#5 - AsYa/KaBhi FF : My Mental Love ! PART 20 - PART 23 ! Go #6 ! - Page 90

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Posted: 10 years ago

ISKe liye main black coffee bhi peena ko tayar hoon !! ☺️ ❤️

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Posted: 10 years ago
Salaam Bano...well thanx alot for such a beautiful comment ...i can't stop smiling while reading it...you know i think as you as a writer is attached to a your story like a parent i feel like a guardian to it for praising when it is great and pointing out flaws...i speak what i felt while reading it...and not just for typing a comment...and one more thing iam always looking forward to ALL THE HUGS which you write in every of your stories...they are just out of the world experiences for me...totally blissful...and about zoya for this story it is a very brave journey for her to deal with all those cruelties...and then slowly slowly gaining her confidence and trusting people...i think iam not even eligible to speak about her..ahh...just continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mayurchan7

Salaam Bano...well thanx alot for such a beautiful comment ...i can't stop smiling while reading it...you know i think as you as a writer is attached to a your story like a parent i feel like a guardian to it for praising when it is great and pointing out flaws...i speak what i felt while reading it...and not just for typing a comment...and one more thing iam always looking forward to ALL THE HUGS which you write in every of your stories...they are just out of the world experiences for me...totally blissful...and about zoya for this story it is a very brave journey for her to deal with all those cruelties...and then slowly slowly gaining her confidence and trusting people...i think iam not even eligible to speak about her..ahh...just continue soon...


Waleikum Salaam 😃
Thanks to u for te beautiful comment and i'm the one who cannot stop smiling ! 😆
Yes u exactly got the point, we writers r attached to our stories because we ourselves go through things while writing them, for an example when AsYa fought for the first time in this story (when they got to know that there were complications in the pregnancy), just writing that fight had made me cry 😭 even when Zoya got her miscarriage, i couldn't write more because i felt depressed 🥺 we r very emotionally attached with our stories because we kinda made thzm d created them along with the characters 😳
Hahaha yeah ! Because i feel like hugs r very meaningful 😳 ❤️
Yes thats the point of this story , where i show the journey of a lover who is ready to do anything for his love and is ready to wait for her for the rest of his life and then another who has to fight to get whatever she wants after going through a huge injustice has to make her life back on track ❤️
Awww u r so sweet !! 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik


Aswww ! 🤗
Haaawww not fair ! *pout* 😆
GK killed them but she gave damn good tracks like Mangalpur, Akram, Mr. And Mrs. Jahanpanah Bond on gudiya factory, bhang pakode, visa, holi, airport sagayi, etc ! ❤️
which scene is this one ? but yeah he's looking drop dead gorgeous ! ☺️ ❤️


😆 oki I'm chorry
ya she gav us ASYA ..they r unique...
bt she gave zoyan nikah 🤢 isliye I'm angry on her
e wala scene after that choreographer leaves ..jealous Miss.Farooqui wala scene k baad...Zoya practices dance.. so asad is watching her...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik


ISKe liye main black coffee bhi peena ko tayar hoon !! ☺️ ❤️

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mai bhi 😉 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Main pehle se piti hun 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik


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An tum blush kar rahi ho ? 😲 😆
If u r 23 and immature main bhi 16 but still immature ! 😆
Next update will be either on next weekend or the week after because i'm really busy this coming week !


haa 😆
oki I vl wait ..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Niya_789


Main pehle se piti hun😆


really niya
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Posted: 10 years ago
Haan but my doc said me to ignore it coz coffee isnt good for me😭

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik


Waleikum Salaam
Thanks to u for te beautiful comment and i'm the one who cannot stop smiling !
Yes u exactly got the point, we writers r attached to our stories because we ourselves go through things while writing them, for an example when AsYa fought for the first time in this story (when they got to know that there were complications in the pregnancy), just writing that fight had made me cry even when Zoya got her miscarriage, i couldn't write more because i felt depressed we r very emotionally attached with our stories because we kinda made thzm d created them along with the characters
Hahaha yeah ! Because i feel like hugs r very meaningful
Yes thats the point of this story , where i show the journey of a lover who is ready to do anything for his love and is ready to wait for her for the rest of his life and then another who has to fight to get whatever she wants after going through a huge injustice has to make her life back on track
Awww u r so sweet !!


You know while commenting on this story and MY HIDDEN LOVE...i am just feeling something like sad because i didn't got the chance to comment on other works of yours...specially ASYA'S LOVESTORY & STALKER TO SUPERHERO...But coming to the HUGS well i don't know because iam a very reserved kind of a person but i got to know about them while reading stories on I.F and i got to know one thing that A Good Hug will always make you feel like special and can soothe youur pain in tense situations...and yeah a salute to you and all other wirters on this forum who writes such stories...with great conviction...and i just don't know how can all the writers come up with all these concepts...hummm...ok continue soon

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