Th#5 AsYa FF Across The Shadows - Chapter 14 to 17

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-AppleOfMaEye-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#631

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

not you --- actually I don't know 🤔🥱

why you always feel bored, while talking to me???🤔🥱

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treasure11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#632

Originally posted by: maha2012

it helped me catch someone doing hanky panky🤔🤣🤣

Its not good to catch people doing hanky panky 🤔🤣🤣

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laks_vish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#633

did she see Asad's childhood pictures? great update Ms..Cliffy!!

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madhvi4gurti

@madhvi4gurti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#634

thnk u bubble for this wonderful update!!! it was much needed after the last update!

loved the conversation btw asad n zoya...it was normal and well fun!😃

zoya teasing asad was adorable...at least now she will have someone she can share her feelings with without thinking abt being judged bt him...👍🏼

she is ordering the Asad Ahmad Khan!!!😆...eager to knw wat she wants to talk abt!

update soon!

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Heena

@aarzoo50

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Posted: 11 years ago

#635

Can i say... 'MOGAMBO KHUSH HUA' ??? Although i m not Mogambo but mai phir b khush hua... 😆
lovely update...
happy happy moments wala...
Zoya went to his home... jhalli hai... jb bola jana tab she said no n ab khud hi chali gayi... for a moment i thought she came back to India cutting short her trip... but then git it in ryt sense...
i always love their convo vd each other...
i loved the lines asad chose to narrate to her from the book... they were awesome...
so asads family comes into picture...
ayaan his mom n dad...
i hope they dont create any lafda between AsYa...
is zoya going to tel asad about her past??? n if yes thn when???
about skype call reason... sonch k bataungi... i hope this sonch comes into my mind before ua next update comes up... 🤣

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Alone111

@Alone111

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#636

I love dis asad... He is sooo cute nd naughty...
Loved phn conversation b/w Asya..
Awe so hai ;-)
Ayaan n entry maardiii hmmm
Asad wants to meet dill before he leaving
Hope he ll go with zoyaaa

Amzng updt
I loved it
Continue soon

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#637

res for chapter 15, 16

unres!!

Now, go to the next page for the links of my previous comments 😳😆

Here i am... back with my comments for the last two updates 😳😆

chapter 15 was all about reality!!

to be specific, the harsh reality that you were talking about!!

one has to lose something in order to get something..we all know that... but people like Mrs. Saxena and Ibaad Shah are the sole reasons for which humanity is almost lost these days among people...

whatever one loses, self respect is the last thing that one can afford to lose...and Zoya had to lose that... it must have been extremely difficult for her...

i just wish that whoever suffers from such an incident, may God give them that courage to fight back and rise again, being all confident and strong!!

after all, that wasn't anything of their fault..

and talking about Zoya, she had no other choice other than leaving her house...

i don't really believe that 'Home' is the safest place... it wasn't anything like that for Zoya... deception can come from anywhere and anytime!! even when one is within the safe boundaries of her house...

Zoya was responsible for her condition... but she had no other way out too...

people like Razia, Mrs. Saxena and Ibaad Shah bring in such fate to a girl...

Shameful... yet very true!!!

beautifully written Bubba!!!👏

Hats Off to you!!!!👏

you are truly a mindblowing writer and definitely a blessed one!!😳

and coming to Chapter 16...the telephonic Conversation was AWESOME!!!! 😳

Zoya did rise up like a strong girl again!!! 😊

i want the next part super soon!!!! 😳

Love You SOOO Much!!! ❤️🤗

Edited by BeYourself - 11 years ago

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ak020203

@ak020203

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Posted: 11 years ago

#638

Wow back to back updates..

Loved it..

Asad ignored Zoya s order.. wonder what will happen now. .

Thanks for updating

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sanah12

@sanah12

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#639

Hey sis how r u?? Sorry that I couldn't comment on the prev update...
Coming to the update is was Awesome!
Loved it loads!!
wow zoya is at asad's place and in his room!!
Asad was really shocked and surprised
Just love that part where it slipped from his mouth that what r u wearing 😆
I'm so happy that zoya wants to give a chance to their relationship
I really loved their convo it was nice
I'm wondering what zoya wants to talk about but I loved the way she was ordering him..
How dare asad ignore her orders? Asad get ready to be punished by zoya..
Do continue asap
Maybe like u can update tomorrow plzzz pretty plzzz *puppy face*
Thanks for the pm..

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asyanadasya

@asyanadasya

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#640

wow... that's what we call an update... happy 😊😊 that atleast they cleared there misunderstandings... i think zoya wants talk t asad about zoasad may be... she saw some pics of her.. and him frm childhood in his room...

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