An Asya OS: I wish.. I could... part 2 @ page 8 -1/8

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This story was inspired by what I saw in yday episode.. saahil sharing the room and their bed. Couldn't sigh over the fact how I much I wished it is asya...

So here is my version of asya...

Asya got married at the end of 10 days challenge.. tanveer accept the defeat and walk out.. zoya is yet to accept the fact she loves asad..


part 2:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/111103793

Asya Bedroom:

Zoya was made to sit in asad bed, and the door closed behind her. She opened her gunghat.. And looked around...she is in asad room... and she is sitting as asad bride.. waiting for him to him for their suhagraat... is this going to be a nakli suhagraat.. just like this nakli nikkah.. she thought..

She got up from the bed, and stood near the window .. and she tried to process everything that happened..in the last 10 days.. she was so happy that bitch is out of their life.. now her thought was what next...?

They got married...she doesn't know what asad feels for her. Suddenly her heart questioned..

H: what do you feel for him..

M: Nothing..

H: oh really.. I do exist inside don't know that.. and I only know how fast I beat when his eyes locks with yours.. and when u accidently falls into his arm..so don't lie to me..

M: may be. I feel something...

H: may be...??????

M: oh stop fighting with me.. he is the man.. he should man up and tell me..

H: why don't u tell him... You know he is emotionally challenged...

M: I am scared... scared if he rejects.. and breaks you.. if he chants it is nakli...

H: but.. u know he hasn't said that in the last few days.. and his eyes.. and his actions.. does say he loves u...

M: yeah I know.. but he is bipolar.. he will become hot and cold in seconds..

H: I know.. what are u going to do now..

M: I am going to sleep.. she decided..

Zoya things have been already shifted to asad room, and her things occupied half of the cupboard. She took her black nighty, and changed in jahapanah bathroom, and did leave a mess inside, by keeping her jewels on the slab, and her clothes on the stand. She came back and looked around, the bed and the green couch. She took the green couch and closed her eyes. As she heard the click in the door, she closed her eyes and pretended to sleep.

Asad entered the room, only to see her sleeping.. he came in determined to spell his feelings for her.. and assure her... but she is already sleeping and has changed from her bridal wear.. he wanted to help her out of the bridal wear himself, if zoya reciprocated his feelings.. he just sighed, and moved towards his cupboard. He picked his white kurta.. and moved inside his bathroom, which looked like disaster for his standards. Yet he smiled, he took all the jewellery, and the bridal dress, and went to their cupboard, and hanged them neatly and placed the jewels in the cupboard. He refreshed and came into the bedroom. With zoya occupying the couch, he settled at his side of the bed.. and his eyes looked at his sleeping beauty.. and by her movements , he realized she is awake. As she opened the eyes, he closed his eyes..

Zoya was used to sleep in king size bed.. and this couch was not for her.. she slowly opened the eyes, to see asad sleeping at his side, she silently moved towards the other side. As she slept, she pulled the duvet over herself, then looked at asad.. Without disturbing him, she pulled it over him.. and slept at her side facing the lamp. Asad was touched her actions. Slowly he turned to see her sleeping peacefully..and she turned in her sleep for his pleasure. he saw a hair disturbing her sleep, he pushed it back.. and softly caressed her face..in sleep she smiled.. he just lied there and watched her sleeping.. the innocence of her face. After sometime, zoya moved closer, and hugged asad like a pillow and dropped her legs over his knees and her head in his chest.asad was stunned was stunned by her action, yet happy. He held her close and closed his eyes.

As the morning dawned, asad was the first one to open his eyes. As the clock struck 4. 30, he looked at his sleeping beauty sleeping peacefully in his arms. He slowly came out of the hug, and replaced himself with a pillow. He moved towards the bathroom, to get ready for the morning prayer. Zoya got up to see herself hugging a pillow.. and wished it was asad.. then she thought, may be placed the pillow in between them.. and sighed. As she got up, she saw asad doing the morning prayer in the floor. She just sat and watched her husband. Till he finished his prayers.

As he got up, she laid back.. and he smiled inwardly and walked out of the room... she got and she did her prayers too.. as it is her first day as Nakli DIL.. she wanted to be out. And cook something for her family. She looked at cupboard to wear something traditional, in that process of search she dumped all her clothes on the bed.. yet she couldn't decide among the 3.. she selected, she left them on top of the heap and went for her bath. Asad entered his room, to see his bed as a mess.. though anger peeped in.. he looked at choice of dress and smiled, it was blue and white anarkali suit.. his ocd kicked in.. and he rearranged the whole thing back.. and he looked at his cupboard.. and took out a red anarkali suit, he got for her sometime back. And placed in the bed.. for her to wear... and he removed the sweaty kurta.. which he wore in the gym..and was inside his cupboard door to select his suit for the day.

Zoya walked out of the bathroom, in her bathrobe , and sang jaane khu... and smiled..

asad turned to see her in a knee length bathrobe.. wet hair... he was so lost...in her.. and he drank the view.

Zoya was unaware of her surroundings, and she looked at the bed to see a red anarkali.. and she smiled, thinkgin her poophi got it for her.. and cleaned the mess she created..as she tunred, she bumped into six packs standing behind here.. and she fall into the bed.. pulling asad along with her...with asad on top her..

Asad looked at her.. it was not the first time.. they are in the psotion, but now. They are husband and wife.. so he looked at the eyes.. which was closed... with hair on top of the face.. he pushed the hair aside with his left hand.. and tried to balance with his right hand.. and pull up.. yet the eyes were closed.. his front of was crushing her front... and his hands caressed her cheeks.. and the eyes opened.

The eyes spoke with each other.. as his hands caressed, her counter parts moved slowly on his back.. and pulled him closer... and his face dipped... and her face shined with anticipation.. and the lips met...

The end...

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jas91 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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such a romantic scene i would have been

awesome work Buddy👏


Loved it❤️
jas91 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Can't believe i m 1st after so long in any story😲 😆

I m think if i m early or others late🤣

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Posted: 11 years ago
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So sweet os
Apt title I wish
Really how I wish to see all this with our asya. Asya getting married in first attempt & OCD khan with his messy begum. All become our wishes.
Yesterday night I read your post I wish & I thought to watch the repeat telecast today noon. As you said I so wish it was our asya.
I am happy that gul learned from her mistake & paired up sahil. I like KV & SJ as a Jodi & actor. But still I can't forgive the cv for messing up asya & finally killing them. That's the main reason I can't watch season 2.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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*sigh* *sigh* n *sigh*...
this wt i could do...
kaaash!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome post i liked it..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely os
asad is now smiling on the mess created by zoya
asya were lovely😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great OS!
Very good loved it. Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Soo sweet OS !!
I wish this was really in the show but alas :(
anyways ,,
do write more Kalyani ,,
u write beautifully (:
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I waa chanting har wish puri nahi hoti while reading it!!
Heart- kash ye hota!!
M- Har wish puri nahi hoti!!
Loved it!!
Heart & Mind conversation!!
was superb!!

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