Th#4 AsYa FF Across The Shadows - Chapter 10 to 13

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Anitha

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Posted: 11 years ago

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just end this page !

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Anitha

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Anitha

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Wohoo im first..😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#185

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Unres 😃😃

Iloveedd this update!

My favorite part:

"Okay I will wait for you then." He said and she smiled at that before coming out of her car. "Now bye I have a meeting to attend in ten minutes." He excused and she nodded in okay. "And ja, ich liebe dich." He said lovingly and she rolled her eyes. 'Translation= And yeah, I love you.'

"I didn't get anything except ich and dich." She said with a pout on her face and he let out a soft chuckle.

❤️

That was SHOOO adorable!!!!

I just love Asad ❤️

Pleaassee update soon!!!

Thank you ❤️

Edited by -Pyaar- - 11 years ago

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shreya mehra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#186

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CHAPPI 11

AMMI MERE LOVE BIRDS KI DUSHMAN HAYYE HAYYE😡

temme a thng..y dnt UUU like thm romancing..har tym kabab mai haddi bn jati hai😡

i love the way he tried to STOP her...he was so concerned fr her😳...

she like being cared..n PROTECTED by asad...😉

zoya was so CONCERNED of everyone thnking..wen she vl tk tis step..its so obvious..very nicely written👏

n so happy that she is out of that HOUSE...

bt i KNOW u very well..

u must have PLANNED sumthng very bad fr her...🥱

bt rite now m very HAPPY fr her😃

AWESOME chappi

off to nxt chappi

love

SHREYA😉

Edited by shreya11mehra - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

#187

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Congrats on the new thread 🥳

you very well deserve it!! 😳

for Chapter 10:

sorry Bubba...i hadn't res'd for the 10th chapter

so 10 and 11 comes together here 😳

i liked the fact that Humaira had called up Zoya...that was much needed for her... 😳

Rzia is sooo cruel!!! i don't even wanna talk about her...

but what was Humaira trying to hide??

excited to read more!!

and finally the fall...and the way she sits on his lap ☺️

that was superb!!!

rest comes later... but on this same comment 😉

so scroll down!! 😉😆

Chapter 11:

why didn't you keep Zoya on his lap for some more time?? 😡😆

that scene was lovely ☺️

the way he tried to stop her and was concerned for her 😳

finally she is out of that house... but i am pretty much sure that you have planned for something more evil... 😡😈😆

Awesome work Bubba 👏👏

love you 🤗

now off to read the next one 😉😆

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Anitha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#188

Res😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Awesome Bubble 😊

Forehead peck was cute 😳

The moment he comes near her, Zoya tries to run 😆

Lol I love zoya's expressions when Asad speaks in German

She forgot about his party 😕 but glad she's gonna attend it in spite of some other commitment 😊

Looking forward to the Party 😃

Oooh and the flashback was nice 😊 So that's how zoya ran from home !!!

Edited by potternerd - 11 years ago

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-AppleOfMaEye-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#190

oh this Man,.. knows how to cover up th things,..🥱
suddenly flipped what he said,..
and i just wonder what do you mean by: which made her realize that she was sitting in his lap and that too in an inappropriate manner. ☺️

Peck on for-head?? 😲
The Man is really cute n quick,..😆

and Zoe is all controling,.. giving a tough time to Asad,..
both having busy schedules,..
buh zoya would pull out time,...
and finally she left that torture cell,..
loved th update,..

Edited by -Maliha- - 11 years ago