Th#5 AsYa FF Across The Shadows - Chapter 14 to 17 - Page 68

Hey...

Congo Maliha for being Stunnerz 🥳

Nice update 14
Zoya & asad kissed each other
Asad wanted to confess but zoya left him
Flashback was scary
Nisha mom sold her, zoya believed her
Want to read next update but little scared
Sorry for late comment as I was busy with family in eid celebration
Thanks for pm

It was a sad update
Ibad shah did what he wants to do
Zoya was totally broken after that act
She realised that her home is the safest place in whole world
Nisha told zoya to accept him as she love him & he also did
Zoya called him & he smiled
Thanks

Mindblowing updates...it's giving me goosebumps all the while😳...brilliant plot...beautifully penned...Zoya's past is so damn horrific-still she's being so very strong👏...I feel like beating all such people to death who treat women as nothing but commodities😡...update soon😃

Awesome update
Zoya apologised & asad was relieved that she took first step
She was in asad house & in his bedroom
Naughty talk between asya
Ayaan entered in a story, looking forward to see his role
Zoya wanted to meet his mother before leaving so is he going to Germany or I misunderstood it
Zoya ordered him to come on Skype & he ignored
Let's see what zoya will do with him
I agreed with u that many girls suffered bc of that creepy minds people
I was scared to read that part but u wrote it beautifully that nobody hurts
Waiting for asya convo
Do u have a plan that zoya shared her past life to asad
Plz continue soon
Once again sorry for late comment & Eid Mubarak
Thanks for pm
Congratulations for new thread

Originally posted by: BeYourself

I AM EXTREMELY SORRY BUBBA!!!!!

i was not coming online at all...and i guess you know the reasons...

and apart from all that, my internet problem was also driving me crazy...

but i did read all the 8 chapters that were pending...and also commented on them separately 😳

So... here it goes!!

Comment on Chapter 9 😳

Comments on Chapters 10 and 11 😳

Comment on Chapter 12 😳

Comment on Chapter 13 😳

Comment on Chapter 14 😳

Comments on Chapters 15 and 16 😳

and now...finally i am done with all the 8 Comments!!! Yippey!!!! 🤣

This was my record!!! 😲🤣

Originally posted by: BeYourself

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unres...

once again. i am just too late to unres...

but you know the reasons Bubba...

i had no internet connection...

anyway, coming to the story...

i am loving its pace...

i really wanted Asad to realize his love for her soon...😳

but i had never really thought that his parents would lie to him about Zohura 😲

the Dargah scene was SUPERB!!!!

there are very few people who actually pray for others in their prayers 😳

Asad and Zoya are among them... 😛

Awesome work Bubba...👏

going to read the next chapter..

Originally posted by: BeYourself

Res

unres

Congrats on the new thread 🥳

you very well deserve it!! 😳

for Chapter 10:

sorry Bubba...i hadn't res'd for the 10th chapter

so 10 and 11 comes together here 😳

i liked the fact that Humaira had called up Zoya...that was much needed for her... 😳

Rzia is sooo cruel!!! i don't even wanna talk about her...

but what was Humaira trying to hide??

excited to read more!!

and finally the fall...and the way she sits on his lap ☺️

that was superb!!!

rest comes later... but on this same comment 😉

so scroll down!! 😉😆

Chapter 11:

why didn't you keep Zoya on his lap for some more time?? 😡😆

that scene was lovely ☺️

the way he tried to stop her and was concerned for her 😳

finally she is out of that house... but i am pretty much sure that you have planned for something more evil... 😡😈😆

Awesome work Bubba 👏👏

love you 🤗

now off to read the next one 😉😆

Originally posted by: BeYourself

Res

unres!!!

Awesome work!! even though it's a small part...

you are right...history only repeats itself...

but in the course of its repetition, often a lot of people get hurt who are not even supposed to be hurt...but that's how life is

and Nisha's mom...a suspicious woman she is!! 🤔

very well written Bubba...👏

and i know the reason for you bad mood!!

and i would say, let it go!! 😳

love you darling!! ❤️🤗