own house was feeling out of place...at the moment he felt he was sitting in miss farooqi's house...

Asad:ammi I am leaving for office
Najma:bhaijaan wait a minute I am also coming ...drop me to the college on the way
Asad: tamatar jaldi karo dusro ki tareef karne me tum late ho jaogi...(said he shooting a glare towards zoya)

Zoya glared him with same intensity...and then pouted

Zoya: Mr khan aap tareef Nhi kar sakte ye muje pata tha kyuki aap emotinally challanged hai ...par muje nhi pata tha aap jealous bhi hai...

Asad: Jealous !!in yor dreams ms farooqui ...chalo tamatar...said he with a smile on his face...

Dilshad was happy seeing their daily bickering

...in the car
Najma: bhaijaan 2 days later its ammi's bday...nd I am having my exams ...so you have to prepare it all alone...take zoya's help
Saying that she ran out of the car

Asad: but listen tamatar...
Shit...Ms Farooqi's help...help me allah...
... ...

Zoya had an hectic day nd she was late reaching home...she was broken from inside as in this two months she had left no stone unturned to find her abbu...nd today also she returned from the mazar empty handed...she began to lose hope...with all these thoughts she rang the bell if the house ...with tears already in her eyes due to the days disappointment ...

The door was opened by Mr khan...who began to shout on her giving her a lecture on her tehzeeb and tameez ...but he stopped suddenly seeing her not reacting...actually not listening to what he was saying

Asad : Miss faroouqi are you listening...or do you think that its your New York where you can come and go any time and your parents won't bother ...your cell was switched off you din't tell anyone where are you going...what work you do Mrs Faroouqi...

Zoya looked up ...her eyes blood red...

Zoya: sorry Mr khan ...I won't repeat it again..zoya left sobbing to her room

Dilshad dint knew what happened as she was in her room resting

Seeing Zoya's tears Asad realised like many times he have over done it...


...At night...
After the breakfast she had not ate anything ...her stomach was filled by disappointment of the day...the greif,and cherry on the cake was Mr khan's anger towards her...

She slept and sleep engulfed her...till...

P.S. tell me how it was ...

Edited by 5shanaya - 10 years ago
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It was really good
Do continu the story
And update soon
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lovely update...
cont. soon
count me in for this story...
pm me for nxt update plzzz
Edited by falak333 - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: falak333

lovely update...

cont. soon
count me in for this story...
pm me for nxt update plzzz

sure dear...😊
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Hii ... intresting one..

I would like it if u continue. .its really nice.. .
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Originally posted by: PrettYSmile

Hii ... intresting one..

I would like it if u continue. .its really nice.. .


Sure...if you people out there like it then I will continue...
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Nice story.
Love to read more.
Pls continue.
Update soon.
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👏 great kindly continue

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