Th#4 AsYa FF Across The Shadows - Chapter 10 to 13

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Nitya Suresh

@TheAutumnFizz

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#741

OMG OMG OMG !!! They kissed!!! Yayyayyyayyy!!!

Poor Sunil!! Haha..

Amazing update!!! Loved it..😊

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Saima Syed

@Saima-Syed

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#742

Brilliant update...but did u stop there...I wanted to read on.

Loved the teasing and the smoke of jealousy that surrounded Asad.

And finally they Mwah

Loved it as always

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kalyani

@kals82

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#743

this is a mind blowing update... bubble...

asad showed sunil his place..

and the dance floor was awesome.

he is tyring to pull her out... and i am sure he will with time..

he is a determined guy...

and ofcourse i liked the jibe.. somthing in ur teeth...

then the awesome conversation.. and the then kiss...

u rock buddy..

my like button prolem.. so count me in ur 150+...

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961111

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#744

unres!!

OMG Bubba 😲

i didn't expect the kiss to come so soon...😲☺️

but i am so happy that it came 😳☺️

poor guy Sunil 😆

but i can't deny that i really loved Asad's mischievous nature 😉😆

and then the way he held her close and kissed and nibbled her neck

and finally the kiss!!

thank god that i am late this time...coz it would have been absolutely impossible for me to wait for the next chapter😆

i'll stop here now...coz i am going to read chapter 14 now 😉😳

Edited by BeYourself - 11 years ago

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ishka virani

@LilApple

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#745

m loving it
as much as macdonald burger
sooo
muccchhh

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laks_vish

@laks_vish

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#746

my my mindblowing...Love your writing bubble!!...not fair you have to complete tomorrow...too romantic!

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Pasya

@Pasya

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#747

they finally kissed...
too good part...
thanks for update...

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Abi

@-ABI-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#748

Awsome chapter
I just loved it.

Both Asad&Zoya 're Jelous
and the KISS, I love u Bubble for that KISS.
hope u'll make Asad to say: ''I Love You Zoya."on next chapter.

thanX for PM
&
CONTINUE SOON

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life4me

@life4me

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#749

Omg they kissed.

Loved it.

Continue soon please.

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aashiqua

@aashiqua

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#750

Superb...and poor guy...Sunil...and the kiss...plz let them completely enjoy d moment before lashing out at each other if u r planning for something like that.. .