Th#5 AsYa FF Across The Shadows - Chapter 14 to 17 - Page 69

Originally posted by: BeYourself

unres!!

OMG Bubba 😲

i didn't expect the kiss to come so soon...😲☺️

but i am so happy that it came 😳☺️

poor guy Sunil 😆

but i can't deny that i really loved Asad's mischievous nature 😉😆

and then the way he held her close and kissed and nibbled her neck

and finally the kiss!!

thank god that i am late this time...coz it would have been absolutely impossible for me to wait for the next chapter😆

i'll stop here now...coz i am going to read chapter 14 now 😉😳

Originally posted by: BeYourself

Res

Unres!!

Congrats on the new thread Bubba... Very well deserved!!! 👏

First of all... i would really like to mention that this chapter has made me feel some mixed emotions...

the romance in the beginning made me feel like it was some fairy tale...

but again, when Prasad knocked at the door, reality knocked in too..!!

Zohura was so naive back then... and it really hurts when people like Mrs. Saxena take advantage of girls like her...

spectacular writing Bubba!!!! 👏

you are simply Awesome...and i have no words to explain how much i love you for coming up with such amazing concepts!!

can't wait to read the next, though i know what is going to happen to my poor girl!!

Originally posted by: BeYourself

res for chapter 15, 16

unres!!

Now, go to the next page for the links of my previous comments 😳😆

Here i am... back with my comments for the last two updates 😳😆

chapter 15 was all about reality!!

to be specific, the harsh reality that you were talking about!!

one has to lose something in order to get something..we all know that... but people like Mrs. Saxena and Ibaad Shah are the sole reasons for which humanity is almost lost these days among people...

whatever one loses, self respect is the last thing that one can afford to lose...and Zoya had to lose that... it must have been extremely difficult for her...

i just wish that whoever suffers from such an incident, may God give them that courage to fight back and rise again, being all confident and strong!!

after all, that wasn't anything of their fault..

and talking about Zoya, she had no other choice other than leaving her house...

i don't really believe that 'Home' is the safest place... it wasn't anything like that for Zoya... deception can come from anywhere and anytime!! even when one is within the safe boundaries of her house...

Zoya was responsible for her condition... but she had no other way out too...

people like Razia, Mrs. Saxena and Ibaad Shah bring in such fate to a girl...

Shameful... yet very true!!!

beautifully written Bubba!!!👏

Hats Off to you!!!!👏

you are truly a mindblowing writer and definitely a blessed one!!😳

and coming to Chapter 16...the telephonic Conversation was AWESOME!!!! 😳

Zoya did rise up like a strong girl again!!! 😊

i want the next part super soon!!!! 😳

Love You SOOO Much!!! ❤️🤗

Originally posted by: -Maliha-

why you always feel bored, while talking to me???🤔🥱

Originally posted by: -Maliha-

res

😲

i can't be first,..🤓

unres


first of all am again loving th chapter,..
and th way story is moving ahead,..

The kiss was perfect,..like frstly he attacked,..
and when he wanted to speak up his feelings,..
zoe let it go,.. and took him into kiss again,.. 😆
braber ka muqabla,.. 😎
but that prashad just destroyed it,..
and that Zoe's bursting up,.. stupid cow, can't confess,..
might be cox of her past,..and her career,..
and linked this whole thing to stupidest thing like punishment???😲😡
feeling bad fah Asad,..he must be feeling guilt riding him,..

I so knew that Nisha's Mom,..has something wrong in her,..and here it comes,..
she is such an evil witch,..😈
feeling bad fah Zohurra,.Zoya,..
i so want to read Asad's BG,.. like his family,..
as you mentioned in beginning about him not goint to visit his family,..despite of being in th same city,..and that too afta soo long,..

i just loved it,..th way you described Zoe taking out her anger,.. just loved it,..❤️



SuperLikes,..

Originally posted by: -Maliha-

res
and i thought sunny spoilt it,..🥱

but thanxGod,..

unresd

Oh,.. i expected this one,..
Ibad Shah,.. like many dogs out in th so-called safe world,..
they think,.. everything in th world hasa price,.. and its true,..a bitter yet unnegotiatableable truth,..

once i read Ranveer singh's iv,.. and he was sharing his experiences of entering b-town w/o a godfather n links
and he goes k these harrasments are not only limited to grls now,.. even guys have to face that too now,..🤢,. that may easily tell that whats happening BTS!

you have really shown that all black world hidden behind th silver light,.. with awesomeness,.. thas commendable,..
i loved th way you portrayed Zoe's condition after that incident,.. felt really really bad fah her,..

hope so nisha knows what her bitchy mom did in past,..
she is playing cupid her,.. buh now i have no good in me fah her,.. am nomore liking her,..

th only happy thing is k finally she called Asad,..
he is all blaming himself till now,..
but thanxGod she took a step,.

update was sad,..yet awesome,..
loved it!!
it was indeed a

Originally posted by: -Maliha-

unres


so th wait is over,..
and finally zoya called him,.. and thought to give their life a chance,..
Asad's rudeness was expected,..
and i wanted him to show alil more anger,..😈
cox she was really on fault,.. and she hurted him like anything,..

she knows how she may please him,..😆
she was in Berlin, in Khan Villa and more specifically in his room,..
@the v.moment what he wouldnt trade off to get zoe in his room and that too in her night clothes,..😆
bichara sitting in India helplessly, imagining love of his life, on his very own bed,.. feeling sorry fah him,, 😎

and that story humming to doze off was a sweet thing,..❤️
zoe dozed off before asking book's name,..
buh i wanna ask that which book was that? or you made it yourself,..😆

fianlly ayaan is here,.
n hope so now whole khan family would be too,..
and RAK would be here too,..
and am glad here Asad hates dillu more than RAK,.. 😎😆

i loved this dominating Asad,..😳😆

and

1. might be she wanna ask that what he always keep on ranting in German,..poor guy,..
2. or might be where are his night clothes which he used to wear in his house,.. so she may grab 1 and hug it while sleeping,..
3. or might be she wnna show him that how she looks @ night so that he may have a better imagination,..☺️
4. or might be she got to know smthing bout Zosad,..
5. or she wanna tell him about her past,..😒
6. might be she got some of his pics,..want to ask about his past,..
   

many other things are coming in mae mind,..but...

Originally posted by: Linsie

... not Zohura... ok but maybe asad young boy picture..which he
look chubby 🤣

maybe zorro is there 😈

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet

😆...
we hav a common thing

Originally posted by: Amulya9

aww..

thanq ..love u tooo

okiee..bt those lines r really amazing ...

nice guess...😛 is it right ?..by now she must b knowing the meaning of them .😛..

i wish IF provides multiple hitting like option fr ur FF ..i want next update asap😛😆