An Asya OS: I wish.. I could... part 2 @ page 8 -1/8 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: jasminerose

Hey that was really nice.

So cute.
Truly wish that scene happened in the show.😃


thank you so much...


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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
how cute it was!!

paas ho kar bhi hai yeh doori ...

haye ...dreamy**
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: ChocoBerry

Hey Kalyani,

I really wish aisa kuch hua hota toh. But what you wrote was so romantic and i ebjoyed reading it 😃


thank you.. choco...
wish,... any way that is fiction.. so is our writing ...isnt
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: shishiksg

nice kalyani

y dnt u turn this into an TS where v can get a final cnfession of asya feelngs
do thnk abt this n write more plz


thanks dear...

let me see.. if i can write a part 2...😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

Yes Kabhi would have rocked this OS.

Lovely it was Kalyani. Very cute.

Love your font too.



thank you... kabhi.. would have been gr8😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Aneezarp27

Awww...that was so romantic !


thank you 😊

Originally posted by: gowtu

*sign*
Kaash hotaaa. :-(


thank you 😊

Originally posted by: --coolbaby--

So cute os...
Loved it❤️
Do write more


thank you 😊

thank you 😊

Originally posted by: Azraa01

Such a romantic scene, if only we could see it with KSG and Surbhi..

thank you 😊
thank you 😊

Originally posted by: anopama

Oh this was so beautiful

So wish this was so for our asya

thank you 😊

Originally posted by: RAJLUVASYA

Very nice os.
So beautifully written.
Loved it

thank you 😊

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Oye hoyye! Mazza aa gaya! ❤️

thank you 😊

Originally posted by: keyahira

OMG STOP MAKING ME CRY
ITS TOO PAINFUL, BUT I STILL LOVED IT
i dont watch qh anymore, but u know im always here for KABHI
Until Forever


thank you 😊

Originally posted by: princess101

So romantic and sweet loved it

thank you 😊

Originally posted by: jazmeen

Seriously I wish

I wish it was asya
Loved the os

You should have carried on lol

thank you 😊

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome OS
Thanks for pm

thank you 😊

Originally posted by: maha70

Lovely OS..

AsYa ...😳
Miss KSG and SJ onscreen ..Gul messed up original AsYa story...😕

thank you 😊
thank you 😊







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Posted: 11 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

how cute it was!!

paas ho kar bhi hai yeh doori ...

haye ...dreamy**


thank you...😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
part 2: the confession

few of my dearies want me to complete this. .. so here it is... thank you for all your lovely comments... and likes...


as the lips met... they parted too... and slowly caressing the counterparts... as tongue touched, asad body crushed zoya tiny ones...after sometime they broke apart for breathe... only to realise their postions.. and what happened just now.
asad just stood up erect, and zoya followed, adjusted her bathrobe. and the eyes looked up.. with hope...
A: woh.. actually... he started...
zoya felt crushed, and she picked the red chuditahar, and walked inside the bathroom to change...
asad felt frustrated... he could have told her... but he is so lost in her.. and the eyes...he couldnt go past... after sometime the door opened, and she looked stunning.. in his choice.. and he became a statue again in admiration.
zoya saw the looks and blushed for a second, then thought back, she opened the door and went out...

he cursed himself and moved towards the bathroom to get ready for the day.
dilshad and asad joined her together...
D: zoya u look beautifull in this red... she praised...
zoya looked at her with confusion.. and turned to look at asad who hide behind his newspaper.. she was happy that he brought it for her.. yet he didnt give to her striaght.. and loudlt placed . the bread and jam infront of him..
Z: here is ur bread and jammm.. 😡
and she was about to sit, ..
A: i want aloo parootha...
Z: what about ur healthy diet..
A: i want eat.. that too..
Z: No not for you...
A: is it really that bad..😉
Z: Mr. Khan.. u dont know that Miss farooqie can do any job in the world...
Asad just grunted his throat... and she looked up..
A: it is Mrs Zoya asad ahmed khan.. he said looking at her straight... and as she tried to understand the words.. she smiled.. and the she blushed... and silently she served him the parootha... and sat back..
as he ate, she looked up to know his reactions... he looked up..and said,
A: Not bad at all.😉 ...
Z: oh.. really ... Mr Khan...
A: yes Mrs Khan... there he shut her again... and she sat and ate.. and just smiled to herself.. and dilshad smiled looking at her son and DIL.. who were romancing infront of the family. she got up and she said... no evil eyes on you both..
as asad came out the room, with laptop bag, 3 pair looked at him accusingly... and his pleaded..
A: ammi.. please.. only today... as i have important meeting..
D: asad u got married only Yday.. and going to office...
A: it was sudden .. i couldnt cancel this meeting.. the client are coming from outstation...only for today.. he said... and he looked at zoya for understanding...
though upset, she could understand...
Z: ok Mr. Khan... and she smiles.. and he smiled and moved to the office.

Noon;
she lay down on her bed, replying the morning scene again ... again and blushed...
her mobile rang only to see a text from asad...
mrs Khan... be ready by 6.00 pm we are going out...

her heart jumped with anticpation.. and she got herself ready...
by 5. 30 she was ready and sitting out...in the sofa.. looking at the door.. dilshad and Najma smiled at her..
N: bhabhi.. u look pretty.. anything spl..
Z: No.. nothing like that...
N; then why are u watching the door...
Z; woh.. actually..
N: bhabhi... u too... she pulled...
zoya pulled najma for a hug...
Z: ur bro asked me get ready...
N: kya baat hai... bhai has improved...
Z: ofcourse he has too... after all whose husband he is... she declared loud.. only to see asad standing there in door, hearing her declaration loud and clear..
and he just smiled... his tiredness gone...
he placed the bag in the table, and informed his mom that both are going out..

car:
as asad drove the car, she sat silently , but after sometime.. she cant stand anticipation...
Z: mr.Khan where r we going...
A; do have any place u want to go...
Z: u didnt know where we are going.. yet u asked me to get ready...
A; no.. not like that... but if u have some place to go first.. we can go... as being out first as time husband and wife..he declared... and she smiled..
Z: can we go to mazar.. she asked..
A: yeah...
they went inside.. once again at the same place were the met... this time.. there were just sat there and thanked the almighty.. for bringing them close to each other... as asad opened his eyes.. he saw zoya eyes closed... and her face peaceful... he prayed that allah should give them strength to keep her happy always.
after their duas, they boarded their car... and asad drove.. zoya just closed her eyes and leaned back... her heart got the message... that she lives in his heart... as he lives in hers... and she was ready to wait for a life time.. for him to say it..
the car stopped she opened her eyes.. to be at the same place.. where they wished for each other.. under the shooting stars...

both of came out.. and walked together to the top... and stood looking at the sky...
asad removed a cover from his coat and gave it to her... and she opened to see a red heart on the front of the card. with anticipation .. she opened the card to read..
Mrs Khan...

i get so lost in yours. eyes. i couldn't get past woh actually...
so i am hear to tell you what you mean to me...
you will laughing ,...if i tell.. you...
i fell in love with you the moment i saw you... only i didnt realise it..
and whenever we clashed... my heart jumped with joy....
though i know i what i feel for you.. i was scared to accept...
but when i almost lost you in Mangalpur... i know...that this heart belong to you..

but i was scared to hurt you... so whenever you said.. " my heart is a stone... i want to tell you..

ur love melted the stone.. and it beats only for you..

though i lied to you about not remembering the bhaang confession..

i remember each moment of it.. and i cherished it...

when ammi choose you as my bride... my heart cherished.. yet i was scared...

but ammi told me to have faith in me... and in you... and in our love...
i wanted to tell you last night... but couldnt...

all i want to say...
I love zoya... will you be my partner in my life...

Yours..
Asad...

she looked up with tears... and atlast he spelled it..
A: i love you so much... zoya...
and she crashed on him.. and he hugged her tightly... and she hugged him too...
as they cherished their love.. asad nudged her...
Z: what Mr .Khan..
A: it is asad..
Z: asad...
A: u didnt tell me...
Z: what i didnt tell you... she asked playing with his buttons...
A: that.. that...
Z: what... she increased her voice...
A: that u love me too..
Z: dont u know.. she raised her eyes..
A: i know... but..
Z: you took almost 2 months.. so i will take another 3 months.. she said naughtliy..
A: zoya.. he whispered...
Z: i love you asad... i cant live with out you... she declared...
and he claimed her lips... and a shooting star went by... they were lost in each other to wish for something...
as they have each other... forever.. to fulfill their wish...
the end...

Edited by kals82 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Lovely

How cruel of the cv's that they didn't give us such lovely moments
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Just wanna say:

I LOVED IT!
Edited by imcooldude - 11 years ago

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